The Proficiency Panel Explodes in Cultivating Immortality

Seriously, you are not suitable for novels about cultivating immortals. Why don't you write a novel instead, a duel between life and death? Why did you wait so long and just kill him? Just ask, write a lot of ramblings, is it so easy to practice Qi to build a foundation? I'm too lazy to talk about what you wrote. I'll give you five stars and stop writing.

Earlier I said that I would not be able to get out of the mountains, but later I would be in all kinds of troubles.

The author's way of writing is worse than writing about local characters to get a panel. A time traveler who has read novels is so careless and stupid (Tiantian thinks that he needs to be stable but just rises to a few small realms and is faced with everything). Facing a family town with foundation-building ancestors everywhere, it is embarrassing to not go to other places to change his name and surname, and only come out to pretend to practice Qi after reaching the golden elixir. The character of a transcender is that practicing Qi will offend the foundation, and building the foundation will provoke the golden elixir. This kind of panel writing is so passionate, so don't use the time traveler template. The author might as well write about martial arts, Qiankun, and Lin Dong to get the panel. The type of golden finger is very different from the protagonist's character. However, the protagonist is always reminded that before time travel, he has read a lot of novels about cultivating immortals.

If you imitate Goudao-ryu, just imitate it well. The result will be the Holy Mother and Tianming-ryu.

I only read chapter 31. I'm not in the mood to watch. It's obviously a show of wisdom. A group of melon-eating people have been grinning there. It's so embarrassing. The battle is actually turn-based. Don't make the immortal cultivators look so stupid. Don't make the protagonist so devoid of scheming and ambition. Very unappetizing. You can make the protagonist kind, but don't make the protagonist understand nothing. You must know that a time traveler has a strong basic sense of safety. This is a world of cultivation where the jungle is strong and the strong eat the weak. There is no sense of precaution at all.

Why! With almost a hundred chapters, it can't even get a rating, and the number of people reading it is pitiful. The panel appears three times in one chapter and is too watery. Do you need fireball lighting to dig a mine? You learn spells too quickly! Is it complete in one chapter? Those who didn't know thought it was a cool article about the system! There are high-level monks in the mine, but they don't know that you have a space ring hidden on you? The content is too much and unreasonable. There are many more that I won't go into. It's not unreasonable that no one will see the ratings. After reading a few chapters, I can't tell how poisonous it is.

The writing about cultivating immortals is the same as that of the Jiangmen sect. I didn't expect it when I first started transporting ore. There is no space ring or storage bag. It should be so basic and so many people give it to me. The protagonist has mastered so many complete exercises, does he still need to find a place with many people to practice? Aren't you looking for trouble? It's better to practice in the mines. There is enough spiritual energy and there is no shortage of resources. Besides eating almost nothing, isn't it wonderful? The cave doesn't look that big according to the description. It's been demolished and renovated, and the traces have been eliminated. The most fake thing is that when the protagonist casts a spell in the cave, he is convinced that it is not as powerful as outside. The inside is still more spiritual, so how can it not be as powerful as outside. The protagonist gets an alchemist, and it turns out that he can cultivate with spirit stones, [thinking][thinking][thinking][thinking]

I'm speechless. You can develop secretly. Why do you arrange so many women? It's okay to practice secretly. There are only 100 spirit stones in the city. It can save a lot of trouble. You have to arrange to form a clique. Is the foundation building level so weak? What's the difference between it and Qi training 90%? Just drive screws, it's not suitable for writing a book

It's so fucking fake. With Lao Liu's set of skills and the vision of modern people, if you don't pay close attention to your cultivation, your liver will be cultivated. Running around and returning to the liver emperor has nothing to do with it. It's just that if you are in danger, just practice. This is what anyone can do.

Speechless 😓 Dead! He also said that modern people and people who don't know how to defend themselves will attract hatred, and they try their best to send

In other books, the Foundation Establishment Realm can only float to the sky for a short period of time. In other books, the Foundation Establishment Realm can release spells at will, but in this book, the Foundation Establishment Realm can release a spell for more than five seconds and a few minutes. . . Can't stand it

Stop writing and find a class! What the hell did you write?

No wonder there are no ratings. Those who rob mortals in the world of cultivating immortals still need spiritual stones.

Some holy mothers dare to save people if they don't have the strength Speechless, so poisonous, is it okay to be so naive and childish?

Stop writing about time travellers... I'm really speechless...

Isn't it okay to buy medicine for early practice? Also waste time refining medicine.

There is a reason why books are not popular.

Not pretty at all

Be aggressive at the beginning, okay, you successfully persuaded me to quit, there is no other way, I have to give you at least one star, otherwise I will fight even less [vomit]

The foundation is established, and the lifespan is still more than eighty years.

The dark style of immortality writing, the endless path of cultivation, the enhanced system bonus skills, the plot is like looking for a godfather, this godfather is a concept

F*cking slap in the face It looks a bit strange [laughing awkwardly][laughing awkwardly][laughing awkwardly]

Very intellectual, not strict at all, and always controlled by others. The fighting method is too monotonous and rough, not like cultivating immortals, but more like martial arts, so I gave up.

What the hell are you writing? After building a foundation, it can't compare to the lifespan of Qi training, and it can't fly.

This is my first time. I'll give the author one star. It's so naive.

He died from the poison and couldn't bear it.

As soon as we came down from the mountain, the Holy Mother broke out. Are you cultivating immortality or taking your children to the end of the world?

Cultivation is still a game?

The male protagonist is simply sick! So what does Our Lady do? !

Go into the factory and drive screws, you are not suitable for writing novels