Minamoto Era

The writing is pretty good. The author's writing style is not top-notch, but he writes it with great care. I haven't read a mindless novel for a long time. The IQs of the protagonist and villain are online, the protagonist is decisive but not murderous, and the writing also has a sense of humor. I suggest you play with some jokes, don't go too far, it will be too abrupt, and add a little more to add a bit of interest. I also hope that it can be written as a team. This is just my idea. The author does not need to follow my opinion. I just think that the team is more powerful, and I prefer team writing. I hope the author will keep up the good work, and the best thing is not to end it. The author's first book was already unfinished.

It can be seen that it is really well-intentioned, and the author's level is indeed quite good, but the updates are really too slow. Although it is said that good things take a long time, sometimes it is updated every ten or twenty days. This is really unfriendly to readers who are chasing books. This may have dissuaded three-quarters of the readers. Otherwise, it should be quite popular. After all, the settings and writing are okay.

Comprehensive evaluation: It's okay, it can be read, and it meets the 9.2-Point standard. Deduction points based on 9.5 Points: The setting is a bit immature, the "heroine" has a sisterly personality, and the plot didn't give me the feeling that it looked good (that is, it wasn't amazing). If you are short of books, you can take a look. If you are not short of books, you can add a bookshelf first and wait for the lack of books to take a look. Although it is not a high-quality product, it can still pass the time. I still maintain my original review, but I feel like I can't stand it any longer. (Here are the reasons) This book was written by the author in order to export his own values ​​and criticize social phenomena, so the pace of the story is slow and half-hearted, and there is a lot of space to repeatedly talk about his values ​​(If you can do good things, do good things, the freedom of the strong should be bounded by the freedom of the weak, do what you want) This is the key point. I can accept writing it once or twice, but I keep changing the method over and over again, using different methods and different stories to write about values in a simple way (simple meaning is that what he is saying is too easy to understand). It's like a person keeps telling you that this is right, well, this is right, you should do this. Although this value is indeed in line with the core values of socialism, it also makes me feel awkward (do you think I don't know this is right?). I am not antisocial, nor can I not understand this sense of justice. Male protagonist, the protagonists in most of the novels I have read before do good deeds when they can, but the difference with this one is that they did not reflect afterwards on whether I should do this (this author likes to reflect after writing about doing good deeds, asking himself whether I should do this, and then I want to do this). The expression was too deliberate, which made it awkward for me to watch (like we all know that the protagonist is a good person, and then the author keeps repeating that the protagonist is a good person, the protagonist is a good person, the protagonist is a good person), and yes, it is also annoying. I can only say that the new author is still too immature. He wants to write well but his expression is too deliberate. He is so eloquent, so eloquent, and this empty truth shocked me without concealment. It gave me an intuitive feeling like a childish child showing off his three views (values, life, world view). It is still the same sentence, it is too annoying and embarrassing. My evaluation is the Great Principle Edition Jiahao. (Don't say that I don't understand the author. I feel like him so deeply. I once thought about writing a novel to express my three views. Not to mention the plot, what I wrote must have content that I find annoying and embarrassing now, because my purpose is the same as him: I want to export my three views, let others agree with me, and let them know that I am "right". Such a purpose is too strong and I have no writing experience. It is really difficult not to have the problems I mentioned. Plus, the plot is not fast, and it is even harder to watch.) After all, it's still a problem for new authors. So I suggest you watch it first, and if you can't stand it, stop watching it, and don't embarrass yourself.

Book review, there are many details that need to be read carefully. The author has also dug a lot of holes. Most of them have been filled in at present. After writing so many chapters, the name of the protagonist has not been revealed. I think when the protagonist says his name, that part is absolutely special. The author has created every character They are all very interesting, the language of the article is fluent, and the key points can be grasped when describing things. The article is not procrastinating and does not feel lengthy. With more than 400,000 words, I feel that I have just started writing it and have not officially entered the main plot. I feel that it has been written a little bit. However, the length of the article is short and concise, and it is worth reading. Opinion, I feel that the fighting scenes are not as well grasped as the plot. I suggest that the author can watch fighting videos or fighting terminology. Also, I think that I can add self-development on the original skills to have more skills and smoother picture descriptions. In this way, I think The fighting scenes will be particularly exciting. For example, the clone of Thunder and Lightning can be developed. It will explode directly after being attacked. This is not very pleasant, but overall, this is a rare and good book. As long as you keep updating, I will keep following you and I will also help you recommend books. Come on! I hope your writing will get better and better! ! Let me ask you a question. When you are reading a book, have you ever met the kind of person who feels like he knows everything and can point out the world? They say that the author's writing is not good, that this writing is not good, that it should be written like this here, and that should be written there (Author: Come on, I'll give you the pen and you write). I don't know how long they have been reading the book? When I read their comments, I felt a sense of superiority. Why? I have only been reading for 10 years, and I am considered a novice in reading novels. The people around me are all people who have been reading novels for more than 20 years. They have spent their entire youth reading novels, which is beside the point. Those who point the way to the country, then you really point the country. You just stated the problem, but your questions are still mindless. Even if the questions you ask are reasonable, why are you so awesome? Why don't you just ask the questions and not solve the problems? If you scold the author and only talk about the problem but not the solution, what is the difference between this and scolding?

