Baby, Don't Cry, Come Here and Give Me a Kiss

I looked at a plane and it was quite frustrating. This one is pitiful and that one is pitiful. You said that Gu Linshen's life experience is pitiful. That's true, but can those bad things be written off in one go? He made Yan Ling pretend to be with the male protagonist and then abandoned him, stimulated the male protagonist's mother who was already mentally ill, poisoned his own grandfather, delayed Yan Ling for several years and finally cleared it up with a few meaningful looks. All of these were enough to wipe out all the years of using a sewing machine because he lacked love? Can you finally find an official partner and live a happy life? And Yan Ling, a love brain in her last life, actually asked her own father to be rescued in order to save Gu Linshen. In the end, her family was ruined. She said that she took care of the male protagonist's mother because of guilt, but it turned out that Gu Linshen stole the company secrets with one sentence, causing the male protagonist to go bankrupt. I really didn't expect that I could clear my name like this, with an official supporting role and a silly drama about running around with the ball. Moreover, the main plot is also written in a mess. The relationship between the hero and his mother was not resolved in the end. The unrequited love line was grinding. The protagonist did not appear as often as the whitewashed supporting characters, and they were not together in the end.

In this book, Gong is really very gentle, and he is also very good to Shou before bending. Shou is close to the title of the book, but the content is also very good. I hope it can be updated soon [please update] I took the time to read the last part, but I didn't expect that the Republic of China and the final chapter would be a feeling I didn't expect. The change behind the attack is quite fast, and especially the ending, it's Narcissus [face covering], I didn't expect it, but it's okay [already planted]

No, I could barely see the first two worlds. The last world made me redefine offline. No, I still haven't figured it out. Are the people around me suffering from serious illnesses? From Shou himself to the boy next to him, I know that his soul is split. I can see that, let alone what happened to his soul, no matter what, he saved Shou, right? As a result, what happened to the other half of his soul, what happened to the boy next to him, a good guy with white eyes, right? That boy really opened up a new world, but he still called him "Master", which really made me laugh to death. When talking, can you think about what you do? His young master didn't say anything to make him talk too much? He needs to be sarcastic, who is whose savior? The master and the servant are all white-eyed, right? Some people may say that this is the Republic of China and they also gave money. Damn it. That boy didn't even give Gong a good look when he walked in. He was so sarcastic. He knew that Gong had saved his young master and he didn't even apologize. Why was he so proud? Who was he? Why was her young master a human being but others were not human beings? What's the matter, you have to mock people because they are poor? What the hell is he? Can you think about your identity when you speak? No matter how low Gong's status is in this world, Gong saved Shou and must have a conscience, but as a result, he even apologized in an unclear and unwilling manner, while Shou tolerated him. The master and the servant looked at each other with blank eyes. The first time they met the boy for the second time, they started with a mockery... What is his identity and qualifications? What qualifications does he have? He must be a little bit seriously ill, there are so many white-eyed wolves

There are too few emotional lines, and the descriptions of some supporting characters are very good and three-dimensional. But I can't tell who the protagonist is, and I haven't clearly stated the relationship between the original plot and the present. Well, it's just some relationship. I think there are some bad people in it, but everyone has difficulties like this in the end. And in the end all the benefits were taken away by people I felt bad about! I worked hard for the company but got nothing in the end. Although the protagonist was willing, I didn't feel that I was being abused. In the end, it was all given to Lin Xingrang, which I really didn't understand.

It's well written, but I didn't see the emotional line [face covering]

To be honest, Haha's emotional lines are a bit lacking. Sometimes I don't know what I'm writing, and the main plot is not clear.

I'm not saying that. First, I didn't see much of the emotional line. Secondly, we haven't confessed to each other and the memory is blocked. With this development, when can we be together? The third and second world has been written for so long, but I feel that the supporting characters are more described than the protagonists, and it's been so long and I haven't seen the confession yet.

It's a pity that the two of them are not together, but the ending is not bad, but I don't see any abuse, it seems a bit too much, Gu Linshen is a bit pitiful, but poor people must be hateful,

To reduce the black male protagonist who has been abused since childhood, the protagonist, as the younger brother of the black male protagonist's ex-girlfriend, gave the black male protagonist a few meals, and asked the system why the black male protagonist's black color value dropped so slowly [face covering] It's good to send a few meals to lower the black color value. What else can you do by yourself? Che [facepalm] and there are no absolute bad guys in the plot. The blackened male protagonist is not bad at all, and his ex-girlfriend is also a good person. Even the ex-girlfriend cheated on the blackmailed male protagonist's brother, who was also abused since childhood [facepalm]. In short, the plot line is very complicated, and the male protagonist's family is very weird.

The author does not understand general physiological knowledge, such as the possibility of having sex when drunk, and there is also a bit of prioritization. The main character's plot is too small and very streamlined, and many supporting characters' stories have nothing to do with the main character. This treatment not only does not reflect any emotions or reasons, but also makes the novel feel chaotic. If the author wants to write a group portrait If you want to write such a novel, it is recommended to write other types of novels. The plot of a fast-travel novel usually focuses on the protagonist, because a world is generally short. It is difficult to write well about the two protagonists, and the emotional handling is not very good. There is no obvious emotional line and the love story begins. I feel that the author may be a novice, so I suggest you practice with some mindless novels such as heartthrobs and the like.