Something Seems a Little Off About My Lord Career?

Except for the occasional fluent sentences that affect reading, it is a good book. It can be seen that the author has ideas and is making progress. We will always give the greatest tolerance to authors who have ideas. This kind of realistic Lord Rebirth story is very immersive.

It can be seen that I have thought carefully about it, and it is the most comfortable Lord's article at present. The introduction has been simplified, and you don't have to think about the features, right? [Laughing evilly] Do you have a fan base? After reading the latest update, this is probably the best one I have read in a while. I originally wanted to read the textbook and listen to the book at the same time, but I will read it carefully for such a high-quality book. In addition, the content behind it has already made me feel brain-burning. I really read it carefully. And now I have a little headache. The authenticity of the lord's novels is what I pursue. I will think about relevant issues when I read the book. For the lord's novels I encountered before, I always complained in my brain while reading them, but the author did a good job. I see some people say that this book is long-winded, so I think this book may not be suitable for you. The first-person perspective and character emotions have been substituted, which makes the narrative not limited to the lord and data, but also thinking about more comprehensive issues. It's really interesting. When I first read it, I just felt that the author was very serious about thinking and loving these things. Later, I started to think about whether the author just collects materials and writes on a daily basis, and combines games and work very well. I think it can be called dedicated. Because I am also busy with my studies, I find it difficult to do this, and therefore I admire the author even more. In any case, this is the first book that I can have such a deep understanding of after reading more than fifty chapters, and it is also the book I have commented on the most. I hope that when I read this book next time, I will still have this kind of experience, rather than the excitement brought by the novelty [like], or not reading enough books.

I really like the type of lord, it's really nice.

Damn, the author is really talented. This is the best main plot and dungeon story I have ever seen written in the lord genre. The interweaving is very smooth. The communication between my characters and my own leadership are very good. It can be said to be a lord novel on the upper level of Tomato Chicken. It's only a matter of time to come on and renew the fire. Tomato has already recommended it to me, so come on! How dare you read the novel? Don't code well! Wow, come on, come on, come on, the author especially likes to read it.

Great novel. The differences from other novels are as follows: 1. The male protagonist's results are achieved through operation, and he makes good use of his foresight advantage, and all operations are reasonable and reasonable. Unlike some novels (whatever appeared in XX place in the last life, I must get it. What beautiful goddess in the last life, I PUA first.) It can be seen that the advancement of technology is planned and accompanied by adaptability. 2. A civilization with distinctive characteristics. The characteristics of each race and civilization are very distinct, and the strength is balanced. It does not mean that the protagonist is invincible based on which angel or skeleton he draws. The dragon alone is powerful but difficult to raise. The tree man has high defense, magic talent, and powerful throwing but lacks movement. The protagonist's advantages throughout the entire process lie in his ultimate firepower technology and excellent strategic deployment (his performance in the dungeon clearly shows that he has a lot of brains) 3. Villains and supporting characters with brains. Obviously, many lord stories want to highlight the nb of the protagonist but the author has no brains, so the supporting characters and villains are all made up, like bots, they are stimulated and then ridicule, make faces, become impossible, and exit. This book has obvious advantages in combining vertical and horizontal aspects, but its failure to defeat the protagonist is due to empiricism errors. 4. Combination of hard knowledge and reasonable imagination. For example, technological civilization creates spears, which are destroyed when attacked. Magical civilization creates a shield, and defense is destruction. A great self-explanatory idea. There are also introductions to shelling and the like. I haven't seen any mistakes so far. The author is very rigorous.

This book is a farming style. The protagonist has his own independent judgment. It is not a cool novel, so the protagonist does not behave against the will of heaven. The protagonist has a long development process. I think this book is suitable for people who are slow to read.

It is rare to be rigorous. The setting is nice in the back and interspersed with the main text to be smoother. But if there are too many settings, the main text will be less. I hope it can be balanced or add more words to make the plot richer. I hope the author can stick to it and keep the plot smooth but there is too little.

I feel very good. I have read several books about lords. This one is one of the few with a clear setting and a grand scale. It opens up a large worldview in the early stage and leaves a lot of foreshadowing for the later stage. I hope the author can keep writing. Also, I asked for the group number of the book club, but I couldn't find it after searching for a long time.

This is a lord farming (technical innovation?) Article, What makes it different from many previous lord stories that are the same is that it doesn't have any rankings (I think this is okay), and the protagonist is so defiant that he gets the first place perfectly every time the era/level increases. Other lords also have their own wisdom. This is not a harem novel. Although there are descriptions of female characters, it is not a harem. [Laughs and cries]. The characters you have worked so hard to cultivate in the dungeon (you can take them back to your own territory when you reach a certain level), but the system always confiscates them. The protagonist is not omniscient and omnipotent. There are descriptions of small characters in it, which are quite real. Wow, why do you write it here first as if you are writing a Chinese composition with me?

