How Did Saving the World Turn Into One Massive Love Rival Showdown?

The writing is not bad, but the rhythm control is not particularly good. I personally feel that the description of some conceptual disputes is not particularly clear. For example, the protagonist and Han Yicheng, Han Yicheng's end was a little too hasty. After the protagonist argued with Han Yicheng for a few words, he was directly offline. The description of Han Yicheng was also a Qianqian son, but later he was found to have turned into a lunatic. Although he knew what the author wanted to express, it felt a little abrupt. Maybe we can add some memories or small things in the city lord's palace to set the stage. If he really loves his wife, he will never stop communicating with her for decades. He can be described as a maniac, a real madman. His current behavior, I think more things can be described to show his determination. Otherwise, compared to the person who did such a thing, his feelings will be a bit lighter. Because I have a rather heavy taste, I think the characters have more prominent personalities. The author doesn't need to care about my opinions. I just think the pace is too fast and the characters are not very full-featured. At the same time, the protagonist is a little embarrassed from the perspective of justice, because the protagonist has a sense of diaosi, a unique sense of frivolity of modern people, which makes people not have that more upright feeling, so when the protagonist says sentences such as "Are you going to sacrifice the happiness of these disabled people for the happiness of those people, it will actually be very embarrassing." In the context of the Southern Continent, this city is already considered a paradise, and the souls of people with disabilities really don't matter. Therefore, when the protagonist has never experienced the suffering of the local people, it seems a bit elementary school for the protagonist to say such things. Of course, the protagonist, as a Confucian scholar from the Eastern Continent, has not experienced this kind of hardship, so he does not understand it. If he said this, I can make sense. The author deliberately arranged it and pretended that I did not say it. But overall I feel pretty good, and the future is promising. Come on, author.

It's pretty good-looking, nothing sinister about it. The following is a personal impression. At first, because the male protagonist was portrayed as a bit too much of a gentleman, I thought he would be Liu Xiahui, but it didn't take long for him to be rejected due to various reasons. Looking back later, I wonder why the male protagonist can seduce so many women. Isn't that weird? Is it a pure central air conditioner? If you think about it carefully, it seems that if it is not like this, it is impossible to cause the Shura field (this evil Asasi)... It is purely a personal opinion. If a newbie feels that there are elements that are objectionable, it is recommended to watch it first before making a comment.

No, I think it's really good, but maybe a little slow. The author can actually write a first-line branch type article, and he can come up with a few more characters to enrich the story, and he doesn't have to be in love all day long.

It's pretty good so far. Keep it up. It won't be a problem to keep your current writing style popular. It would be best if you follow the trend and add some AI pictures or something. The minimum rating is 9 points, but it doesn't matter if you don't match it. I have a lot of AI pictures [smile][smile][smile]

This is one of the few novels I have read that has a good plot. The author should continue to update. It is not enough to read. Don't write it down.

Keep writing, it's great!

Great, come onヽ(爱´∀'爱)ノ

Yes, there are many descriptions of psychological activities. Each character has his or her own characteristics. Not bad, not bad. A little short. New books tend to be unfinished. I hope the author will work harder.

Nice!! This first comment is dedicated to you. Don't stop updating!

If you write according to your own ideas, you will already hate it 🍉