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It's a bit like a fantasy harem novel in a light novel, and the male protagonist has a pretty good personality.

Very well written, keep it up author Damn, the more I write, the more outrageous it becomes [cover face][cover face][cover face] Love watching

It's quite beautiful! I thought it was a serious one [crying], but I didn't expect that I would like it more [laughing crookedly] or less people would watch it, let's promote it! ! !

What a great book, this is written [sending my heart] [sending my heart] However, I still hope that the author can write more rigorously, such as the idiotic operation of Holy Master Daoyan, and why a Tao Palace can block the Holy Lord-level weapons (initiated by the former Holy Master Daoyan). This book seems to be an excellent embryo so far. I hope the author can write better, attract more readers, and get more praise (5 stars)

This book should be the most enjoyable harem I have ever read. The main character is born with a divine body and is able to achieve unimpeded progress. There are also the ultimate imperial soldiers behind the Holy Land blessing at the beginning. The background setting is definitely full. The whole text talks about training and beauties. There is not much description of fighting because the protagonist basically kills random people. The highlight is the description of the beauties in it. It is awesome. It is almost the same as Entertainment Spring and Autumn. Each character has a special side. The plot is delicate and can control the soul. You can understand it without further explanation. Now I see it's almost mid-term. I don't know how many beauties the protagonist can attract.

It can be seen that the author referred to many harem works. There was some lightning protection in terms of the heroine's clothing, but some of the descriptions still seemed a bit too strong, which made me feel that the clothing issue was not avoided, which made me feel a little depressed. Is it possible to make some relevant changes? Can you stop writing gauzy stuff all the time? You didn't think carefully about your outfit at all. Are you so fond of superfluous things?

The author's writing style is very good, the text has a bit of an ancient style but it doesn't look jerky. The description of the female character is finally no longer about beautiful fingers, beautiful hands and beautiful eyes, and the plot is also good. Facts have proved that as long as the writing is good enough, some clichéd plots will not be offensive. What can I say? The author's writing style and harmonious content are so harmonious. It's really enlightening! Please send the author the large-scale works. A friend of mine, ahem, wants to study more deeply [star].

It's so well written, the writing is so good. The character description and psychological description are indeed good, and even driving is very elegant. If I didn't know better, I thought I was reading prose. The author also has a strong awareness of lightning protection. For example, after the senior sister came on stage to compete in martial arts, she also added that her clothes were not messy. The plot is a bit like the fairy tale of Gensokyo, with multiple female protagonists. In short, that's it, just one piece of fairy grass.

The writing is too pornographic! But it didn't cross the line. The author is really strong

It's really beautiful. It's acceptable to have a harem, but it's best not to have more than 5 people. I can't take care of it. Isn't it [shy] Bao Shu Bao Shu [I'm about to cry] I've actually been reading for 11 hours (hold my waist)

It's beautiful, I just like the way it's written. I'm optimistic about you, the author. [Read carefully]

This book is very beautiful, the writing is first-class, and the subject matter is excellent. What is the reason for this score that is neither low nor high?

It's so beautiful. I feel very confident about this. It's so cool and invincible. It's different from those traditional cool articles. This one is so comfortable to read.

At first, I thought it was a single girl, but it turned out to be a harem, but the writing is good. If you are not satisfied with it, you can watch Entertainment Spring and Autumn. Remember to look for the unedited version [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

This is my favorite type. I hope the author can write more emotional scenes for the protagonist. There are many harem novels and the heroine gets together without any emotional development. This kind of book is really annoying. Even if there is less fighting, it is acceptable. So far, the relationship in this book is still very good.

The characters are delicately drawn and the storyline is compact and long. Strong sense of immersion

The writing is quite good, the protagonist has a good personality, and overall it looks like a combination of old online novels and cool novels. It doesn't have the clichés of cool novels, and it doesn't have the rigidity of old online novels. If you are used to reading time travel novels, this is quite interesting.

The author is a talented person. This book is full of hormonal atmosphere and combines various elements. Although there are many shadows that cover the sky, it does not appear obtrusive. The character creation is quite in place. Each character has its own merits. The portrayal is very vivid. The writing is smooth and the writing is excellent. The overall plot is relaxed and rhythmic. I rarely give 5 stars on Tomato. This book is really good. There are many harem stories, but there are actually very few that can be read. The focus of this book is not on cultivating immortals. It saves all kinds of boring training and fighting links. The focus is on portraying the image of each heroine. The harem is the main one, cultivation is the supplement, and romance is the cultivation of immortality.

It's really good. The author specifies what kind of side job he has, and he doesn't have to set the pressure too low, so that the author is fully motivated.

It's really good to read. The writing and plot are very good. It's a rare good book on Tomato. The rating is so low because it's a drive-in book.

This book is really good, it has the flavor of one of my fairy friends, but my personal opinion is better. I like this kind of novel very much. The fantasy and delicate description of emotions are very suitable for me. If the author has the lightning protection consciousness of Gensokyo, it will be a perfect match. Come on, get more and more, don't get enough [laughing] [crying]

It's not bad. I've read more than a hundred chapters and it should be about the harem. However, the introduction contains a guide for developing masters and apprentices, but there are only a few interactions with the master. You can't wait until you have raised a harem before cultivating a relationship with the master.

It's non-toxic, and the writing is good, which is really rare in Tomato. Basically, Tomato's books are a little bit poisonous. This is the only novel that I can read from beginning to end and follow it all the time. There is no poisonous point. There is a harem but not a stallion. Each female character has her own characteristics. It is a great harem novel. Ten stars.

It's obvious that the author likes the aunt very much [laughs evilly]. It's a very nice harem novel, with both implicit and passionate aspects. It's hard not to think that the author has a side job. He's not like the traditional harem novels where he always goes out to look for trouble and wants to offend all the forces. Although there are still small flaws, it's still much better than the current harem novels where all the demons are dancing around.

@ Repair cat head Among the dozens of pictures I have seen, the author's writing style is good, and his awareness of lightning protection is very strong. It can be seen that the author writes with great care, and the car is very fast. (What a big car, taboo changes...) If the author can see it, please make some small suggestions. If you want to write a female character and refuse to accept it, then don't write too much about her (such as appearance, figure, etc.), Otherwise it will make people mistakenly think that you are missing a girl or giving away a girl! ! !

Show them all to me! There is almost no problem if you eat too little [punch out][punch out][adoration]

The writing is okay, and there is nothing wrong with the choice of words and sentences. The story of the article is a bit average, but the description of women is not bad. However, one should pay attention to the issue of punctuation. The author is a typical "tease to the end" type. If the author wants to go in depth in this line, it is best not to ignore this issue. In addition, there are some problems with the character development of the protagonist, and some aspects are a bit contradictory, but the problem is not big. Overall, keep working hard.

It's very beautiful. Every chapter is written with great effort. The writing is excellent and beats 99% of the novels on Tomato. I've just read the latest chapter. It's non-toxic and the writing is delicate. It will make people read it carefully. When the number of words is enough, I think this book will take off [laughing]

I suddenly felt like I was watching Hongchen on MP3 in my dormitory in my second year of high school. I missed it so much😭😭. It reminded me of Ju Yunxiu and the others. This book is beautiful.

Everyone who has seen it said yes. If you haven't seen it, come and see it. It's so bt [laughing]