It's pretty good. It's quite difficult to mix a lot of things together and it's worth watching. It can be seen that the author consulted a lot of information when writing. Come on [smile] By the way, let's see how long it took me to read the latest chapter (there are many concepts in this novel, so I have to read it slowly) Can I see the reading time when adding a book review?

Not bad, not bad. Don't go too fast and make a good outline. Come on😊 Very good. Why only 6.8 Points? [Anger]

This book feels very real. The overall framework is great and the world view is complete. But in terms of content, describing everything in detail will make people feel cumbersome and readability will decrease. I hope to focus on the content so that the story will be more fluid and attractive.

The author is very clear about his positioning. This is a civilized novel, unlike other novels that have some intrigues. Farming is clear, writing is clear. It's very comfortable to read.

The writing is good, although the score is not very high now because the mechanism has been changed. After a while, it will be over 9 points. If the author maintains a good pace and writes more about farming, I will probably give it over 9.5 Points.

Currently: Very detailed data-based article Except for a few paragraphs that are a bit awkward to read, the overall look and feel is very good. The narration in the copy is concise and does not feel like it is procrastinating. The data description and viewing perspective description are both excellent. Tomato's rare high-quality articles

After reading Chapter 80, let me know what you think. Advantages: The system is rigorous and complete, you will not kill indiscriminately if you have extraordinary power, the extraordinary and physical power are balanced, the protagonist has a normal mind (the author has a normal IQ), the leader is rigorously constructed, and the arms are reasonable and mutually reinforcing each other. Disadvantages: Nothing exciting, the whole process is mediocre

Yes, this is the only lord farming novel that I am following. For those who have not played Stars, Civilization, Total War Warhammer, and Age of Ice, reading the article may be a bit confusing and not that profound. But it will be better after about 50 chapters. It's not like other articles start to paint a picture. The details of the wars in the late colonial era (200 chapters onwards) are fascinating. Well thought out, stitched but feels good. It feels good after the second swipe. Although I understand that I am busy with work, I beg the author to update it as soon as possible.

1. The writing is very good, and there are no particularly unreasonable arrangements. There are more than a hundred chapters in total. 2. It can be seen that the author is still a little unfamiliar with describing large scenes. The first script was a bit messy and made people feel dizzy when reading it. The second script was a little better, but why did someone suddenly like it? 3. The update speed has been accelerated. I've finished reading it. Many of them are reference games, but the data can be compiled, which is pretty awesome [Thinking]

Lord's Wenli is an absolutely good book, with enough details and writing style, the development is not laggy, and the world view is equally interesting. The small number of readers is just a matter of push, and there is no problem with the author. Books of this quality can definitely go to the next door. Seeing that we are in the middle of the fifth era, I have to take back my previous evaluation, which is still a bit delayed. Especially since entering the fourth generation, there are fewer descriptions of technological advancement, and the growth/daily life of characters has emerged in large numbers. This can only depend on personal taste. For me, I lost all interest in the plot after Sky Island by the beginning of the fifth era, because there were too few battles.

Not bad, one of the few novels in Tomato that has rigorous logic.

It's okay, but I personally like more serious development stories, and I don't really like this kind of romance with too many daily fun things. The previous rhythm is very good, not too serious, with some daily embellishments. The recent chapters have combined changes with daily life and have lost a lot of seriousness. Maybe it's because there are more women? I don't reject the idea that writing the heroine and the harem properly will make the work more interesting. It's better to be more serious when developing the story.

This book can be said to be one of the better lord articles on Tomato. I like it in every aspect - the advantages of this book are self-evident: excellent rhetoric, appropriate development, unhurried pace and abundant imagination, etc., Are all plus points of this book. However, there are also many shortcomings. For example, there are often language errors, or too much rhetoric is used, resulting in a chapter without any substantive content, which seriously slows down the rhythm of the plot! Of course, the biggest problem is the author's update speed. One chapter a day is not enough to read. Let's just say that it may be difficult to be short and concise, but it is not difficult to manage large quantities. In short, I hope the author can work hard.

