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Very pretty but no one is looking at it

Eh? Has no one read such a beautiful book?

Wc, I really recommend this book!!!!! Md, it's really beautiful!!!(｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

This novel is so beautifully written! ! Why do so few people watch it? First of all, I like the character of the heroine very much. She is not a virgin, has a good temper, can distinguish between love and hate, is ice-smart, and loves her family and friends very much. She is even willing to die for the safety of her family. I love this kind of heroine! ! (づ￣³￣)づThe original plot and the self-created plot are also very well written. They have not collapsed due to the addition of the heroine, but will change for the better. For example, Whitebeard is not dead, and Ace is not dead either. The characters' personalities have not collapsed, nor have they been damaged by the arrival of the heroine, such as the vigilance of Luffy's partners, the intimidation of Whitebeard, the red hair and Ace's feelings for Roger, the Pirate King, etc. The author describes the characters' psychology, movements, expressions, and personalities very well! ! (´∀｀)♡It's quite graphic. For example, when the heroine changes from male to female, the brothers warn the men not to look at the heroine's appearance, etc. Thank you for your hard work, author! Keep up the hard work and update! Let us readers continue to read the story between the heroine and the characters! I will recommend this novel to others too! The author works hard to write a perfect ending! ! (*˘˘*). .:*♡[Send heart][Send heart][Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Love][Love]

Personally, I think the plot of the story is very good. I like it very much. It has passionate fights, comedy, and a plot about the importance of family. The content is quite rich. I don't feel bad after reading it in one day, so the author will hurry up and update it. Come on.

Thank you to the author for writing a beautiful emotional line. The protagonist does not rely on the system to grow up, and she sincerely treats all the people who are good to her. I hope the author will not end the story, then I will always support your novel, love you (ɔˆ ³(ˆ⌣ˆc)

I really like this, there is no CP and no ambiguous lines, just family and friendship, I really like it!

Don't say anything else! Anyway I think yyds! First of all, the heroine herself has very delicate feelings and is super gentle. She treats Ace, Safu, and Luffy very well. The heroine would take the trouble to tell Ace over and over again how good he is, how great it is that he could be born successfully, and that she and her parents (Roger and his wife) are looking forward to his birth, etc. (Anyway, I am a girl, emotional, and it hit my mark hard. I was super touched) Later, due to some reasons (I won't go into details about spoilers), the heroine dyed her hair black, which was the same color as Ace and Luffy's hair. She also specially dyed a strand of blond hair with highlights. She took it out and said to Safu, "Look! It's Safu's color! Next time I have a chance to dye my hair, I'll change it, dye it blonde and then dye it black." When Safu was a child, he was hit by a bomb. The heroine blocked most of the impact, even worse than Safu, but still kept silent. She just called Garp intermittently and cried uneasily. She cried for three hours in three sentences, all expressing her fear and what to do if Safu was not saved (so many details particularly touched my heart) No matter how old she is, the heroine is still the sister of Ace, Safu, and Luffy. She habitually gives good morning kisses and good night kisses to directly express her love. Luffy even made a habit out of this good morning kiss If the heroine gives Luffy a kiss and says good night, then he will definitely fall asleep on the spot or something. Get used to the company of my family, all kinds of details, super warm everyday! It's not a waste to write an article! ! Explode! ! The character design is not broken yet, and the inner activities of various characters are well understood.

Very nice! It brings tears to my eyes. For things written about family members, I will always be shocked by the emotions in them. It makes me cry (p_q) It's so cute, Lily. I'm really happy to see my life after things are resolved. I'm really happy⊙▽⊙

Mom! Why is it so beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! ! ||Φ|(|T|Д|T|)|Φ||

Get up there! A work that is both funny and tearful. Seriously read this, every regret is made up for, super attentive author, cute and interesting [love] My sister has become more and more cute in recent chapters [shy][shy]

I feel so good that I have nothing to say

It's very beautiful, very beautiful [Sending my heart] I hope there will be more warm daily life with my brothers and everyone (*˘˘*).｡.:*♡

WCWCWC, so beautiful, I also want to have a sister like this [crying]

This is really amazing, I admire it

So pretty! ! ! As long as you keep updating this writing style and plot, everything will be easy to say

Nice! A very novel perspective!

Very good but too short

[Like] [Love] [Love] The younger brother controls the domineering older sister, which is quite funny.

It's really super pretty! ! ! Come on!

Good-looking, very good-looking, haha

Very interesting, good luck to the author

Is it also available on Lof? I feel like I saw it on lof

It's so cool. This is the best pirate fanfic I've ever seen.

Very nice looking

Like this book very much

Pretty good, Tie Zi

Awesome, I like it very much [get it]

Chapter 63 so far, feels good.

The pace is tight but not chaotic, and the writing is already very good. Still, the female protagonist can be written so well in One Piece. I hope to continue to work hard.