It's a pretty good book. Its genre is a bit like "Nine Stars Poisonous Milk" and "There's a Ghost in My Body". It has very positive values ​​and I felt particularly comfortable after reading it.

This writing is good, slow-burning, and the protagonist's powerful source makes people feel comfortable. I hope the author can be more perfect and careful. I hope the author can summarize the character's skill details every fifty or hundred pictures, so as to avoid confusion in the later stage to a large extent. In addition, you must be careful about the plot and details. Many novels are ruined by small loopholes in the plot and the ratings are lowered. Some readers with obsessive-compulsive disorder will even criticize and give low ratings at once.

It is well written and self-contained. In the process of depicting the characters in the story, it reflects some real-world phenomena. What is commendable is that it establishes positive energy and positive spiritual power. Thank you writer.

Really beautiful Not mindless anyway Relaxed I haven't commented much after reading about 10 chapters. Come on, writer

I have seen more than 300 chapters. The author writes very seriously, with reasonable logic, foreshadowing, and foreshadowing. The development of the plot and the words and deeds of the characters have reasonable explanations. The information that the characters in the book can know is also isolated as much as possible. There is no God's perspective on the pig's feet, and the author does not use it to make the words and deeds of the pig's feet. The most rare thing is that this book seems to be discussing with readers the way people get along with each other, between the upper class and the lower class. It has the ideals in books and news broadcasts, and more realistic human nature, which is consistent with current social phenomena. I secretly believe that if you want the character to be vivid, you should actually stand in the character's perspective and let him live, think, and make choices for himself, which can also resonate with readers. Finally, I would like to make some comments. The handling of dialogue between characters in the book is slightly lacking, especially the few scenes of dialogue between characters, such as the banter between Li Tianyuan and Chu Miao in Chapter 338. The information revealed is very important, but it is embarrassing. Alas, I have never seen the big shots, so I don't know if they are old and dishonest. It can be foreshadowed through the perspective of a third person that Li Tianyuan is a supporter of Bai You.

I have been reading this book for 7.8 Years, and this is my first review. The subject matter is very novel, and the content is also very good. It can be seen that the author is very careful in conceiving and creating. With pictures and other things, it instantly makes the picture feel. Come on, author. As your first book, I hope it won't be unfinished. Haha.

Come on, author, this book is really excellent on Tomato, and the characterization is also very good. I hope the author can continue to work hard, and don't be discouraged by the current low score. A good work is not afraid that no one will like it. I hope you can survive the clouds and see the moonlight. Come on!

The article is fluent, the author is active, the pictures and texts are rich, and the rating does not need to be SSS, but A, B, and C. Although the background and protagonist's identity are a bit clichéd, and the plot has minor flaws in some places, it's not a big problem. I rate it four and a half stars in my heart, five stars depends on what is written below.

I have been reading novels for ten years, and this novel is definitely a qualified urban novel. The character of the protagonist is very comfortable to read, and the time structure is relatively complete. Especially the pictures of the source beasts are surprising. However, the quantity and quality of the source picture holes are not perfect, but the author should have already had an idea, so I recommend it. The author must persevere.

I have been reading it for two days. It is very well written. There are few works that make me want to keep reading. The logical conception is very reasonable and not brainless or unpleasant. It is expected to become a masterpiece. Believe me, you will also like it. Come on, author.

It's well written and quite interesting. It would be better if the protagonist's background setting was simpler.

This is my favorite style of those with the ability to control beasts. I hope the author can continue to work hard to create. The aroma of wine is not afraid of the depth of the alley. One day this book will reach the top of the tomato list [Like][Like][Like][Admiration]

It's not bad so far. There are some contents that rarely appear in fantasy. The author is very careful [to learn]. Although reading novels is generally just to satisfy some fantasies, I think it's also good to think about what you can learn after reading it or if you can think of this part of the plot when you recall. (Belated five stars, secretly added [full])

It's very good, it's logical and practical, and the setting is good; but I think there should be reservations about the source image, and will there be a combination or the effect of the entire source image in the future? It can be said that this book is just getting started. Good luck to the author.

The plot and overall framework of this article are flawless, the writing style is moderate, and the setting is novel. Niche themes (liangcao🌿) can also produce results on other platforms. Especially with pictures! So touching [cry][cry][cry]

It's quite a book. I've read it for more than 500 hours and highly recommend it. The author's logic is still very strong. It's not a brainless novel. You can feel the protagonist's progress little by little, and the details are excellent. There are thoughts on society and an analysis of human nature. It's a book with a relatively deep connotation. The world view is also relatively novel. It is the first time I have seen this upgrade method. It is relatively new to me. I have read a lot about other upgrade methods. I recommend reading this book. There are many beautiful pictures in it, which can enhance your imagination when reading the novel. It is still very considerate. Overall, it is a good book. Book friends, hurry up and read it!

