What Should I Do If the Script Is Messed Up?

I'll comment after I've finished reading it! Disadvantages: too little and not enough to see Advantages: The writing is very good! ! ! It is without exaggeration the best book I have ever read! ! ! ! No grammatical errors! ! ! It reads beautifully and smoothly! ! Both the plot and the emotions are very logical! ! ! Everyone's ending is reasonable and could not be more reasonable! ! ! ! I attach great importance to logic, so reading this novel is really comfortable [crying][crying] Characters are not just black or white! I think it really brought the character to life! ! The characters are very full and rich! ! ! Final summary: It is the top 1 book I have read in my life! ! ! ! Zundu likes [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] very much I read other people's book reviews and some said they were incapable of love, some said that the old matchmaker Gong and the original heroine felt awkward, and some felt that Gong Shou's feelings were inexplicable. I want to express my understanding of the plot and emotional logic (I also hope that readers can read the book carefully and smooth out the logic instead of giving low scores. This book is really good!) First of all, the first point: I have no ability. I was an ordinary college student before I went through the book. I traveled to ancient times and didn't know traditional Chinese characters. I couldn't write brush calligraphy and I learned it all over again. It's the most normal thing to write the protagonist as a genius as soon as he learns it like other novels. An ordinary college student (emphasis added) is not specialized in related subjects. It's normal to not have the ability. To be honest, many protagonists in the novel about passing through books directly fill up their skill points, which is even more outrageous. Don't read it if you like cool writing. After all, it's not a brainless novel. The second point: The matchmaking part between Shou and the original heroine felt awkward. The first reason for the matchmaking was because the original heroine was reborn and turned dark. She was afraid of getting into trouble and chose to follow the plot. The second reason was that after traveling through the book, she had no sense of belonging. She thought she was in a fake world and treated the people around her as paper people. Therefore, the matchmaking process can be seen from a plot subject who dreamed about his death in his previous life. Only here did he understand that Shou is dead in the real world and cannot go back. The reality of traveling through the book gradually formed. After all, everyone's ability to accept is different, and as mentioned in the plot later, Shou agreed to live with Gong ostensibly for the sake of matchmaking. In fact, it was because she had a crush on Gong and wanted to get close to him, so you can't just read the book at the surface. Shou's true intention was not to be a matchmaker. And in the last part about amnesia, I saw that the author also explained why the matchmaker was involved. Shou was out of consideration for Gong's safety, and was afraid that he would be in danger because of himself. The third point: Gong and Shou's relationship issues. Let's talk about Gong's aspect first. The first time Gong saw Shou when he was drunk, he was both taking advantage of and interested in it. Shou was interested in Shou's lie and was told by Lin Yue that Lin Yue told Gong that he wanted to give it away. The development was very reasonable. He didn't fall in love all at once. Who didn't become interested first and then slowly develop feelings for each other as they got along? Moreover, the author also wrote about the progression of interest from Gong's perspective when he first met Shou and when he met Shou for the second time. As long as you read carefully, you won't say that it was love at first sight. And even if it is love at first sight, it may not be unreasonable. Are there no examples of love at first sight in reality? Then let's talk about Shou. It was true that Gong was drunk at first because he looked similar to the person he had a crush on in his previous life. But after he sobered up, first Shou realized that Gong and the person he had a crush on in his previous life were completely different except for looks. This is written in the book. Secondly, Shou's love for Gong also gradually formed. There is no such thing as a substitute, because Shou knew from the beginning that Gong was different from the person he had a crush on in his previous life. He could tell them apart. Moreover, I have never been in such a situation where I suddenly think of the person I had a crush on in my previous life when I feel like attacking. I wrote a lot. . No one should be able to finish it. . But it's true. . I hope everyone can read books more carefully and not let good books get buried!

Suddenly I discovered that I could rate myself! ! ! Hahaヾﾉ≧∀≦)o I'm disappointed~~but I'm very happy to have finished writing this story! ! ! Thank you for your comments! ! !

