[Two male protagonists, the main attacker, two strong men who torture and scumbag, sweet and flirty, yandere and paranoid]
(Completed)
In order to survive, Yan Feng travels into the Three Thousand Worlds to bring warmth to the beautiful and powerful male protagonists. They may be talented or powerful, but their lives are miserable, never see the light of day, and are not loved by others. They eventually become black, with millions of corpses floating on the top of their hands. The strong CEO's eyes turned red: "Yan Feng, you provoked me first, do you want to run away?" The yandere autistic bamboo horse: "Yan Yan, you said you like me, you must always like me, otherwise..."
Reader comments
I looked at a plane and it was quite frustrating. This one is pitiful and that one is pitiful. You said that Gu Linshen's life experience is pitiful. That's true, but can those bad things be written off in one go? He made Yan Ling pretend to be with the male protagonist and then abandoned him, stimulated the male protagonist's mother who was already mentally ill, poisoned his own grandfather, delayed Yan Ling for several years and finally cleared it up with a few meaningful looks. All of these were enough to wipe out all the years of using a sewing machine because he lacked love? Can you finally find an official partner and live a happy life?
And Yan Ling, a love brain in her last life, actually asked her own father to be rescued in order to save Gu Linshen. In the end, her family was ruined. She said that she took care of the male protagonist's mother because of guilt, but it turned out that Gu Linshen stole the company secrets with one sentence, causing the male protagonist to go bankrupt. I really didn't expect that I could clear my name like this, with an official supporting role and a silly drama about running around with the ball.
Moreover, the main plot is also written in a mess. The relationship between the hero and his mother was not resolved in the end. The unrequited love line was grinding. The protagonist did not appear as often as the whitewashed supporting characters, and they were not together in the end.
In this book, Gong is really very gentle, and he is also very good to Shou before bending. Shou is close to the title of the book, but the content is also very good. I hope it can be updated soon [please update]
I took the time to read the last part, but I didn't expect that the Republic of China and the final chapter would be a feeling I didn't expect. The change behind the attack is quite fast, and especially the ending, it's Narcissus [face covering], I didn't expect it, but it's okay [already planted]
No, I could barely see the first two worlds. The last world made me redefine offline. No, I still haven't figured it out. Are the people around me suffering from serious illnesses? From Shou himself to the boy next to him, I know that his soul is split. I can see that, let alone what happened to his soul, no matter what, he saved Shou, right? As a result, what happened to the other half of his soul, what happened to the boy next to him, a good guy with white eyes, right? That boy really opened up a new world, but he still called him "Master", which really made me laugh to death. When talking, can you think about what you do? His young master didn't say anything to make him talk too much? He needs to be sarcastic, who is whose savior? The master and the servant are all white-eyed, right? Some people may say that this is the Republic of China and they also gave money. Damn it. That boy didn't even give Gong a good look when he walked in. He was so sarcastic. He knew that Gong had saved his young master and he didn't even apologize. Why was he so proud? Who was he? Why was her young master a human being but others were not human beings? What's the matter, you have to mock people because they are poor? What the hell is he? Can you think about your identity when you speak? No matter how low Gong's status is in this world, Gong saved Shou and must have a conscience, but as a result, he even apologized in an unclear and unwilling manner, while Shou tolerated him. The master and the servant looked at each other with blank eyes. The first time they met the boy for the second time, they started with a mockery... What is his identity and qualifications? What qualifications does he have? He must be a little bit seriously ill, there are so many white-eyed wolves
There are too few emotional lines, and the descriptions of some supporting characters are very good and three-dimensional. But I can't tell who the protagonist is, and I haven't clearly stated the relationship between the original plot and the present. Well, it's just some relationship. I think there are some bad people in it, but everyone has difficulties like this in the end. And in the end all the benefits were taken away by people I felt bad about! I worked hard for the company but got nothing in the end. Although the protagonist was willing, I didn't feel that I was being abused. In the end, it was all given to Lin Xingrang, which I really didn't understand.
It's well written, but I didn't see the emotional line [face covering]
To be honest, Haha's emotional lines are a bit lacking. Sometimes I don't know what I'm writing, and the main plot is not clear.
I'm not saying that. First, I didn't see much of the emotional line.
Secondly, we haven't confessed to each other and the memory is blocked. With this development, when can we be together?
The third and second world has been written for so long, but I feel that the supporting characters are more described than the protagonists, and it's been so long and I haven't seen the confession yet.