Compared with today's Tomato novels, the biggest advantage is that all characters have brains and are illustrated. At the same time, the combat depictions are wonderful. They have a witty fighting style similar to JOJO, and also have the exhilaration of common fights. The plot logic is reasonable, and the character portrayal is also very good. It has the potential to be adapted into comics or even animation.

The writing is very good, the subject matter is novel, there is a promotion system created by myself, and there are various pictures that are edible. I'm just a little concerned about the heroine's life experience, which I feel is a bit toxic (personal experience, don't comment if you have different suggestions, thank you)

New authors, please leave a review and encourage me. It can be seen that the author is very careful, there is nothing poisonous, and the story structure is also very reasonable. It can be said that the results of this book are not ideal, but I still read it carefully. Let me tell you my opinion. First of all, this is a newly set theme, especially the illustrations of the source beasts, which are very novel. This is also what attracted me to look at it. Secondly, let's talk about the areas that can be optimized. First of all, the origin beast, as a vicious beast, is not comprehensive enough in setting. For example, how large is the territory of the ferocious beast and what does it feed on? Whether the meat of ferocious beasts can be eaten, whether the fur can be made into clothing, etc., These settings are not comprehensive enough. As a result, many times the protagonist kills the source beast and burns it directly. This is not good. Wouldn't it be better to eat it? Also, in terms of plot, the sense of immersion is not very strong. This is just a feeling. I don't know exactly why. Come on [like][like][like]

The character design is very good. Everyone acts with their own purpose. They are not reckless. Even the villain has his own thinking logic. The character design is very full and the protagonist is very decisive. Especially the reflection and reflection on some social status quo in the article are also very attractive to me.

This novel presents many of the most authentic human nature in reality. People who understand it will think this novel is a fine work. People who don't understand it will only think it is a novel that is not exciting. This novel shows the most real side of human nature. Just like that sentence, reading may not be useful, but reading can give us more choices. I read a lot of the latest reviews. Originally I didn't want to read this novel, because the previous reviews were all two-star and one-star negative. I thought it was a bad novel. The book was out of stock, so I tried reading it and it seemed okay. I can only say that in every novel, there are people who understand it, and there are people who don't.

It can be eaten by humans. This book can be called an excellent granary. It has no poisonous or peeing spots, and there are pictures to read it. I will review it later The advantage of the book is that in terms of plot, it is not biased like other books that only write about battles or daily life. It is the kind of writing that is evenly written, very realistic when loosened and tightened, and its daily descriptions are very graphic. The characters in it are flesh and blood, and the villains are not brainless. Each character has its own characteristics, and the image does not appear to be a popular image. The emotions are very delicate, and the holes are basically filled. The key is to have pictures. This will save some of our ability to imagine the monsters and focus our mental attention on the plot. OK, let's talk now. The shortcoming is that the emotional explosiveness of the writing style is insufficient. People say that the knife is not sharp enough, but it is more natural. It will not turn very suddenly like other novels and suddenly give you a kind of sensationalism, but its explosiveness is the main force. My natural explosiveness will be slightly inferior, but I feel that it is better to keep it now, otherwise it will be very abrupt. Oh, the standard of this explosiveness is that the knife is not sure of the knife. I am the kind of reader with delicate emotions, and I can really cry while reading. Another advantage is the setting of this book. The framework of the world is very reasonable. Remember, it is very solid, and it is reasonable to increase the combat power level. The opportunities are not like those that suddenly make you complain and get angry while walking. There are many sources. The harvesting method of this equipment is still very reasonable. In the end, I have more than 6,000 hours of reading time. I can be considered a little boss. I feel that what I said is more pertinent. If you have anything to add, please do not comment.

The ideas are clear and there are no poisonous points. I am used to reading fast-paced and refreshing articles. It is good to read a slow-paced one occasionally [shy] [shy] [shy]. The author is great. I hope to stick to it [thinking]

4 Stars, I'm currently reading Chapter 2. Overall, it's okay, no matter the plot, character description, or plot. But there are also shortcomings. For example, the failure of this article is that high-grade raw beads can be used at no cost. It's just one level higher than burning the original image. If you have a level 9 player at home and give your children a bunch of level 7.8 Players, they will be invincible. Also, advanced does not describe ordinary. I deducted one star from you because in Chapter 2, the free country broke out with contempt and belittled your decisive killing. Generally speaking, the new author is awesome and not brainless.

I like it, I like it, there is no NT cannon fodder, there is no weird ambiguity. Moreover, the male protagonist is a lone wolf and has a bottom line. Isn't this exciting? Hmm... And a cute little dragon. Moreover, this book is not simply refreshing. It gave me the illusion that I might be cheated on. It is a really meaningful book. You won't suffer a loss if you watch it, really, I believe it, buddy. (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

It's not bad. I've read so many books, and now I like to read something new. And the protagonist's character suits my appetite. It's not the cliché of bitter hatred, crooked war god, and bloodthirsty. It's very comfortable and natural. Anyway, I have read more than 70 chapters now, and it feels a bit like reading published novels in the past. The two reasons for giving five stars are that the book is indeed good, but the number of people reading it is a bit small, and I am afraid that the author will not update it. Like some novels that are very good at the beginning but end hastily after more than one million words. What a pity.