I Am Here******

Well enough! It's just that the current world view is a bit too small. I think the reborn person in the middle is very interesting. It just depends on how you write it and how you can control the fun. I prefer plots and plots that are more imaginative. It's not enough to watch right now! ! !

It's okay. It's a little different from the apocalyptic novels I've read before. It can be said that a major breakthrough in apocalyptic novels is that it is really possible to write down so many wives? [What] Then there are more and more women in the back. How can we tell the names of people? [What] But I still hope that the author will be better [Sending my heart] [Sneaky smile]

It's not bad. It's a cool post-apocalyptic story. The protagonist may want to create a nation and contact some international friends.

It's quite good to watch. There's nothing bad about it so far. The story is novel and the plot is compact.

The subject matter is very good and the ideas are very clear.

Good-looking, Doomsday➕Expenditure, very nice, worth watching

It's so pretty, it's a little more erotic hehe

Great. The car was going very fast. The protagonist's personality is also very good. Killing decisively is not the Holy Mother. Not very brainless either. At least it looks cool.

I hope that there will be fewer images of the score-boosting tools, and more images of the Duo An family sisters, Bai Jiajia, and other people who joined at that time, instead of just those small-power city lords, Xia Xiaonuan, and foreign girls.

It's very interesting. The plot and plot are very good.

The plot is great, the driving speed is fast, and there are 6 paragraphs. I opened one of the questions about whether I am a reborn person or not, and wow, those answers to those questions made me laugh for more than 10 minutes. I was very impressed and can be called this book.

Why are there so many bad reviews? Even though they are a bit toxic, they are not unacceptable. So pretentious? ? ? I like the plot very much. It's good [eating melon]

It's very good. It's the first time I heard this kind of apocalyptic literature and came across this book. The main reason is that the ending is too bad. Zhang Lin should not leave his sister alone in the early stage, and there are too many female protagonists. The focus should be on writing An Qingge, and someone like Xia Xiaonuan, An Qingwu, can be ranked as the second and third female lead. Moreover, some characters appear for too short a time, such as the security captain, and some of the women mentioned in the character introductions in the family prosperity system have basically never been written about. They can be mentioned in one sentence, but they are a bit too brief. There are many points, because the protagonist in the end of the world has a system of many children and many blessings, which is a very novel theme. Zhang Lin really describes what an ordinary person will do after entering the end of the world, and then the people around him are also the incarnations of ordinary people. Only the city lord is a high-ranking god, but Zhang Lin can The city lord conquered it for him. This is a very magical place, so when you listen to it, it may make people feel immersed in it. Then when Zhang Lin turned into a dragon, I was really a little surprised, because Zhang Lin's awakened extraordinary template is the dragon bloodline. Although the ending is a bit unfinished, I feel that there is a little bit of connection. Overall it's not bad, keep up the good work and hope the author will publish two more good books! Chapter 319 is not a large number. The author did not clearly describe the significance of all the things that happened to Zhang Lin in the apocalypse, and the ending did feel a bit disappointing. The idea that Zhang Ling's daughter from the divine realm is the controller of the system is too far-fetched. It's like Zhang Lin's daughter saving her father in order to save her father. And there's a little too little description of fighting and things like that in bed. He said that there were quite a lot of descriptions of Zhang Lin's first and last stop in Hope City where the orcs launched a major attack on the humans, but overall, I didn't think it was enough. @ Mystery flash you have to work hard!

The plot of the story is still very good. Although it is still far from excellent, it is still worth reading when you are reading. I personally like the system of marrying a wife and having children, but in the end there seemed to be only two children. This is due to the author's lack of effort. The collapse at the end of the story basically does not seem to be a problem that occurs in masterpieces, but the author still completed the whole story reasonably and perfectly.

This is a novel that I read on Tomato and I think it's reasonable. Everything else is great. I'd like to encourage you by giving it a 5-star rating.