It's a pity that the two of them are not together, but the ending is not bad, but I don't see any abuse, it seems a bit too much, Gu Linshen is a bit pitiful, but poor people must be hateful,
To reduce the black male protagonist who has been abused since childhood, the protagonist, as the younger brother of the black male protagonist's ex-girlfriend, gave the black male protagonist a few meals, and asked the system why the black male protagonist's black color value dropped so slowly [face covering] It's good to send a few meals to lower the black color value. What else can you do by yourself? Che [facepalm] and there are no absolute bad guys in the plot. The blackened male protagonist is not bad at all, and his ex-girlfriend is also a good person. Even the ex-girlfriend cheated on the blackmailed male protagonist's brother, who was also abused since childhood [facepalm]. In short, the plot line is very complicated, and the male protagonist's family is very weird.
The author does not understand general physiological knowledge, such as the possibility of having sex when drunk, and there is also a bit of prioritization. The main character's plot is too small and very streamlined, and many supporting characters' stories have nothing to do with the main character. This treatment not only does not reflect any emotions or reasons, but also makes the novel feel chaotic. If the author wants to write a group portrait If you want to write such a novel, it is recommended to write other types of novels. The plot of a fast-travel novel usually focuses on the protagonist, because a world is generally short. It is difficult to write well about the two protagonists, and the emotional handling is not very good. There is no obvious emotional line and the love story begins. I feel that the author may be a novice, so I suggest you practice with some mindless novels such as heartthrobs and the like.
Ahhhh! I really don't understand why the author previously described Yan Ling as using Shou and betraying Shou. As a result, because of Gong's appearance, the plot of using Shou and dumping Shou has not yet been developed. The plot of stealing the plan has not had time to develop. Isn't this a villain? [Angry] In the end, the author gave her a good ending. Well, it's hard to comment. He just took advantage of her, but she liked him and she was willing to do so. Isn't this just a case of one willing to fight and the other willing to suffer? ![Angry][Angry] Can this **** also have a good ending? Moreover, Gong doesn't have any problem with Yanling's use of Shou's betrayal. As a person with a God's perspective, he is still very good to Yanling. It's long since Shou was not the protagonist. Maybe the author likes this supporting role [smile]
I don't know why it feels more and more confusing as I watch it. The second world ends suddenly. I don't think it's okay because the supporting characters account for a large proportion, but the ending is very rushed and feels a bit like it has no beginning or end (especially the second world). It seems that there is a lot of foreshadowing written in the front, but It feels like I just wrote it to death when I didn't want to write about it anymore (such as the adopted son of the supporting character, and the pair of thorns). But the main character line of the second world is very delicate. I didn't read the comments until I finished the second world. Now I'm a little confused whether to continue reading it or not.
I am coming. [Lick screen]
Good good, update soon [sending heart] [sending heart]
The author writes well. When will it be updated? Come on! ! ! !
The author writes well, but when can the two of them be together?
The supporting characters account for a large proportion. In the first world, the character lines are also very messy. There are more supporting characters in the protagonist's family, including the grandson, the eldest grandson, and the main character's sister. The sister of the protagonist's family has more emotional lines than the protagonist.
Well written! I hope the author will continue writing! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]
There are so few emotional lines, I don't understand why the supporting characters appear more often than the protagonist [smile]
The first two worlds can be regarded as be. In the first world, it feels like the two male protagonists get along and become brothers, and the supporting roles play more roles than the protagonists, which is a bit indifferent; in the second world, the main and deputy CPs are both be, and the protagonist Gong is enlightened, but it stops abruptly before it starts; in the third world, it is he, but the protagonist Gong seems to be a bit of a dog-licker, and the people around the protagonist seem to be seriously ill.
After watching the first world, there is no distinction between priority and secondary, and the attack and the end are not together. Mainly written about the spiritual love brain, and finally awakened. . Have all the bad guys been cleared? I didn't pay attention, anyway, it wasn't cruel.
The author has written more romance stories before, probably [face covering]
Not bad, good looking. The first world is a bit regretful, but it looks good.
The content is very filling, and I personally think the second story is more complete, more like a small world and a complete plot story, a complete book.
I like it very much❤️(✪ω✪)
The content of this book is relatively... Very novel🌹
Yes, the plot is very novel, the characters are emotionally invested, and it's very interesting to watch (very sure) [I learned it]
Super pretty
I've been reading this book for a long time. The emotional line between the two parties in this book is not obvious. It's just that their relationship is very confusing. I like the second world better, so it's okay. Keep up the good work.
