When I Left the Team, the Eldest Lady Regretted It

So far, it seems fortunate that the male protagonist has left more decisively. I hope the author can move faster. I really became an old fan. At that time, only two or three people were proud [licking the screen][licking the screen][licking the screen][licking the screen][licking the screen][cool]

It's okay, the pace is slow, but it's a bit lacking. I don't want to keep reading (distressed) Author, are you prepared to write more than 2 million words for such a protracted plot? [What] [What] [What] If you can't write it, just accept the bad review. Also, I didn't see the "love" mentioned in the introduction at all~_~ I can't say that the introduction content is about separation. It's too delayed. This plot makes my stomach hurt. It's not that I don't like slow-paced novels, but this book is really tasteless and it's a pity to abandon it. I'll just read the title in the future. It's just that you can know the plot just by looking at the title. Also, the writing of Avril is very strange. Judging from her emotional description, it can be seen that she does not reject the male protagonist, but she behaves like a white-eyed wolf towards the male protagonist. When I read the introduction of this book, um, chasing her husband in the crematorium? Ex-girlfriend regrets for life? It doesn't feel like it matches the content of the book. Let's not talk about the slow pace. But your writing feels a bit like you are torturing Avril under the guise of chasing your husband in the crematorium? I don't understand it very well. Is it just a matter of writing about Avril? Don't use the gimmick of regretting your ex-girlfriend for the rest of your life to pull her out from time to time and beat her to death, which is disgusting? I know you wrote Avril in a disgusting way, so don't worry about Avril and write other emotional lines quickly. Isn't the writing pace too slow? But it feels impossible. You are unlikely to abandon the character of Avril. After all, the significance of this character's existence is inseparable from the title tag and introduction of the book. Without the character of Avril, this book is just an ordinary adventure novel in another world. Let's guess at the ending of Avril. After all, she is a noble, and the male protagonist will not forgive her, so she may be used as a marriage tool, or she may be demoted to a commoner and die alone? The worst thing is to be written to death. It's a shit-like plot, with a writing style that keeps pinching people when they go to the toilet. Without the character of Avril, it has no interest at all. However, it will pull out Avril and whip her corpse to retain the readers, and control the psychology of some readers who like to watch torture (I can only say that it is you). This is a super lousy article that was wasted time and written deliberately to win over readers. Read it carefully! Watch carefully! Watch carefully! [Vomit] [vomit] [vomit] [vomit] [vomit] [vomit] [vomit] [vomit] [vomit]

Overall, it's good, you can follow it and the plot is very coherent. I originally wanted to give it four points because the beginning of this book is very familiar, and the writing is very similar to another book where I kicked my teammates away, but that one was too thorough, and the plot was relatively fast. In comparison, this new book is worth reading, but the title made me think it was an invincible novel. Open comments.

Although it's a bit watery, the emotional scenes are still quite adequate. Just watch the performance later and don't fall apart. In addition, with this amount of updates, I feel like the author could run away with a bucket at any time [laughing] 6 is flying, you are getting more and more lazy in updating, why don't you tell me your address, I will only bring a whip [laughing evilly]

I seem to have seen an anime similar to this one. I forgot what it was called. It was probably last year's anime. The Japanese one was an isekai show.

At the moment, it has a sense of déjà vu as a comic, and the writing is good. I hope it won't collapse later, such as the princess-sick eldest lady. If they were together, the book would be ruined. In addition, there are a few that I think can be included in the harem. Currently, the Priest and the Demon King are good. Tifa has less details and is more suitable for friends at the moment.

I entered this two-dimensional book with an attitude of curiosity. This book is so good. The last time I thought such a good-looking book was when I was a man in my thirties. I will definitely promote the book and I can't be poisoned alone.

