Traveling Through Time and Stealing Pens, They All Collapsed After Pretending to Die.

The plot is very satisfying and the logical thinking is quick and clear. Little Moon's transformation from knowing nothing to having the truth come to light vividly brought the character to life. How cute and excellent the little moon is! ! I not only like his personality, but also his innocence, protection of others, and enthusiasm. The other characters have distinct and full personalities. I really like this book! ! ! I hope the author will continue to work hard! Come on come on! Go, go, go! ! Please continue serializing and completing this little book that brings me joy and interest! ! ! Please🙏🏻Dear author, I really like this novel [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

Every chapter is not worth missing. The character descriptions are very detailed. Each character has his own unique characteristics. He is a really loving, protected and strong protagonist type🤤🌹

It's really beautiful, beautiful and strong, YYDS, it has the feeling of SM. I have repeatedly experienced the mess of the protagonist being abused, and I feel sorry for the protagonist group, but I insist on going on. Of course, the protagonist is very powerful [Adoration] Love is miserable [admiration]

It's really beautiful, I'll update it soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Perfect! ! ! ! [Adoration][Please update] I don't know why the rating is so low? From my point of view, this book has at least 9 points. Is anyone deliberately lowering the score [what]? The character is not broken, the sentences are coherent, the organization is clear, and it is tangible... [Blow a kiss] And this setting is too exciting for my hobby! ! [Full] Be sure to update soon! ! ! ! [Almost crying][Crying][Please update]

It restores the original plot and also restores the character's personality. I like it very much and hope the author can keep updating it.

The character setting is very interesting, and the original characters are well designed! The flow of the plot is very interesting, and the occasional foreshadowing makes people can't help but keep reading! ! I'm really looking forward to the scene where Kiyohiko is caught (?)

This book is very good, and it is relatively good in this genre, especially the character design of the protagonist is relatively good and the character of the little brother is not broken (so far), but there are relatively few chapters. At present, the author has dug a lot of holes, and I hope that the author can fill them in the end. Come on😊The author is waiting for your update (ω< )★

I think this is the best one among the tomb robber fanfics [Adoration][Adoration] I always skipped pages in the books I read before, but I didn't skip pages in this book at all. I finished reading them all [crying][crying] I'm really convinced. If your writing is good, I can still score points, but your article has captured my heart. I can't, not at all [rolls eyes][rolls eyes]

I've finished it four times...[Crying] It's really beautiful. It was also very sad. I cried every time I watched it. I never got tired of watching it. Later I saw the little moon next to Jiang Xu. I was very happy. After all, we were celebrating the New Year together. But someone got into a fight in the comment area and the little moon didn't appear again... Respect you, respect me, respect the moon

The content structure is clear and I personally feel it is quite good. The characters are more three-dimensional. The characters are not too bad, and there are few ooc plots. I really like Kiyohiko! ! ! ! ! ! ! Ahem, the author thinks it's so obvious to me, right? There's nothing wrong with anything else, it's really a bit short. People like me are not suitable for writing. If you keep doing it, you will lose interest in it after a few days. So, author, please keep updating! ! ! ! ! ! ! [Punch out] [Punch out] [Punch out] [Punch out] It's really not enough! ! ! ! ! I will always support you, come on*^O^* I give you five stars, not afraid of your pride. I just want to see the plot of Kiyohiko being beaten. I am bt. Ah, my little moon~

It's so "sweet", author, where are you? I'm coming to find you. Little Moon is really miserable, I was tortured to death, my heart aches, wuwuwuwu, my little moon, why are you dead? [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] Well written (not recommended if you are controlled by the protagonist)

After reading this book, I felt so tortured, physically and mentally tortured, it really hurt my heart. I'm going to take a break, but it's really good to watch. I feel that when the author described the torture scene, he combined all the factors very well. In short, it looks good and has the right flavor. In the end, the protagonist died, and I was really in pain.

It looks so sweet and feels as sweet as eating a whole bag of rock candy. There is nothing cruel about this book, so it is suitable to read before going to bed. The author's writing style is also good, and each character has his own ending. It is really suitable as a bedtime story.

It's super beautiful, the writing is very good, and the story has a strong sense of immersion, but the sense of immersion is too strong, and it's a bit sadistic. The past of the moon was so tragic. It turned a young boy with a bright and beautiful smile into an indifferent boy with blood on his hands. The boy had the shadow of many people, but not his own. Qi Yang is also very pitiful. Although many people disagree with this, it is undeniable that if the moon does not destroy this family, maybe Yang Yang can help the moon to kill the Queen Mother of the West when he grows up. But if there is no if, if Shen Zhuan is not destroyed, the Queen Mother of the West will definitely trap the moon through Shen Zhuan, so Shen Zhuan's demise is inevitable.

Kiyohiko is the moon, he is bright and sacred, strong and gentle, and occasionally as naughty as a child. But such a person has experienced a lot of suffering, but fortunately he has forgotten all that. Unfortunately, he finally thought about it again. Maybe it's fate, maybe it's fate. He can't escape. He couldn't even make a promise to his little brother that he would remember forever like Wu Xie. I feel sorry for the moon, every character is very independent. They all looked like real people, acting out a vivid story where I couldn't see them.

