Naruto: My Cheat Is Senbonzakura

He slipped away and saw someone applying medicine to the enemy for the first time. The enemy just cuts a hole with his hand, and you deliver medicine and gauze. Just because the enemy is female? The lower part controls the brain, right? In vulgar terms, sooner or later, you will die on the * person's belly.

Overall, it's pretty good. There are three things that are not so good. The first is Haku's gender. Since Haku's appearance in Naruto, his gender has caused a lot of controversy. But I personally think that Haku should be a boy. After all, the Minazuki clan is the Ice Shield Bloodline. He has a lot of Yin attribute chakra and looks like a woman. It's normal, but his two car lights are hard to explain. The second is that the author's view of time is a bit bad. I feel that Naruto's time is messed up. Konoha 48 is the year when famous people were born. In 1949, all the 12 young men in Konoha were born, so it would be at least 48 years before he could be considered the younger brother of Kakashi, a student of Uzumaki Naruto and his class, at least three wars ago. After all, who was pregnant for two or three years? If there was such a thing, I'm afraid he would have been hung on a big tree to exorcise evil spirits, so the timeline was messed up. The third point is that the girls here are so good at strategy. I don't feel that way. I don't have that feeling. Well, if I bring myself into the protagonist, I don't have that sense of accomplishment.

I thought about a question when I first started watching it: Kakashi was 7 years old when Sagumo Hatake (Sakumo) died, and Kakashi was 26 when the plot started. The ninja school has a six-year schooling system at the beginning of the plot, 26-7-6=13. The average age for entering a ninja school is 6 to 7 years old, and 13-year-olds have basically graduated from the ninja school. For the sake of the plot, they are forced to enter the school at the same time as celebrities. How do you think it is unreasonable 🤦

I have seen any ninjas in Naruto accept more than two people. If you don't want to be honest, don't write about Ino. Ino's original story and Sakura's fight for Sasuke can be rational and let go. It's not as uncomfortable as what you wrote. A good Zanpakutō story is interspersed with emotional scenes, and the dialogues are all love at first sight. How about falling in love with Ino Hijiu? The protagonist will never die again. . Why is he so ex, a powerful kunoichi has no self-respect and self-love, two maidens serve one husband, the heads of major families cannot marry two, so the main character is awesome, even if Naruto writes about multiple women, he is ex

It's okay, but it's a bit like a stallion story, with the gender-changing characters, Ino and Tsunade already included.

Although the writing is not very good. But it's still pretty good. I wish there was just one Zanpakutō. Developed to the extreme. If the strength is not enough, just rely on editing. As long as it's not too outrageous, it's acceptable.

Come on author, although the literary talent is not great, the plot is good.

The subject matter is okay and the writing is average. You just don't know how to write emotional scenes, so you don't have to write them. Really, this is really uncomfortable to watch. You accept the first two as you say, without any emotional foundation at all. They are just like stallions. When it comes to Tsunade, they are grinding and grinding again.

Let me tell you, Bai is a man, not a woman.

Um, I can't stand it anymore when I see Chapter 9. Other people's cheats are awesome. You can challenge anyone at the beginning. There is no Kidō or Shunpo. There is only a Senbonzakura and it has spiritual limitations. You can't defeat anyone if you cheat.