The characters are vividly created As for the disgusting team members before, I hope that the Holy Mother will not engage in forgiveness, acceptance, family relations, etc. After all, the fate has ended (the original owner is heartbroken, so don't embarrass the original owner), don't create poisonous points (please), read the article and picture it to feel comfortable

So far, it is considered to be one of the best quality works in Western fantasy. The writing style tends to feel like a light novel, not a mindless novel. The opening plot is relatively novel in the entire western fantasy genre (and I personally feel it is better written than similar themes). You can look forward to the subsequent development (the author has completely suppressed a possible poisonous point, which is why I am looking forward to it). The logic of the characters' behavior is quite reasonable (except for a supporting character with a mad dog character who is a little bit toxic, but I personally feel that it is within the acceptable range). Although the title may be cliché, the content is indeed different from ordinary vulgar and mindless articles, and it has taken a different path. I am very much looking forward to the author's follow-up treatment of the plot, and I hope it can bring us different excitement! Come on✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧ ps: Duijia: The above are just personal opinions. If there is a conflict in opinions, it must be your opinion [Like] I feel that Tomato's novels of this style may not have the largest audience, so when everyone accidentally sees a relatively good work, they can't help but raise their requirements, and they all hope that the book they like can also become a masterpiece of the generation. I personally feel that the rating is much lower. The author insists on writing with confidence! [Upvoted post]

This book is absolutely good. My bookshelf is full. Now I rely on historical records to stock up on books. I have basically read all the male and female videos in various categories. I must be considered an old bookworm. After reading so many books, I think this one has a good subject matter and good writing. I like it very much. Let me give you a brief recommendation. The low score may be because someone deliberately wants to protect it, or someone does not like this subject. There are a thousand Hamlets for a thousand people. If you don't love it, please don't hurt it. If you like it, give it five stars. If you don't like it, just leave. There is no need to give it a low star. Let me tell you something, after reading the latest chapter, I know why this book has a low score. Can you add two more chapters? One or two chapters every day, trying to drag me through the plot. Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this. The capitalists will shed tears after reading it. How dare you? You￣￣)σ, author, you don't want your book to have a low score.

This kind of situation of being too well protected and not cherishing it is common in reality. However, if you can correct your mistakes and correct them, I think it would be good to accept it. The main reason is that I don't want such a beautiful girl to take advantage of others. I think it would be good to leave an rbq position in the future, or He is on the edge of the team, watching the male protagonist stick with other girls and fight together, and then he is just a marginalized person who just lives together. Only when he is blindfolded at night can he imagine that the male protagonist still loves him, and it feels quite exciting [I learned it]

I really like Avril, just like us, we were willful and ignorant when we were young, but when we grow up, we can't look back (this boyfriend really writes like his parents) Also, can you give Avril a happy ending? ! ! What does it mean to whip a corpse repeatedly! ! Even if she is written to death! ! ! ! (Ps. This book is considered very good on Tomato, so give it five stars)

Disadvantages: The plot of this book is good, with many explosive points, but due to the author, the effect is not good. This is why many book friends say that the plot is dragging. The author still continues the daily writing style of the previous books. In fact, there is no need to make original plots. If you make daily fan stories, the results may be better. Advantages: At the beginning of the single review, the plot structure and writing style are relatively mature, and it has certain competitiveness in Tomato. The foreshadowing is well received. Summary: The author of this book has certain strength and is good at Qingshui daily writing. Some parts are not handled well. However, the current writing is only 100 chapters. It will improve in the future and it can be rated as a high-quality product on Tomato. 4.0

Avril's characterization is a prerequisite to attract readers to click in. However, after reading it now, I would like to remind you that the male protagonist is half-dragon Aotian, and the subsequent story line does not revolve around Avril, but the harem joy that unfolds from the perspective of the male protagonist. The plot of the drama is relatively daily, so I like this book very much. The descriptions of the female characters are very comfortable and there is no abrupt feeling. If you click in and see my comments, I sincerely hope you can continue to read this book [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] Also, the author will update soon! !

Although I basically skipped reading, and only read about half of it, and didn't read most of the chapters, this plot really made me happy! Although it feels a bit bloated due to too many words, so I don't have the patience to read it carefully, but the plot of the entire revenge novel perfectly fits my three views, and it is also very enjoyable. I came here to give it a five-star rating.

The writing is good, the character creation is successful and impressive, and the plot is a bit idealistic. It feels like it depicts the world in a Japanese drama, but you want to pursue rationality according to your own ideas. As a result, is it not good to have both drama and rationality? If the author's book didn't have plots and settings that are too "classic" for now, more people might like it, so give it five stars to support it. By the way, Mei War God's character creation is really successful. When I saw the part where she was suspected of being resurrected, I was so addicted that I almost gave up the book and gave it two stars. Fortunately, this thing seemed to be gone after two chapters before being resurrected. It's no problem to have such a character. It's the finishing touch, and this part of the plot is also rounded off. But if you don't explain it clearly, it's easy to get criticized. Many people in the comment area thought you were going to clean this thing up and abandon the book. Many people are [face covering]. After all, how many people who read novels will dig into the hidden foreshadowing carefully, that is, they will fill in the holes quickly. Otherwise, not many Shennong will have so much patience to wait. And many people don't read the introduction. From the comments section, it seems that there are many people who abandon the book because Avril Lavigne may not make or break the dog. After all, the current mainstream...

