Something's Wrong! My System of Cultivating Immortals Is Poisonous!

Author, I can say that this book you wrote is particularly appealing to me. I personally think that if you have a good foundation in cultivating immortals, why should you be a little more cautious? Moreover, the protagonist's IQ is online, and the scenarios are rich. It makes people immerse themselves in it. Anyway, when I read this book, it is easy for me to unknowingly immerse myself in the protagonist. It was very enjoyable to watch, and I really like this kind of behavior of cultivating immortality and slowly growing up!

Very nice (Ps: Don't ask me to help you make money in my comment area. If I really had a way, I would have done it myself)

A very good Goudao novel. The writing style and details are also good. The disadvantage is that a Qi training session requires almost 100 cards. It's so overwhelming. It's okay to choose other options occasionally.

The author is really powerful. This book is really good. It has no poisonous points so far. It is worth reading. What a clown

It's not easy to write a book, so it's a five-star review. The demining is completed, the immortal cultivation + selection system + success, the plot design is a little messy, and the patchwork can barely make it come true. Overall, it's average, slow to develop, more farming than fighting, and you can try it in the book shortage. (Demanding detour)

Overall, it looks pretty good. There are no big poisonous spots. The whole thing is actually quite bland, but there is no water injection or anything like that. If something happens to Pig's Feet, he really doesn't care about other people, and he really runs away.

It's really rare. It's very rare to see an author who uses the words "marketable but priceless" and "priceless but marketless" [laughs and cries] and even uses this word incorrectly and still uses it frequently. I really hope I can understand it better before writing. It's really embarrassing [laughing] But it's really rare that the author used [admiration] correctly! ! !

It's a very good novel. The protagonist may make some reckless choices at the beginning, but this is to teach the protagonist a lesson so that the protagonist will never dare to wander again. So book friends who love reading Lao Liu should not miss it, and don't think that the protagonist is flirting with you at the beginning. This is a reasonable foreshadowing. Only enough pain can prevent the protagonist from taking even a little risk later. So fellow Taoists who love Taoism, boldly enter the trap!

Cultivation of immortality step by step, just choose three in the end, very interesting. In the interface of cultivating immortals, justice and injustice are mutually exclusive, and strength is the truth. It is the same as in our world. If you are powerful, powerful, and rich, if you pretend, you will have a bright and positive image. If you have everything, but you can't pretend, then you will also have a positive image, haha.

The early stage is very good, the system tasks are carefully written, and the life of cultivation is quite natural and freehand. Unfortunately, from entering the secret realm to exiting the secret realm, that is, after building the foundation, there is too much emphasis on cultivation and killing. Changing the map is like changing the author, and the plot direction is somewhat different. Of course, those who like it will like it. As for me who is more inclined to the casual Taoist style, I can still watch it. If I encounter any fighting scenes, I will jump directly to the chapter and I don't have much expectations for the main plot line in the later period. Fang Xiang's The World of Cultivation is indeed a work that I once liked very much, so I felt a sense of intimacy when I read Ling Zhi Qijia's book.

This is the longevity novel, where years and decades pass at a time, not meddling in other people's business, and trying to improve. It's not like some immortality novels, where you live in the skin of immortality day by day, and you are invincible for more than ten years. You have to take care of everything, and you go wherever there is danger. This immortality is all in vain for him [laughing]

The ending is indeed hasty, and to be fair, it is not a five-star masterpiece. However, I would like to express my encouragement and appreciation to the five-star book - because this book shows a very reasonable world of immortality, the villains are not brainless, and everyone has their own little ninety-nine and their own reasonable choices, just like the real world. The male protagonist's resolute persistence is quite interesting compared to the Jedi counter-attacks that were popular in fantasy works in the past, and it also seems to reflect that people prefer to avoid risks in the current economic environment. The section about Xiaoyao City in this book left the deepest impression on me. It makes people feel that "this is a vivid and real world", which is also very valuable.

This is the type I like. Although there is a maid, there is no such thing as love and affection. You should enjoy it. If you want to separate, you should separate. You will not fall in love just because you are a woman, and you will not cause trouble for yourself if a woman follows you. That's what I like. It will not add stumbling blocks to your own path. I hope the author will keep it up, and hope there will be no ambiguity, blushing, or heartbeat in the later period. If there is, I will withdraw first.

It's very good. It has the style of Mr. Jin. He prepares the characters for their appearance, designs the stage conflicts and scene coincidences, and skillfully uses light and dark lines to construct the world view. It is very impressive in imitating the writing method of The Legend of the Condor Heroes. Compared with the current single-line narrative and pursuit of refreshing feeling in online articles, the artistic conception is more profound, and there are already traces of the master. Of course, there is still a big gap compared to the condensation of the masters and the natural blending of the stage composition and scenes. A good book is never afraid of being late. I sincerely hope that the author will not blindly update and reduce the quality in pursuit of speed. I will add it to my collection!