The author's writing skills are not bad, and the plot logic is smooth and smooth, which is already very good in online articles. A slight shortcoming is that the writing is shallow. A large part of the plot in the text is covered by the narration to explain the description and psychological activities. If these parts can be written with character dialogue instead of these straightforward words, and if the dialogue is designed taking into account the personality of each character, the level of this book will be higher.

Nice looking, harem story. The system is the "Neptune" system, which allows the protagonist to marry more wives and have more children to earn points in exchange for items. It has to be said that it is the end of the world, and it is the blessing of the system that makes the protagonist's scumbag reasonable. The male protagonist is very powerful and decisive in killing. Well, overall it is good and watchable.

It's not bad. I don't know why it's only an 8.3. It's better than some books with a score of 9 or above, but the ending is too sloppy. The early stage is still good. It's not long, and there aren't that many stories. At least it doesn't have any poisonous points. Overall, it's pretty good. I suggest that the next book should not write the protagonist's woman as a vase [face covering]. You can refer to [End Times: I just want to give the goddesses around the world a home]. The protagonist's women are basically useful and not a burden.

Yes, the key point is to explain the origin of the system, which is quite reasonable, but the ending is too hasty, but it's okay. It just speeds up the process. After thinking about it, it will be like that. Opening a new map is like a nesting doll, which is not bad.

The plot of the novel is compact and full of suspense and surprises. The author skillfully uses [narrative techniques] to keep the readers highly tense and expectant throughout. Every detail in the story is carefully designed, interlocking and fascinating.

This book is novel in subject matter, constantly refreshing, unconventional, and decisive. It is a rare good book.

Pretty good I won't list all the things that made me unhappy in the whole book. Some people may think it doesn't matter. But the reborn person, the origin of the system, and the female supporting role have no effect. These points are a bit poorly written. The reborn people set the city lord to live for thousands of years. The other reborn people should be the same. They are all considered to be 100 years old and live one life. They have not escaped from the world setting for 10 lives. More or less people will just destroy it. It is not said that they will all be consistent with the outside world and they will not all tend to be under the power of the city lord. For a person who can be reborn as many times as he wants, it will not make any difference if he dies once. The system is the setting of Zhang Lin in the sky and Zhang Lin in the underground. Zhang Mingming said it was different from the one above, but what does it mean that the mother and daughter in heaven later accepted it? It was said earlier that Zhang Lin did not survive the last time. Where did that Zhang come from that day? The system is set to have more children and more blessings, but the money was given at the beginning. The developers of the system knew that it was the end of the world and would still make such mistakes. There are many contradictions, so I won't go into details. I spent a lot of time to accept the importance of templates, and also wrote good skills for the female supporting characters. Only a few of them actually played. Zhang Lin basically played the whole process alone... There are too many to say. I can understand the bad ending. Overall: It's a good book to read without thinking, but it's too short [punch]

In fact, the entire setting in the early stage is very awesome. Unlike other ordinary cool novels, the protagonist's abilities, harem group, and intrigues can be developed in depth until the middle and late stages. The heroine's several lines can still be developed in depth. Later, you can feel the scrawled ending, and you feel the acceleration of the ending just for the sake of ending. But overall it's still very good

5 Stars [Like] [Like] [Like] The main reason is that the character of the protagonist is the same as mine [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] The outlook on life and values ​​​​are more suitable for me.

This is my first look at the end of the world, where humanity is destroyed, and the setting is indeed very good. The changes and choices after choosing the God Realm in the first life also perfectly complete the reason for the emergence of this setting at the beginning. It's just that the ending felt too rushed.

In fact, you don't need to pay too much attention to the plot, because he is a bit bad in the later stage, but the ending is not bad, and the car is very fast, so be mentally prepared. There are too many women and I can't remember it. It can be said to be a stallion story, but I still have to say that the car is very fast ~ [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh]

Come on! I'll continue watching when I come back from vacation next week

It still feels a bit nice. There are just some poisonous points and some unreasonable things. It's still okay to read it as a cool article.

It's very interesting, and the content is quite rich. Can the author update it faster?

Haha, I originally wanted to give up after seeing 1/3 of it, but then another set of twins came along. Well, well, well, the author won my heart [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]