I don't think Avril Lavigne is guilty of this. Her character and decisions in the early stage are inseparable from the male protagonist's unconditional doting. Similar to a loving mother having many failed children, is it really all a matter of "losing children"? It is more the bottomless doting of a loving mother that is the root of the problem. The male protagonist wakes up and knows what the problem is, and then Avril becomes the price of the male protagonist's growth. I still hope that Avril has an acceptable ending, instead of becoming the one who can't get out of this problematic relationship.

It's like a dream, I'm still very touched when I wake up Hmm... The writing is quite fluent, but it seems there is no crematorium for chasing husbands? On the contrary, Avril has reconciled with herself. I probably expected this development of hers. My evaluation is not satisfactory. The subsequent plot is a bit dull. It depends on how the author writes it. Oh, by the way, my prediction is that the family harem will develop. Throughout the whole story, not many people died, and there should be no knives or anything like that.

How to say it? The following is purely my personal opinion: It's a bit less enjoyable. I think of the Dunyong I watched a few years ago, and Feng Ping was killed. If you watch it now, you can see dozens or even hundreds of chapters in half an hour. Maybe the plot is not so torn. I am a book reader, and I have only listened to it for two hours. The protagonist has been taking the blame and whipping the body. He has been with the eldest lady for 3 years. The tower climbing strategy was stagnant for a month or two before being kicked out. It is like picking up a puppy on the roadside. You can remember the good things about him for a long time. I have read similar novels in Mao. The outline is almost the same, but the male protagonist has formed a strategy team himself. The whole team has a good atmosphere. The strategies of both sides are compared and put under pressure. The male protagonist's profession is similar to that of a commander (a bit like the male protagonist in Borderline who applies the vulnerability buff). But unfortunately, there are many pigeons in Cat, so I sent a few hundred copies. I haven't seen the back yet, author, come on!

After reading it, I personally think it's okay. The heroine is not unreasonably bad. Personally speaking, the perfect ending of the harem is very good. Then, the original teammates are a bit too stupid, and it feels like a little too much is not enough. I hope that the subsequent writing can be a little more enjoyable. This should be a harem story, author? (Secretly pinching the hatchet)

I love this book so much, but it's not so mindless that it turns the protagonist's former "eldest lady" into a completely useless person. The logic is very rigorous. What makes me feel that it is beyond the ordinary revenge novels written by Tomato is that the protagonist does not seek revenge for the sake of revenge.

Japanese light novel routine of slow life in another world. I haven't read many books in this genre so far, so it's quite new. Advantages: I can't think of anything, can I watch it? Some of the characters in the back are pretty good. I prefer the funny priest. Disadvantages: I feel that the main character line is too small, but it is understandable that in the early stage of a game like Slow Life, many former teammates are unhappy, and then many of the characters created in the early stage are not likeable and have not changed. The first description of Pastor Doubi was also quite annoying to me, which can explain the problem of early description. There's not much to say about the rest, but it should be said that if you like it, you can read it, but if you don't, you can't stand it (sigh) If it's about appetite, then this book would probably be 4 stars, but considering the appetite of most people and the audience for this kind of book, I would rate it between 3 and a half to 3 stars (not three and four stars because the author also has to eat. But I have already written the real rating (after all, it is also to my taste) It is recommended that you read around chapter 30 before deciding whether to continue reading. The bird food at the beginning is a bit poisonous.

Hmm..., It's a very good book. I have to say that this book really has a perfect ending because of all kinds of strange mistakes. It is a template from the previous book, but the plot is completely different. Each has its own excitement. If you feel familiar, don't worry. This is a brand new book. Author, if you have time, would you like to make a side story? There should be a lot of people reading the extra story with a perfect ending. I read the book reviews and many people thought it was a pity. I just felt that the main plot didn't need to be changed at all, which is good. But should I open an extra if line? Really, it almost had a happy ending [face covering]

It's pretty and edible. But not fat yet. After reading more than 120 chapters, I skipped every page of Maeve's disgusting parts... Maeve finally sent it, and Avril was also a dissatisfied one.