Great! How do I put it? This book takes political chaos as the main line, supplemented by the protagonist's emotions. The characters in it are well-shaped, such as Qin Mo. Although he is not a particularly smart and strategic character in the plot, he showed great talent at the last moment and is very powerful. There are other characters, all with different but distinct personalities. I think the plot is the best. The emotional lines of the protagonist and the supporting characters are not so inexplicable, but very thin and long. The battles between various political powers in the plot are also very ups and downs. There are all kinds of pretending to be pigs and eating tigers. The writing is also very good. It's really awesome, but the ending is a bit short. I could write a few follow-ups about other characters, such as Qin Jiang or the protagonist's love life (I personally like to read it) To be honest, I have never understood whether Lu Mingxiao and Fu Qinghe really love each other (°ー°)

It's not long and the overall story is relatively simple. The main character just saves his life and then follows the script to get CP. Then the script goes awry and he falls in love with the original male protagonist hahahaha. The pace is very fast and the things that need to be destroyed are destroyed immediately without the overwhelming sense of procrastination. The characters in the whole story are well portrayed by the author and most of them are vivid and three-dimensional. Xiang Shen Shen, especially the two characters Fu Qinghe and Ning Wang, are so full of tension that I still have a lot of fun watching it. I just feel that the ending is a bit rushed and could have been written a little more, but it is okay at this point. It feels like there is no extra story and no happy ending and dumpling making scene. I want to see Duan Hui'er, Shen Xingyun, Gu Zihao and the protagonist meet again.

Not bad, Qin Mo thinks a lot and wants to do a lot, but he is not good at hiding it and Gu Wangshu sees through it every time. Gu Wangshu often sees through the dark side but doesn't reveal it, watching Qin Mo move closer to him. The endings of the male protagonists and the endings of the supporting characters are left to our own imagination. Like a fairy tale, the prince and princess lived a happy life, leaving unlimited room for imagination.

First of all, it's not as ugly and long as other articles🍅 It's quite short, so I enjoyed watching it. It's just that the emotional line is a bit stiff, but overall it's pretty good. I think the rating is ridiculously low, so I gave it five stars, but it's still worth about four stars.

The content is unique, the language is humorous, and the plot logic is smooth. It is one of the few books on Rotten Tomatoes that I can finish reading! At least it's much better than those essays with scores above nine! Finally, I would like to add that although shou is weak, it is not really weak. Those weak shou that are not feminine follow the general routine of Feng Wen.

I didn't expect Lin Ci to be an undercover agent. In fact, what I wanted to ask was whether Gu was Ye Xuan. . Otherwise, "feel like old friends at first sight" came out very strangely. I feel that there are some holes that have not been filled in, but it is not a big problem. In short, it is still highly recommended.

The author's writing is very good, but the ending is too rushed, and I haven't read enough (this is why I gave it four stars). Aside from the rushed ending, the characters in the novel are well created, with distinct personalities, and the plot is well connected. It's very good! The key is that the author's imagination is so great. If it weren't for the fact that the big boss behind the scenes was Lu Mingxiao, he wouldn't have expected it until the end.

It looks good, but I feel like the ending is not strong enough.

I almost got caught by Laoban with his cell phone just to read this book, it's so good😭

Great, I like it. I hope the author can work harder and write more and better books.

It's very beautiful and the writing is very good. Don't be scared away by the low score. Everyone, I hope the author will write more extras. I look forward to it.

I finally saw a story with two male protagonists in 🍅, where the protagonist's IQ is online and the plot is reasonable. It's just a bit short and not enough to read. [I'm about to cry]

? ? ? ? At the end I always felt like something was missing.

Come on, great author

Not bad, pretty good

Not enough, not enough at all [adoration][adoration][adoration]

So sweet ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Twisted into maggots on the bed! ! !

Why couldn't I have met you earlier Three times, I really like it

Beautiful, so beautiful! ! ! Even if the hero loses his memory, he will still fall in love with him again. There was almost no misunderstanding between the two of them, Tian. It is too sweet! ! !

How nice. The male protagonist is broken by you [laughing][laughing][laughing] Hey! It would be nice if there was a side story to go back to modern times and continue the relationship

It's not bad, but the ending is a bit rushed. For Tomato, this book is really good.

I read it in one sitting, two words, it's beautiful, I love reading it ￣ ￣)σ

The content is compact and not procrastinating, and the details are also very good. When I saw the end, I felt that the ending was incomplete. The idea was actually very good, but why did the ending end so hastily? Many things were not explained clearly.

It's very interesting, no misunderstanding, pure sweetness, but the ending is a bit too fast, I didn't realize it.

Fast pace, perfect ending

What can I say, it's pretty good-looking. I just don't know why I felt so bad after watching it [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] I always feel a little upset. Although it is indeed he, I still feel a little bit sad [crying]

Why are so few people reading such a well-written book?

I like this kind of short stories very much, and I feel much better