I really cry for you, do you believe it? [Cry][cry][cry]
It's very beautiful [flying kiss] [flying kiss], come and take a look, maybe it will suit your taste
I looked at a plane and it was quite frustrating. This one is pitiful and that one is pitiful. You said that Gu Linshen's life experience is pitiful. That's true, but can those bad things be written off in one go? He made Yan Ling pretend to be with the male protagonist and then abandoned him, stimulated the male protagonist's mother who was already mentally ill, poisoned his own grandfather, delayed Yan Ling for several years and finally cleared it up with a few meaningful looks. All of these were enough to wipe out all the years of using a sewing machine because he lacked love? Can you finally find an official partner and live a happy life? And Yan Ling, a love brain in her last life, actually asked her own father to be rescued in order to save Gu Linshen. In the end, her family was ruined. She said that she took care of the male protagonist's mother because of guilt, but it turned out that Gu Linshen stole the company secrets with one sentence, causing the male protagonist to go bankrupt. I really didn't expect that I could clear my name like this, with an official supporting role and a silly drama about running around with the ball. Moreover, the main plot is also written in a mess. The relationship between the hero and his mother was not resolved in the end. The unrequited love line was grinding. The protagonist did not appear as often as the whitewashed supporting characters, and they were not together in the end.
In this book, Gong is really very gentle, and he is also very good to Shou before bending. Shou is close to the title of the book, but the content is also very good. I hope it can be updated soon [please update] I took the time to read the last part, but I didn't expect that the Republic of China and the final chapter would be a feeling I didn't expect. The change behind the attack is quite fast, and especially the ending, it's Narcissus [face covering], I didn't expect it, but it's okay [already planted]
No, I could barely see the first two worlds. The last world made me redefine offline. No, I still haven't figured it out. Are the people around me suffering from serious illnesses? From Shou himself to the boy next to him, I know that his soul is split. I can see that, let alone what happened to his soul, no matter what, he saved Shou, right? As a result, what happened to the other half of his soul, what happened to the boy next to him, a good guy with white eyes, right? That boy really opened up a new world, but he still called him "Master", which really made me laugh to death. When talking, can you think about what you do? His young master didn't say anything to make him talk too much? He needs to be sarcastic, who is whose savior? The master and the servant are all white-eyed, right? Some people may say that this is the Republic of China and they also gave money. Damn it. That boy didn't even give Gong a good look when he walked in. He was so sarcastic. He knew that Gong had saved his young master and he didn't even apologize. Why was he so proud? Who was he? Why was her young master a human being but others were not human beings? What's the matter, you have to mock people because they are poor? What the hell is he? Can you think about your identity when you speak? No matter how low Gong's status is in this world, Gong saved Shou and must have a conscience, but as a result, he even apologized in an unclear and unwilling manner, while Shou tolerated him. The master and the servant looked at each other with blank eyes. The first time they met the boy for the second time, they started with a mockery... What is his identity and qualifications? What qualifications does he have? He must be a little bit seriously ill, there are so many white-eyed wolves
There are too few emotional lines, and the descriptions of some supporting characters are very good and three-dimensional. But I can't tell who the protagonist is, and I haven't clearly stated the relationship between the original plot and the present. Well, it's just some relationship. I think there are some bad people in it, but everyone has difficulties like this in the end. And in the end all the benefits were taken away by people I felt bad about! I worked hard for the company but got nothing in the end. Although the protagonist was willing, I didn't feel that I was being abused. In the end, it was all given to Lin Xingrang, which I really didn't understand.
It's well written, but I didn't see the emotional line [face covering]
To be honest, Haha's emotional lines are a bit lacking. Sometimes I don't know what I'm writing, and the main plot is not clear.
I'm not saying that. First, I didn't see much of the emotional line. Secondly, we haven't confessed to each other and the memory is blocked. With this development, when can we be together? The third and second world has been written for so long, but I feel that the supporting characters are more described than the protagonists, and it's been so long and I haven't seen the confession yet.
