Dragon Clan: Lu Mingfei Returns from Powa

Lu Mingfei's parallel universe has added a new general [laughter]

The writing is very good. It would be even better if Dante and the others could come to this world. I want to see Dante kill Herzog!

It feels good. The protagonist basically has no trace of Shao Zai in the original work, but his character is okay. There are enough tiles but not enough. The downfall is that I don't know whether the NPC is the female supporting character or the female protagonist, and whose name is Li. The emotional scenes between the two are completely impossible to watch directly. If it is to give Mingfei a sense of belonging, it seems to be too much. If it is the female protagonist, it is completely poisonous, so I am not in the mood to watch it after about 90 chapters. And looking at the catalog, updates are really urgent. I give it a seven and a half out of ten. You can still watch it if you skip the emotional scenes.

This book is very interesting, but I can't get enough of it! I'm just...... Waiting, waiting for your update.[Crying] I'm... Waiting for your update. [Cry]

I feel that while it is serious, it also has a funny style. The author should write more nonsense [laughter]

The rhythm and details are very well described, and it has the feeling of rendering the environment in the early stage of Jiangnan. You know why I say early stage, because the writing in the later stage of Jiangnan is really messy. Moreover, the character's personality and behavior are very consistent with the original character. Of course, Lu Mingfei in this book has definitely formed a new style. I hope the author will continue to expand new boundaries. The current fans are really about to help Jiang Nan finish the book. I should understand the reasons why some people give this evaluation. One of the reasons is the choice of the emotional line of the original characters. The heroine who descends from the sky and too many side branches and festivals, as well as involving other characters from other world views of the Dragon Clan, will affect some of the readers' expectations of the original. At least the heroine who descends from the sky is indeed bad. The author seems to be unable to give full play to his creative desires, so he forgot that this is a second creation based on the original work. If it is a completely original new story, not a story about the dragon family, there will be no such problems.

The writing is very good, and the rhythm is well grasped. It is slow-burning, but the amount of text is too small, and the amount of background story inserted seems too much (it feels like it is taking over the main role). This will make it appear that the protagonist's perspective is relatively small and the sense of substitution is not strong. The author can try to insert part of the background first, and then elaborate on it when the plot requires it (personal suggestion) [Blow a kiss]

At least it's much better than the senior student in Jiangnan who has bouts of youthful illness from time to time and is full of ideas🤗

Which boss opened the trumpet [Thinking] There is a reason for the low rating

Never underestimate this novel. It is different from previous second creations and is based on the original work. The author has his own ideas and considerations. You can think that this is a new novel based on the Dragon Clan. It is quite excellent. It reminds me of the first time I read the Dragon Clan. I was confused about Jiangnan's writing style. I really can't understand it without any literary literacy. Of course, I also learned a lot. If you like articles similar to the Dragon Clan, this is a rare masterpiece. After all, who doesn't want to see a child holding a Yama sword and driving a real demon? He's seriously ill. Oh, by the way, don't look at the ratings. It's useless. Come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง

Now that I have read Chapter 17, Jiangnan Flavor is comparable to the original work, and it does not have the pretentiousness and complexity of the original work, so I don't have a headache watching it. The two major problems in fan fiction are setting and character design. The author has done some research on the setting, but I don't know whether it is rigorous or not. Although I have never played Devil May Cry, I also think it is very interesting. In terms of character design, the author sacrificed some character descriptions in order to maintain the integrity of the characters. The author who has read Dragon Clan can express his grievances against Lu Mingfei for being a coward. The protagonist transforms into Long Aotian, attracting the interest of passersby readers. Secondly, in terms of world view and story line, the world view is adapted from the original work, and many new characters are added. The story line can be viewed as a new one, but the general battle of the Dragon King may still be similar. While I was taking a shower, I was thinking about how this book was different from the original work. It took me a long time to come up with this book review. It's worth reading (for now), the fanfic can compare to the original book, it's really not easy to write

I rarely see books about Devil May Cry on Tomato. I personally feel that the battle scenes are a bit lacking. Can the author add more? Author, come on,

The author's skill is really something, but I have to object to one thing. My little monster. Many people have their own favorite CPs when reading fan fiction. I read fan fiction just for the little monster.

To be honest, Lu Mingfei is really awesome like this

How should I put it, if you are looking for the so-called "coolness" from this book, then you better not read it. Personally, I think this book has the so-called southern flavor (yes, it is the literary and youthful flavor) and it is much more enjoyable than reading the original version of Dragon Family. In short, the author will update soon

It's a book-ready level. The author writes it very seriously. The famous wines, cigarettes, and clothing brands in it are quite informative. The descriptions of each character are very consistent with the original work, not only the personality, but also the details of speech and behavior. The writing is absolutely of high quality! The plot is equally excellent, it's all innovative but not obtrusive, the plot arrangement is surprising but reasonable, it's a completely different world of dragons!

It's so beautiful, but it's a pity that school starts tomorrow, so I'll stay up all night tomorrow night [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

A good book is a good book, but there is a reading threshold. You need to have read the original Dragon Clan and understand the world view and content of Devil May Cry. But I happen to like both series.

Now that we have Pao Wa and Lu Mingfei, is Lu Mingfei, the man with the magnetic field still far behind? [Sneaky laugh]

Not bad, very novel subject matter Why is it getting more and more confusing as I write it? Finally, I finally got a Devil May Cry + Dragon clan linkage story, okk, it's over.

It's good-looking, but it's a bit sparse. If it had more, I think it would be recommended.

A very good novel. In fact, overall the author's writing style is quite good, very Jiangnan style. Many people think that the bad emotional lines are because they are not little monsters. I think it is actually quite good.

After reading Chapter 30, I feel it's okay, but there is one problem. The purity of human dragon blood cannot exceed 50%, but the protagonist still has the power of demons, so how should this bloodline be calculated [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

Although I think the same thing as other readers, there are too many characters in this book. Shouldn't it be fun to just use Devil May Cry's tiles to fight? But looking at the author's writing style, I still think of myself who used to like to read original works word for word and slowly read it. Now I feel bored after reading two chapters and skip if there is no important plot. But isn't reading a book slow-paced? So I still hope that the author will not give up and take his time and let me see the potential of this book.

It's very well written, and I can look forward to the future.

Don't you all like the housekeeper of Mingfei in Dragon Clan? She seems to be called Isabella. I've read a lot of Dragon Clan fanfics but she doesn't appear in them. Is it because she appeared too late? Or is there some other problem? I only saw dragon four and dragon five but didn't look at it at all.

The writing is very good, much more flavorful than Jiangnan. Is this Lu Mingfei qualified?

I came to see Pava, but there is very little content about these things, and all the writing is written by others.

Fortunately, at least the dragons watch a lot, but they are not as boring as Jiangnan.

In fact, it's well written. Who would compromise with those old men if they have the ability? But this update is difficult to evaluate. . . .