Since Ancient Times, Immortals and Demons Have Appeared in CP? but They Are Both Women

To come across such a palatable double heroine novel that focuses on the experience of cultivating immortals and the heroine's upgrade experience is what I deserve after repeatedly jumping between the two categories of tomato heroines cultivating immortals without cp and ancient Chinese dual heroines [laughing and crying]. Finally, there is a dual heroine story that focuses on the emotional line. It's a novel about cultivating immortals. The author's writing is very good and unique. The heroine is down-to-earth. She is one of the few heroines who can criticize [face covering] for being a careless heroine who just talks about her strength and luck. I look forward to the subsequent development of the plot. [I understand] It's time to advance, it's time to fall in love~

It's very good-looking, I like the heroine, she's funny and funny, I can fight when I can, and I can't run away if I can't, and I can't take revenge overnight! [Sending Hearts]

Overall it's pretty good, the subject matter is very novel, Lily in the Invincible Stream, and the author's creativity is also very new. But I personally think that the love line is a little lacking, but the rest is pretty good. Come on, author

It's so beautiful, please give the author a big boost [sending my heart][sending my heart]

The title is about two female protagonists, but there are very few emotional scenes. In the later stage, I felt that the female protagonist's emotional scenes were a little bit (I can't put it into words) and there were more male supporting characters in it. The female protagonist also showed unusual friendships with some of the male supporting characters (maybe I am too sensitive). Because it basically did not cross the line, I could continue to listen: the first part of the plot is very good, and the second part "should" be okay for me. Because this book has less emotional scenes, for those of you who are a little emotionally sensitive, (you may want to enter with caution) [top post] The first plot is 4.7 Stars, the latter is 3.8 Stars (personal opinion) The plot starts to get a bit messy in the later stages, maybe I can't figure it out personally; there are posts [asking for attention] but it's better than nothing [face covering] There are quite a few poisonous points in the plot, you should also be able to tell from the reviews, there are too many supporting actors [crying]

It's very beautiful. Both the storyline and the characters are very full and rich, making it unforgettable. It combines the characteristics of a refreshing novel. The storyline of the two heroines is also very delicate. All in all, very good [like] [laughing]

It's really good to watch, the plot between Ran Bing and Ruan Ruan is killing me [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

This is my first time watching two female protagonists, it's so beautiful! The author will update soon! ! ! I was really poisoned when I saw 150. Why did I suddenly become such a brainless person... Late stage love brain? The logic is a bit weird at the end, and the protagonist has a huge emotional fluctuation inexplicably. . .

It's the two heroines, right? They're together. I like watching them, so when will they be together [snickering] [smirking]

It's really good to read. It's the only book about two female cultivators that I can keep reading! ! ! ! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

My thoughts after reading are summarized as follows: Overall it's good to watch, with a good plot, mainly from the perspective of Ruan Dongling, one of the heroines. 1. The heroine travels through time and obtains a system for ruining her life, but she does not do it without thinking. She has her own ambition and knows that she cannot really think about ruining her life. 2. The plot is well written, and the overall feeling is that there are no major problems. However, Ran Bing's role is too small, the emotional line is not enough yet, and the reading experience is that it develops too fast. After all, Ran Bing's character is relatively ruthless, which is caused by the law of the jungle in the Cultivation Continent. Even though the plot has established her as a person who repays kindness and revenge, she does not like to owe others. For example, once Zen Chengyuan was used by her in the secret realm, she regarded it as owing a favor. But Ruan only had contact with her twice. Even if he gave her the treasure she desperately needed, it would still take some emotional settling. 3. The author's writing style is very good. Anyway, at least I, who don't often read cultivation novels, think the writing is good and can give people a sense of empathy. 4. The author's line is very long, including Kyushu, Zhenwuzhou style is weak and needs to rise up, and it gives the protagonist room for development. It is not a cool novel with a system cheat without any brain. 5. The protagonist is portrayed as quite rational and thoughtful. Ruan doesn't show off when he needs to keep a low profile. He knows how to pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger occasionally, and is professional. He knows that the cultivation level given by the system needs to be strengthened and solidified, and he will not rush for speed. Ran Ze is very smart, and in the plot of more than a hundred chapters later, he is very dark and witty, which is really a bit bad. 6. Ruan is actually a pure and kind person, but she was very sad when many of her disciples in Zhenwu Prefecture were killed by Ran. After Qi Sichen sowed discord, she did have some estrangement with Ran, but she cannot be called the Holy Mother. Let me ask, in the real world, compatriots in our country, or compatriots who get along with each other every day, died suddenly. Even if the culprit was not Ran, many people would still die without her, but the fact is the fact, Ruan is not the Holy Mother. Of course, it may seem a little uncomfortable later on, because the author in the early stage wrote her to torture those disgusting people very directly, so Zhishan may not be to your taste later, but not much.

