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Messy, very messy

It's really confusing and the plot is incoherent.

The protagonist is not suitable to be the protagonist, but the protagonist is good

The subject matter is good, but in Chapter 8 of a sect leader, he was so criticized when he followed someone else's house, and was considered a loser by others. It was not popular at all... I was speechless. Who would be a loser who said he wanted to build the strongest sect?

It's written incomprehensibly and completely out of context.

Looks like I have no clue, it's so confusing

I don't know how to explain it, and the dialogue is also awkward. Compared to the ancient mythological characters, they are all modern. For a minute, it's so superhuman that I didn't even have the slightest sense of empathy. After a few words, I didn't want to watch it anymore.

The hot chicken protagonist has an unclear realm and lacks decisiveness in killing. Spicy Chicken Articles

Many chapters don't match up, and it feels like it's just pieced together. Before I finished talking about this thing, I jumped to another thing, just like a math problem. Only answers, no process.

The main character is rubbish and the plot is here and there. Stop writing

Page 14, Xia Guolai attacked your sect and you let go of the protagonist, the Holy Mother. You were not at all murderous and decisive, but others bullied your sect. It was no big deal just to throw others out.