Alas, after chasing it for so long, I realized that I didn't write a book review. Super cool, but what's going on with this increasingly sad(?) Sense of déjà vu. Daily question, have you added any updates today? Super super super beautiful! ! ! But the little moon really makes people feel distressed, oh oh oh oh [crying]

This book is so beautiful. What should I say? Every character in it is very vivid and vivid, and the writing is very good. While the writing is good, the characters are not OOC, and they will not make another character OOC in order to highlight a certain character, just like what they are supposed to do. The characters are full and interesting. There are many foreshadowings in the text, but I haven't finished reading it yet. I haven't seen it, and then vividly wrote about the amount of brain power the author used when writing this novel. The novel is so good, so, um, it's really good to read.

Too little, not enough to see! I have a feeling that we will be tortured later Don't take it off the shelves

I read it in one go. It's so sweet that it makes my mouth water [smile] The characters in it are well created. For example, the character Qi Yang, you don't know how to describe this person. You say he is hateful and deserves to be scolded and killed, but everything he does is strangely reasonable. You said he was pitiful, for a reason, for a reason, but he made Little Moon suffer a lot and even lost his life. He should hate him, but he shouldn't either. In short, people have different opinions. Some people scold him, and some people don't understand why they scold him so fiercely. It is impossible for everyone who knows this character to have the same views and understand each other. Little Moon was originally just an ordinary high school student. Without this time travel, he would have been a pampered child at home. Endless darkness and torture caused this young man with a bright smile to go from life to death. In the end, he thought he was free, but was rescued and forced to live and suffered all kinds of torture. Don't encourage others to do good unless they have suffered. To be honest, if it were me, I would not be able to survive long ago. Let alone massacre his whole family, I would not even stay in Qiyang, so Little Moon is not cruel, he is too desperate and hateful! He shouldn't have to bear all this! It's time to read the next book [smile]

I really like this book!! It's so well written, but it's too short at the moment, with only 45 chapters [crying] I saw there was a big sword after the title of the novel, I was looking forward to it but I was scared jpg. What's wrong with the 6.8 Rating? A 6.8 Rating for such a good book is too much. Please give it to me.

Very nice, cheers to the author Little Moon is so miserable. I hope the author of the second part will treat him better.

I like Kiyohiko very much, the character is well created, the little brother and the blind man are also very good to him, tsk, I am more or less envious of him I don't have any big requirements. I just want the author to be able to update it stably. Four pictures a day is pretty good. How sad is it that I just updated one when I saw it yesterday? ! You don't make it! You make nothing! When I saw that one, my heart ached! How could you do this to me! How could you! I'm really, really heartbroken! Oh, forget it, I don't love you anymore after all.

This book is the most interesting one I have ever read among pirated fanfics. Little Moon made me cry to death, and Qi Yang was also upset with me! The author has also published a second part, and I am really looking forward to the subsequent plot. Sisters, go for it!

The writing is very good and the content is very good. Except for a bit of a mouth-piercing, everything is normal. The main character was constantly injured at the beginning. Anyway, it made my heart twitch after reading it, and I felt like I was going to have a heart attack. But it's really good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, very good-looking, very good-looking, very good-looking, very good-looking, very good-looking, very good-looking, very good-looking, very good-looking [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] [][][]

It's really good [crying] It's rare to see such good fanfics It makes sense, we have to score points, otherwise there will be nothing behind [I'm about to cry]

It's very beautiful. I didn't expect what Little Moon went through. From the plot point of view, Little Moon's subsequent blackening is traceable, so the author, please be nice to Xiao Liang. I really cried to death!

Zundu looks great! ! ! At the beginning, I just had the mentality of giving it a try, but the result was beyond expectations! ! ! The characters are all very nice. Little Moon Zai Zai is really... It was too hard in the early and late stages... Fortunately, I was very happy when I stayed with them... [Laughs] [laughs] I'm not very good at writing final comments... In the end, it's my old-fashioned way. I wish the author a lot of trouble! ! All the best for my readers! ! ! The cubs in the book have a happy life! ! ! !

It's so short, I'm so heartbroken when I watch it [cry][cry][cry] I am afraid of the pain of pressing my legs, but in order to let Xiaoguan and the others go, it doesn't matter if my legs are broken [crying] [crying] [crying] In the front is the sweet breath of life, and in the back is a thousand arrows piercing my heart [crying], just like what Qi Yang said in the extra chapter, "Because sweetness is too sweet, bitterness is "It's especially hard when I'm here." Author, how come you are so good at writing [cry] [cry], you know how to make our life worse than death [cry] [cry] It hurts my heart [cry] [cry], you really make me love and hate you at the same time [cry] [cry]. Okay, after finishing the writing, I can still read the story. The characters are distinct and distinctive, and there is no OOC. They are sweet and sharp, and there is also a second instinct to connect them.

It's really tear-jerking. I cried when I saw some of the scenes that were a little bit too sharp, but I couldn't stop crying when I saw the later ones. It was so brutal! It's really too sharp! 😭😭😭 However, the author's writing is very good and the plot is exciting.