Except for the awkward beginning and the later plot, I personally prefer to watch Shuang Jie. I feel that Ling'er is a bit of a philanderer, but it's not a big problem. I can only say that she has great personality charm? I feel that this is a fairy tale about two heroines. There is no deliberate industrial saccharine. Both of them have clear goals to pursue their careers. Sprinkle some dog food from time to time, Ran Bing really dotes on Ling'er [shy] Generally speaking, it's really good-looking, but Ling'er's buffs are stacked a bit too much [thinking], cultivation pills, swords, formations, and spiritual pets, but isn't the main focus of reading the article to be fun [shy], not a big problem, highly recommended

I like it very much, this is the novel that I can read recently. Many of them can't be watched after just one look! At least the protagonist of this plot is very novel. One final word. The author's coding speed should be faster, which means that it is not fast enough to read! Please [I'm about to cry] [Sending my heart] Thank you for your hard work, the author has made a lot of mistakes.

That day you agreed to accept my love on the street corner after the rain. At that moment, my world became colorful. I can't forget the blue you in this life. It was like a gift that quietly appeared in my situation. We played games all day long from early morning to watching my favorite dramas together at night. I am lucky enough to have these. I no longer expect anything else.

A very good book, so attractive, but a bit lacking

The content is good-looking and the writing is superb. What's more, what I find most novel is that the author's writing is really interesting. Overall, it's very good-looking compared to the books on my bookshelf ^ω^

The author's writing style is very good. I always feel that this is written from the first perspective of the original author. Haha, it is really well written. There is no stupid heroine or male protagonist. Well, there is no male protagonist. Haha, just look at Yun Yan'er. I hate it. This book is really good. I definitely don't regret reading it. I have read so many books, but this one is the one I read seriously. , Didn't dance at all, it was really fun, this book [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] author, I love you [Adore] [Adore] [Adore] [Adore] [Adore] [Adore] [Adore] [Adore] [Adore] [Adore] [Adore]

Bad author! Writing such a good novel just attracts my attention! This novel is both fantasy and real. The two heroines grew up slowly and survived many difficulties with each other's warmth. However, the growth path of the two heroines was not smooth all the way. It is not like in the horse-drawn novels where they were slandered by the villain and then a group of people didn't believe the heroine and then revealed her identity and slapped her in the face. It was everyone's Their identity and strength determine what they know and do, that is, everyone's causal relationship is in line with the normal situation, rather than just supporting the protagonist. Although the protagonist must have an aura, in the novel, the stronger you stand, the higher you stand, the greater your ability, the greater your responsibility. The stronger you are, the more you know and gain, and the plot of the heroines together is also super sweet! Like!

429 Oh, that's a bit too much. I'm tired. I'll probably look at the catalog later. So tired. There are so many things going on, and there are so many times where I suddenly become more cheating_(:з∠)_ and I feel tired. Overall it's good and the writing is good. The plot is good, but it goes too far. As I watched, I fantasized about the general scene. The rest is almost all about fighting, I'm so tired, I'm going crazy, ahhhh However, what the author wrote is indeed somewhat poisonous. Sometimes plots are written where some men are paired with the heroine and the heroine has a crush on someone who is more than a friend. I don't know if they want to highlight the charm of the heroine. But I've almost finished reading it, quite seriously. The heroine did not hint that they had any misunderstandings, nor did she express it explicitly, but the author may have used words that may not sit well with readers who do not understand. What is meant by flirting with women is laughable. However, I do not agree with the heroine paying such a high price step by step for someone who is at best a friend but has no close relationship. But overall, the rewards are also very good, so it is reasonable and reasonable, but it is not suitable for this Lily article. It's like a couple who are officially together in reality but don't have the right distance from other people of the opposite sex. It's not good.