The male protagonist's character is too capable of enduring loneliness, and he is too stubborn. His mentality is very stable and he is not tempted at all in the face of temptation. Being dedicated to the Tao does not require too much emotion. The early plot is a bit slow. It is too difficult to improve one's cultivation, but it is also very real. However, the final chapter is too hasty and ends hastily in a few sentences. It is difficult to imagine how the male protagonist survived the last ten thousand years. Is he really not lonely? Waiting for ten thousand years to ascend in order to send the dragon egg away is too cowardly. Only a person like him with endless years can live no matter how long he is.

The writing is good, I thought it was okay in the early stage, and it was okay in the middle stage. And now I have seen more than 150 pieces of "Hong Chen Jue" and feel that it is very well written. If you really like this, I highly recommend it.

If you want to read without cp, just go to chapter 167. The protagonist in the back has a maid, and the first chapter of chapter 167 is pretty good, so it's my cup of tea (it's the kind of thing where you stay up late to read, but it ends badly) (personal reading experience)

In addition to being short and the plot speeding up in the later stages, it at least has an ending that allows you to read the entire book. This should be the first book I read in Tomato [face covering]

It's true that it can't be rated five stars, after all, there are only more than 200 chapters. There is a saying that the writing style is indeed good, and the story is okay. You can read it without thinking too much, but it is too short. However, the author said that it is the first book, so it is barely acceptable. I personally like this book quite a lot. I have always felt that the wonderful description of the world of cultivating immortals lies in the details. After waiting for the golden elixir, it basically just looks at an event. Although this book has few words, it roughly conforms to my ideas, so I gave it four stars [eating melon] but it is still too few words [smile]

The plot is reasonable, the logic is smooth, and it can be regarded as a breath of fresh air.

It's quite good-looking, not too long. It's a light-hearted farming novel without a female protagonist. It has a slow pace in the early stages and focuses on a vulgar development. The pace speeds up in the middle and later stages, and it has an open ending. Those who want to read cool and fast-paced books need not read this book, this is not that kind of book. This is the author's first book, and I have also tried writing novels. I think it is very impressive for a novice to write to this level [laughs]

It's a pity for this book. The plot point is probably before the protagonist enters the secret realm for the first time - building the foundation. The author writes it very carefully and carefully, but then it gradually becomes more and more sloppy, and finally the outline is unfinished. According to the author, he read the book reviews and changed the outline midway... It can only be said that it is a pity. It may have something to do with the time when this book was put on the shelves. If it had been put on the shelves this year, the popularity would be much higher - at least personally, I like the protagonist very much, and I am determined to stay calm and live in peace. His character and strategy... [Cool]

It's neither a running account nor an overly cool novel with golden fingers. The male protagonist's approach is very consistent with a normal person's state of mind. He takes a steady step step by step, the logic is smooth, and the writing style is smooth. I hope there will be more descriptions of the golden retriever's appearance. It's so cute.

I have read almost 100 chapters, and the writing has always been great. The plot and character descriptions are attractive. After briefly looking at the table of contents, my only regret is that there are only more than 200 chapters. I hope the author writes more books. The first book I read as a 20-year-old bookworm was Journey to the West, and the second one was Sword Immortal for Common People. I am very picky about books. This book is really well-written, and it gives me the feeling of reading martial arts back in the day.

This is cultivation, and living is the kingly way. No chance, no competition, no secret realm, nothing to do with danger... I really like this kind of mentality, let him fight and kill me without watching or participating. After all, there are no quotas for ascension, so there is no harm in ascension early and late!

The writing is pretty good, and the protagonist is more intelligent and believable. It's just too short, with just over 200 chapters, and except for the system's AB option, which I chose twice before, I've always chosen C in the future, which is not exciting. The ending was very rushed, and it was obvious that many pitfalls were left unfinished. But as a time-killing work, it's still passable, and there won't be any weird and stupid settings.

This theme is good. There is no regret medicine in the world. Every wrong choice will make you miss opportunities and lead to a different destiny. There is no remedy, you can only move on, learn from the mistakes of failure, and the days will be better. The protagonist's golden finger only provides emergency escape options. After suffering two losses, the protagonist gradually recovers and grows slowly. The cultivation depends entirely on the protagonist himself. He is a growth-oriented protagonist

I just read it all in one go. It's really great. I think it deserves a 9.5 Rating. It's hard to find a novel on Tomato that I can read completely. I really want to read it all at once, but unfortunately it's still being serialized, so I can only catch up. I think this subject matter is quite novel 😍😍😍

This is one of the few novels where I can read the latest chapters. I hope I can continue to write well. Come on [Like][Like] The first 33 chapters are still mediocre and nothing exciting, and then they start to get better.

Not bad, relatively bland, the system usage is relatively novel, and there are no logical problems. It is more interesting than reading the invincible article.