Very well written! Does the writing feel like an epic written in prose? It's very distinctive and has a calm sense of grandeur. As long as you are involved in the male protagonist's camp throughout the whole process and read it with your brain, it will be a great read! The perfect cure for the phobia of lack of vitality (whatever). The romance part is a bit messy and hasty, but lowering the requirements is not particularly harmful, and skipping it will not affect the reading. The key is that the career line is really beautiful. It doesn't matter if the romance is not well written. Later, the author changed the writing method and there were no female protagonists. It looks good whether it's a copy or everyday! However, in the later stage of development, the male protagonist's appearance rate is actually average, and the presence of the entire force is stronger in the later stage. Personally, I like the author's way of switching perspectives. He puts the perspective on the people at the bottom of the foundation. He can see the event process in a three-dimensional way from the downward perspective of the leaders on both sides and the upward perspective of the executives. Then he scans the whole story from the sidelines. It is very real and allows people to immerse themselves in the narrative (I would like to call it an advanced form of cool writing!!), And it is natural and does not feel abrupt. The author's narrative skills are really good... The only drawback is The update is so slow——! ! ! After reading the previous one, I almost forget it! This narrative style is definitely difficult to write, but I still want more articles to read QAQ There is also the author's level of naming... Well... A title that is hard to describe in one sentence. Although it is not in line with the current fashion, the writing style is not a very popular type after all. Putting the two together is very suitable. If the popular title is used with the author's unique writing style, it will not have the same flavor. Anyway! Great article! Come and get in! ! !

It feels like the author writes wherever he thinks, without a specific outline. The writing style is slightly cyan. Generally there is no problem, some details need to be optimized. Overall, this book can be rated above nine.

The content of this book is worthy of its rating. It's just that the front copy is a bit lengthy, but the writing is still readable. There are no major flaws. The author's attitude is also very positive. If there are typos, they will be corrected immediately.

A good book. This is a lord's farming article written in pursuit of authenticity. Although it adopts a "whole people" approach to create it, it is not a purely enjoyable article. The routines in "All People" are relatively simple, with luck, tips, and doubled resources. These three things form the thinking of most "All People". Therefore, in many "universal" articles, what you see will be the system that the protagonist has alone, or the incredible luck, or the resources that trigger 999 times the critical hit, while others basically rely on luck. But this book is different, relying on wisdom, experience, and systems. A book that starts from the pursuit of authenticity, race chooses human beings, starting from the first sprout of life under water, to the giant beasts of the Stone Age, to the first human walking upright (laughing), Starting from spearmen in the Stone Age, it pays attention to a realistic system and unit combination. For Age of Empires 4, Civilization, and even some players of P Society, this book is quite high-quality (I think below). Although he is not a war criminal, this kind of traceable steps and growth is quite to my liking. The author's writing style is also of high quality, and it is a more overall description. If the brainwaves are correct, this book will undoubtedly be an exquisite dish. Why not a feast? Maybe you will ask this. Because I saw this book too early, there are only 200+ chapters (laughs), which is not enough!

The setting is excellent, rich, and rigorous. Just like Total War Warhammer is more fun than Total War Three Kingdoms because it is richer. However, the expressiveness of the text needs to be improved. Halfway through the reading, I felt like I was reading a setting collection most of the time. It was interesting, but the story needed to be combined with my own brainstorming to better present it. Fortunately, I have played Civilization, Stars, Total War and other similar games. Otherwise, it may be very distressing, and the plot has no climax or explosive point (I have read half of the current update). It seems that the author is also the first book, and the future is promising. Please give me your support.

It's well planned, the ideas are clear, and there are occasionally complicated descriptions, but it doesn't affect the reading experience, or it only slightly affects it. As a senior bookworm, my advice is that you can eat it with confidence

As an old reader who got into the book very early, I have to say that this book is actually quite good. But what is undeniable is that the intermediate development process seems to be a bit too long. But speaking of it, I still like the style of the first 200 pictures. After all, the pace is much faster than later. I can only say that it is well written, but it is indeed a bit too long. It is recommended that you have enough time and patience to watch it.

The story is indeed interesting. After reading it, I also want to play as a lord in Civilization VI. Regarding some poisonous points in the comment area: 1. The protagonist never died in the early battlefield. But if the main character is lucky and well-prepared as the reason, I can accept it. 2. There are some outrageous inverted sentences in the front, and the confusing word order is a bit uncomfortable to watch. It makes me wonder if the author has been writing English compositions before writing this novel. But apart from the emotional scenes, the story was quite interesting and made me keep watching. 3. The author's emotional drama is really abstract. It should have multiple female protagonists. Now that I have seen the second dungeon, both dungeons have plots in which the protagonist rescues the heroine and helps her save the world, and then both have plots in which the heroine inexplicably falls in love with the protagonist one-sidedly at the end. The protagonist is like a scumbag, he doesn't express his opinions or refuse, and I haven't seen it yet, maybe there will be something about the Shura field in the harem? The following content does not count the emotional line, but it still deserves a five-star rating.