There is no knife, so it's a little rough in the early stages, but most of it is sweet! As a novel about cultivating immortality, the plot is very compact, there are no pitfalls, and the characters are very distinct. Several early villains are cleaned up very naturally (at least I personally don't think it's a hard wash). It's of high quality. Great praise. Ruan Dongling is suppressed and beaten in the middle part, which may be a bit disappointing for friends who like to read cool novels. There is also no sub-CP, but in general, the rhythm is very good and the content is not bad. It is definitely a Lily novel about cultivating immortality that is worth reading. Old rules: ㊗️ Ruan Dongling & Ran Bing: May you be happy and prosperous together for a long time~

The subject matter of this book is not new, but it is certainly not cliché at all! ! ! ! The author's writing is excellent! ! ! Every story line and plot is uniquely twists and turns! ! ! ! ! Always give you a twist in unexpected places! ! ! ! I've read hundreds of books! This can be regarded as one of the ones that remains fresh in my memory! ! ! ! ! ! Absolutely amazing! ! ! ! The characters in it are also very clear! ! ! ! It feels like everyone is alive! ! ! ! Every hole is filled in very well! ! ! Jue Juezi! ! ! ! Ah! ! The author posts! ! ! ! ! The only bad thing may be that although there are two female protagonists, the distance between the male and female protagonists is not well grasped. This may be the only point of criticism, but the author still writes well. If I can go back and change the male and female protagonists after the completion, I feel that I can directly publish the book as a god! ! ! ! !

It's not bad. Apart from the unpleasantness of the heroine being kidnapped by that light's morality, it's quite interesting to watch. Come on, author.

It looks good, and the presentation is really suitable for me as a college student, and the author's imagination is still acceptable. Special praise to the author for putting character pictures at the back. This is the first time I have seen such a good author. I really cried to death. I must support [top post] [top post] [top post] [admiration] [admiration] [admiration] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss]

I have only read the early stage so far. I think the novel is still good, but it has several problems. I felt that the storyline was neither interesting nor heavy enough, and the story connection was rather stiff. I understand that the author wanted to write a sweet story with a bit of edge, but the effect was not attractive enough. In terms of characters, the protagonist has an average personality, average qualifications, and lacks charisma in my opinion. The system's function in the early stage is monotonous, and there is no gagging with the protagonist (so there is a lack of fun). The supporting characters have distinct personalities, but some of them are too clownish, which sometimes makes people feel inferior. There are also some minor problems with the world view and the feel of the writing. I also jumped and looked at the back, and it felt pretty good. Overall, it is a good novel and recommended reading. (∩_∩)

The book is very good, thank you to the author! (By the way, is there a group?)

Two heroines, one a fairy and one a demon, who are cultivators of immortality and accompany each other on the journey of reincarnation in a stream of redemption. The existence of the emotional line is very reasonable and not obtrusive. Resist destiny, fight destiny, change destiny. Faced with the injustice and oppression of fate, the heroine of this article is a woman, but she is able to dare to love and hate, be clear about grudges, and repay kindness with gratitude. He has a free and easy temperament, a sweet temperament, a generous person, and does not stick to trivial matters. Unyielding in struggle and self-reliant, compassionate but not a saint. There is also weakness in being strong and independent, and he is dedicated and serious in his feelings. The links are closely linked, orderly, and come slowly. The world view is grand and vast but not chaotic. The remaining characters have full and rich relationships. Any one of these is wonderful, and this book is all in one. It is truly a fairy product.

Among the few books I have been following recently, I am more optimistic about this one. Because I prefer slow pace and I also like the heroine's character I won't elaborate too much on the plot. It's a cool article. Why do you care so much? [Top post] Finished with flowers 🎉

Overall, it was pretty good. Ling'er's relationship seemed a bit sudden at first (maybe because of Ran Bing's good looks, after all, who doesn't love beauties). It felt a bit awkward, but it got better later on, and they fell in love sweetly. But later, because of Ran Bing's design to release the ferocious beasts, many people died. The heroine put aside her sadness, and personally felt that she was too holy. However, the heroine thought that she was not strong enough, so she worked hard to improve her cultivation. Later, she started to be sweet again after chatting with Ran Bing. Another thing that attracts me about this book is that the plot of cultivating immortality is so well written, it suits my taste very well, and it doesn't drag out at all. I like it very much! The author writes very well! The ending was pretty good after watching it

We don't know what kind of male-female video this is, but those who want to see girls posting may be disappointed, because although there are two female protagonists, except for the two female protagonists, there are currently four female characters, two villains, a mother and a senior sister. The remaining characters around the female protagonist, including spiritual pets, are all male, and there may be a gay part [Petrification], so male compatriots should be careful not to enter. The subsequent plot is extremely rushed, but fortunately there are a few more female spiritual pets around? Anyway, at least the male-female ratio is no longer out of balance. It's okay. I don't know if the plot is rushed or compact. Anyway, it feels like the pace of the plot has suddenly become faster [laughing]

I hope the author can write more about the relationship between the two protagonists ~ [Adoration] Come on, author! ! ! 😄 Only those who work hard to update are good authors [laughing evilly]