It's a bit similar to the book I read before, "After Recognizing Reality, They Start Chasing Their Husbands in the Crematorium". I think it's pretty good now that I've read it. The difference should be that the emotional line in that book is more delicate, and this one has a more refreshing feeling. And I remember the astringent one. Is this one because of the platform? It's a bit clearer.

I started reading on June 17, 2023, and saw Chapter 123. So far it's okay, I can continue to watch it. Although there weren't many comments when I watched it, maybe it's because there aren't many people commenting at the moment. One of the factors that makes people want to read this book the most is that the protagonist is close to Lin En. For those who have read Xianyu's novels, the word "Lin En" will be very familiar to them. Then there is a twist in the beginning. I want to see what will happen to the hero after he leaves. It looks like an anime I watched before. The hero lived a leisurely life after being kicked out of the team of heroes. The hero's sister is still on the front line as a hero, and the hero is also similar to logistics work. Returning to the novel, after the beginning, I saw Maeve, a fool who wanted to cut off a little bit of her own brain and stuff it into her head. I just wanted to see her continuous stupidity in the future, which was not pure stupidity at all. I wanted to continue reading to see what her final ending was. What will happen to the male protagonist in the future will also attract readers to continue reading. That's it. ——Around 21:00 on June 17, 2023.

Personally, I feel that the author's writing style is very sophisticated, especially in terms of characterization (Aiweiya is the best in the world), but the plot direction needs to be strengthened, but I think the writing is still pretty good👌 (Also, can the update be faster? Www

Rating 4 points first, you can look forward to the future. The writing basically did not focus on hotel management. It is suggested that we should quickly give up the idea of ​​​​living a slow life on the border, hand over the hotel to the money-loving governor and the working succubus, and then focus on advancing the main story. After all, it is very contradictory to feel bored and want to spend a leisurely life after clearing the god tower twice, and at the same time want to upgrade to a god in the way of ordinary people. The writing is good and I can keep reading; it has the refreshing feeling of Chinese novels, but also the feeling of no main line development of Taijun novels. After reading it for a long time, it is still almost the same as the opening setting. I'm surprised that Maeve didn't die. She can be washed, affected by the evil god, and affected by the mutated god of war profession. After washing, it should be effective. If it is still a stumbling block after washing, then G There are three purposes for reading this novel right now: 1: I saw the male protagonist Lin En open a tuba, and solve the problems that need to be solved by opening a tuba, and the misunderstandings that need to be resolved after joining the tuba (such as Vicky the Devil, who is obsessed with the tuba); I originally felt a bit bored after reading three thousand pages, but there is finally a sign of "I have shown my cards, I am the boss", so bear with it and wait for the plot. 2: The male protagonist and Nicole have become a perfect couple. Who doesn't love this girl? Although the Archon is also very fond of xp, he is not suitable for Lin En () 3: Explanation of the entire world view, the ultimate goal of the evil god, the principles of the labyrinth, the tower of godhood, etc.; Explanation of the male protagonist's journey through different worlds and cheating As for whether the male protagonist needs to continue climbing the tower or finally become a god directly, as well as Avril Maeve's path of introspection, the fateful showdown between the brave and the devil, and other sub-plots are basically fun to watch. I have only read the second volume now. If the rhythm remains the same, I feel that it would be too much to complete 20 volumes. Overall, please give it a try, author.

I have read more than 1,000 books, and I can tell you responsibly that this book is actually good, but it is written in a different way. If you think it is very poisonous, it means you have not understood it. This book is still interesting in terms of character structure. The writing is not good, but it has become another kind of writing. It was originally a book with poor writing, and I don't want to read it. , But this book made me feel the feeling of the text, as if it were an animation, not like a novel, but more like editing the text of an animation. It is very ordinary and flat. It can be said that it constitutes another reading feeling. Of course, it may also be because I have read a lot of novels and my resistance to toxicity has reached a certain stage. That's why it feels so ordinary.

On a certain day and month, a man was lying weakly on the bed, his face looking pale. There was a slight smile on his lips. His outstretched hand trembled slightly, and tears shone in the corners of his eyes. A hoarse voice murmured: "Don't forget to update." [Please update]