I'm working part-time at a burger restaurant near the school! Inexplicably caught in a storm! Trapped in a strange world! And being treated as pets are sold over the counter! Every wild monster here can kill me! Even the weakest Rat Man is richer than me! I don't even have a pair of shoes! Not to mention weapons and equipment skills! Can I really find my way home?
Special reminder: This novel is a novel with many elements (that is, stitch monsters). It is a slow-burning type that requires a little patience. Readers who are not familiar with the system will be explained in detail in the early stage, and will be briefly mentioned in the middle and later stages, so as not to delay the reader's appreciation.
If you encounter something you don't like, you can comment boldly, and the young author will accept it humbly. Thank you readers for your great appreciation!
Reader comments
Although many parts of the book read strangely, it is overall very comfortable. The subject matter is novel, the world view is grand, and it incorporates many themes.
The main body of the first chapter is similar to the Western Magical World plus system, followed by the starry sky and cultivating immortals. Regardless of the writing technique, the story is very exciting.
🌚Yo Xida is so beautiful
Although it's a stitch monster, it's a stitch monster, but... It's so beautiful! ! ! , I think the naming of the book is a bit bad, I would like to give you a suggestion, change the name to "The Rotten Stars ● Chaotic Universe", what do you think about the naming? What do you think, author? If you insist on extending this novel and opening a relay book, you can change it to "__ __ __" according to the title of the book. __●Chaotic Universe", the first four words, it depends on the author to write the name, such as human relations, finding the way home, the golden orchid, the disaster of the flower, etc. If you write the four words, it depends on the author's writing ability. They must overlap, the focus is on overlap. Do not write a separate and separated environment when you see the four words. After all, the last four words of the chaotic universe are there and overlap, which is a test of the author's writing ability and is also full of challenges. Come on, author!
It's not easy to write a book, so it's a five-star review.
The demining is completed, fantasy imagination + class system + first person. In fact, the opening ideas and settings are quite interesting (I'm sure it's self-made), but later on, due to the random writing and the plot being too complicated, it basically collapsed. (The outline must be written well. In fact, it would be better if you keep following the steady style at the beginning and follow the growth path. I have to say that the sudden leap-forward improvement of Pig's Feet is really impressive.)
The writing is very good, cheers for the author [Like]
It's okay, but the content is a bit sparse. For old Internet users, it feels like I just had a small taste. I just felt the deliciousness. When I opened my eyes, I saw that everything was gone.
The first-person book is still very good, especially the alarm clock. It can relieve your boredom when you are tired of reading it, but the combat power is not very clear (it may also be the reason why I did not finish reading)
A super melting pot with a huge world view. Reincarnation survival and multi-dimensional battlefield, looking forward to the next one
I've finished reading it, it's a rare masterpiece.
The ingredients are complex, Terraria, Pokémon, this is a stitching monster, the key is that it can be stitched [shocked]
The feeling of unfinished content. I don't know when the new excitement will start. [Like] [Like] [Like] Looking forward to it
The writing is very good, but why does the whole book end when the world of black resentment is finished? I'm still waiting for the follow-up!
You are looking at the bridge and I am reading a book.
The author hasn't written yet, so why is it finished?
When will I write Chapter 2?
Very interesting, good luck to the author
The plot is very good
The book is okay, but I'm a little uncomfortable with the viewing angle.
Yes, yes, yes, it cured my problem of dying without quotation marks.
I like the author very much. Is there any follow-up?
The whole book is good, I like this type of book, but it's too short
The idea is good, and it can be justified. However, the protagonist has too many skills, equipment, and props. Shouldn't it be refined?
Looks good, looks good, looks good!
Taolu new IQ online
It's very interesting and interesting. Come on, author.
Although many parts of the book read strangely, it is overall very comfortable. The subject matter is novel, the world view is grand, and it incorporates many themes. The main body of the first chapter is similar to the Western Magical World plus system, followed by the starry sky and cultivating immortals. Regardless of the writing technique, the story is very exciting.
🌚Yo Xida is so beautiful
Although it's a stitch monster, it's a stitch monster, but... It's so beautiful! ! ! , I think the naming of the book is a bit bad, I would like to give you a suggestion, change the name to "The Rotten Stars ● Chaotic Universe", what do you think about the naming? What do you think, author? If you insist on extending this novel and opening a relay book, you can change it to "__ __ __" according to the title of the book. __●Chaotic Universe", the first four words, it depends on the author to write the name, such as human relations, finding the way home, the golden orchid, the disaster of the flower, etc. If you write the four words, it depends on the author's writing ability. They must overlap, the focus is on overlap. Do not write a separate and separated environment when you see the four words. After all, the last four words of the chaotic universe are there and overlap, which is a test of the author's writing ability and is also full of challenges. Come on, author!
It's not easy to write a book, so it's a five-star review. The demining is completed, fantasy imagination + class system + first person. In fact, the opening ideas and settings are quite interesting (I'm sure it's self-made), but later on, due to the random writing and the plot being too complicated, it basically collapsed. (The outline must be written well. In fact, it would be better if you keep following the steady style at the beginning and follow the growth path. I have to say that the sudden leap-forward improvement of Pig's Feet is really impressive.)
The writing is very good, cheers for the author [Like]
It's okay, but the content is a bit sparse. For old Internet users, it feels like I just had a small taste. I just felt the deliciousness. When I opened my eyes, I saw that everything was gone.
The first-person book is still very good, especially the alarm clock. It can relieve your boredom when you are tired of reading it, but the combat power is not very clear (it may also be the reason why I did not finish reading)
A super melting pot with a huge world view. Reincarnation survival and multi-dimensional battlefield, looking forward to the next one
I've finished reading it, it's a rare masterpiece.
The ingredients are complex, Terraria, Pokémon, this is a stitching monster, the key is that it can be stitched [shocked]
The feeling of unfinished content. I don't know when the new excitement will start. [Like] [Like] [Like] Looking forward to it
The writing is very good, but why does the whole book end when the world of black resentment is finished? I'm still waiting for the follow-up!
You are looking at the bridge and I am reading a book. The author hasn't written yet, so why is it finished?
When will I write Chapter 2?
Very interesting, good luck to the author
The plot is very good
The book is okay, but I'm a little uncomfortable with the viewing angle.
Yes, yes, yes, it cured my problem of dying without quotation marks.
I like the author very much. Is there any follow-up?
The whole book is good, I like this type of book, but it's too short
The idea is good, and it can be justified. However, the protagonist has too many skills, equipment, and props. Shouldn't it be refined?
Looks good, looks good, looks good!
Taolu new IQ online
It's very interesting and interesting. Come on, author.