It's a pity that the two of them are not together, but the ending is not bad, but I don't see any abuse, it seems a bit too much, Gu Linshen is a bit pitiful, but poor people must be hateful,
To reduce the black male protagonist who has been abused since childhood, the protagonist, as the younger brother of the black male protagonist's ex-girlfriend, gave the black male protagonist a few meals, and asked the system why the black male protagonist's black color value dropped so slowly [face covering] It's good to send a few meals to lower the black color value. What else can you do by yourself? Che [facepalm] and there are no absolute bad guys in the plot. The blackened male protagonist is not bad at all, and his ex-girlfriend is also a good person. Even the ex-girlfriend cheated on the blackmailed male protagonist's brother, who was also abused since childhood [facepalm]. In short, the plot line is very complicated, and the male protagonist's family is very weird.
The author does not understand general physiological knowledge, such as the possibility of having sex when drunk, and there is also a bit of prioritization. The main character's plot is too small and very streamlined, and many supporting characters' stories have nothing to do with the main character. This treatment not only does not reflect any emotions or reasons, but also makes the novel feel chaotic. If the author wants to write a group portrait If you want to write such a novel, it is recommended to write other types of novels. The plot of a fast-travel novel usually focuses on the protagonist, because a world is generally short. It is difficult to write well about the two protagonists, and the emotional handling is not very good. There is no obvious emotional line and the love story begins. I feel that the author may be a novice, so I suggest you practice with some mindless novels such as heartthrobs and the like.
Ahhhh! I really don't understand why the author previously described Yan Ling as using Shou and betraying Shou. As a result, because of Gong's appearance, the plot of using Shou and dumping Shou has not yet been developed. The plot of stealing the plan has not had time to develop. Isn't this a villain? [Angry] In the end, the author gave her a good ending. Well, it's hard to comment. He just took advantage of her, but she liked him and she was willing to do so. Isn't this just a case of one willing to fight and the other willing to suffer? ![Angry][Angry] Can this **** also have a good ending? Moreover, Gong doesn't have any problem with Yanling's use of Shou's betrayal. As a person with a God's perspective, he is still very good to Yanling. It's long since Shou was not the protagonist. Maybe the author likes this supporting role [smile]
I don't know why it feels more and more confusing as I watch it. The second world ends suddenly. I don't think it's okay because the supporting characters account for a large proportion, but the ending is very rushed and feels a bit like it has no beginning or end (especially the second world). It seems that there is a lot of foreshadowing written in the front, but It feels like I just wrote it to death when I didn't want to write about it anymore (such as the adopted son of the supporting character, and the pair of thorns). But the main character line of the second world is very delicate. I didn't read the comments until I finished the second world. Now I'm a little confused whether to continue reading it or not.
I am coming. [Lick screen]
Good good, update soon [sending heart] [sending heart]
The author writes well. When will it be updated? Come on! ! ! !
The author writes well, but when can the two of them be together?
The supporting characters account for a large proportion. In the first world, the character lines are also very messy. There are more supporting characters in the protagonist's family, including the grandson, the eldest grandson, and the main character's sister. The sister of the protagonist's family has more emotional lines than the protagonist.
Well written! I hope the author will continue writing! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]
There are so few emotional lines, I don't understand why the supporting characters appear more often than the protagonist [smile]
The first two worlds can be regarded as be. In the first world, it feels like the two male protagonists get along and become brothers, and the supporting roles play more roles than the protagonists, which is a bit indifferent; in the second world, the main and deputy CPs are both be, and the protagonist Gong is enlightened, but it stops abruptly before it starts; in the third world, it is he, but the protagonist Gong seems to be a bit of a dog-licker, and the people around the protagonist seem to be seriously ill.
After watching the first world, there is no distinction between priority and secondary, and the attack and the end are not together. Mainly written about the spiritual love brain, and finally awakened. . Have all the bad guys been cleared? I didn't pay attention, anyway, it wasn't cruel. The author has written more romance stories before, probably [face covering]
Not bad, good looking. The first world is a bit regretful, but it looks good.
The content is very filling, and I personally think the second story is more complete, more like a small world and a complete plot story, a complete book. I like it very much❤️(✪ω✪) The content of this book is relatively... Very novel🌹
Yes, the plot is very novel, the characters are emotionally invested, and it's very interesting to watch (very sure) [I learned it]
Super pretty I've been reading this book for a long time. The emotional line between the two parties in this book is not obvious. It's just that their relationship is very confusing. I like the second world better, so it's okay. Keep up the good work.
I really cry for you, do you believe it? [Cry][cry][cry]
It's very beautiful [flying kiss] [flying kiss], come and take a look, maybe it will suit your taste
Big cheers for the author!
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
Is Shou the same person?