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What a novel book. I finally found a novel with a girl as the protagonist but not too much romance.

How should I put it? After reading this book, I felt a sense of disappointment and hopelessness. It left many plots that were difficult to reconcile. At the same time, it also left a very deep impression on me. This book has broken away from the category of fan fiction, but borrowed from fan fiction to express some of the author's feelings about society. Every step of the plot , the author has carefully considered each link, and the plot is very logical. The fights between different high-IQ characters are also exciting to watch and give people an immersive feeling. If the author wants to publish other books, I will definitely read it [Send Heart][Learned]

It's really good-looking, so exciting. I haven't seen Death Note. Just asking about this book, the heroine is really the one I like Xue Qingyan was still swallowed up by desire after all. I liked him quite a lot at first, and the cute dog character poked me, but when I wrote the name of the heroine, my love was shattered. He has finally become the person he hated before! There is a regret that a young boy who slays a dragon will eventually become a dragon! The character of Zhang Yirong is okay, but the questions he asked really touched the heroine's heart. At the beginning of the rescue, he himself did not expect that he would fall in love with the heroine. The subsequent storyline proved that he was a believer in the truth. The heroine really makes me cry to death. She is a cold beauty. Her previous life was so miserable. In this life, she has a father and a mother. Her father passed away and so did her mother. Sun Yue exchanged the Eye of Death at the moment her mother passed away. You know that this eye of death consumes half of a person's lifespan, but the heroine is so precious about her life that she still redeems it. In short, every character portrayed by the author is very good! The author looks at me seriously, update soon, I want to know their ending [crying]

It's a very good book. The villains and protagonists in it all have their own positions, but I want to say, can you torture the so-called police in the book? Since I am from the perspective of the heroine, I think they went too far in some places. They did things based on their own intuition without definite evidence, which is a bit scratchy. Although their intuition is right, they are too confident, because there is obviously no evidence. I beg the author not to just abuse the heroine, but to abuse her together and hurt each other. If you want to torture, you can torture all the members. The one with the dead hand, the heroine lives in fear every day, but the one with the real dead hand lives in an extremely cool manner.

I really like this book. The author worked very hard on the mental analysis. I first started researching this book and why it was rated 7, because I thought this book should be considered a high-scoring book with a score of 9 or above. Then I saw that many people felt that at the beginning, when the police forced a seemingly ordinary girl, they felt a little, um, uncomfortable. I followed the updates at the same time. When I saw the latest chapter, I would like to say that the author has worked very hard to make the logic consistent. Most of the problems we pointed out, the author will take a serious look at and improve. Regarding the police officer He and others forcing the heroine at the beginning, they were actually guided (that is, fanning the flames) by that genius boy (I forgot his name) and the heroine did not handle all the small details well. The heroine is a growth-oriented child. After all, she was a very ordinary child at the beginning.

It's so good-looking. I'll knock it. It's so good-looking and it only has a rating of 7.7! ! The family is really good-looking. Highly recommended! ! Guaranteed that you will not lose money if you enter the trap! This book is really yyds. The protagonist has a high IQ and is good at strategizing and setting up situations. The opponent's IQ is also very high. The description of the confrontation is very beautiful! !

It's very interesting to watch, and the plot is well connected. How should I evaluate it? I am deeply attracted by it as a person who has never seen Dead Pen. The collision of thoughts will fall into the abyss if you are not careful. It's really... So beautiful! ! !

He writes really well I didn't feel anything at first Buried so deeply in the end And the ending of their death is too good, right? Still a little brain-burning "Yan Que'an's expression suddenly wrinkled, and he vented all his grievances and anger for more than ten years. His eyes were red, and he cried very repressedly. The complex emotions of grievance, unwillingness, and reluctance seemed to have finally found an outlet, and they burst out uncontrollably, accelerating the loss of life. Give me the tenderest love, but ask me to take off my armor and make my body covered with bruises. I have never been so attached to the world, to the spring flowers and autumn fruits, but I have to give up the prosperity of the world and my life because of your old cocoons and the sadness between your brows. " The protagonist is the kind of growth type And it's really not the Holy Mother. Anyone who gets in the way will die. He really made me cry to death. The ending of everyone's death was unexpected. It gets better as you go to the back. Only after reading it do you know what the author wrote. Woohoo, so high

I don't know what to say. I felt very sad at first after reading it. The twist in the story is wonderful and the ending is awesome. I like it very much.

The heroine's plot is good, a little crazy, but patriotic, and she has the feeling of playing with people in the palm of her hand, while she is an outside observer. The plot is exciting and the twists are very vivid. The author has a great imagination, but there are some loopholes, but the impact is not big. I like the personality of the protagonist very much. In addition, the author should update more, which is not enough.

I read this book at the time because I really liked wit-fighting novels at that time (and I still do) and didn't pay attention to whether it was a fanfic or not. Anyway, I was so hungry haha, but I tried it and it was unexpectedly good. I really like this twist. The heroine is really smart, but I didn't like the policeman in the fictional background. I doubted the heroine at the beginning. It's true that the second volume actually has a plot that is intertwined with the comics. This is great. I read the Dead Pen comic because of this book (traditional Chinese is very difficult to read:). I think this book has a great background. She is not limited to one scene (the harem kind), there are many small scenes. I think it is like developing small lines around a big story line, but they can be connected together and are not messy. The logic is very clear, which is better than the current witty writing that makes people incomprehensible. Also, the male partner whose name is I think his dark love line is very delicious. It is a really strange feeling. Compared with the large-scale description of the love line, this kind of description is strange and fresh. Generally speaking, there is no big thunder.

Looks good, looks good, looks good. So pretty. No CP career flow, the protagonist is female. The plot twists and turns again and again. The writing is particularly delicate, and all the characters are villains, but there is real emotion. The kind of feelings written in Li Yuxun's heart. The solution is a bit regretful. But it's already a good ending. This is the best Bleach fanfic I've ever read. Highly recommended! ! ! (If you like watching mindless romance, don't watch it. It's not that kind of plot.) It's really super fun to watch. Folks, I took a look at the low comments. Indeed, what the family said was right. This is a development flow, and the heroine does stretch her hips a bit in the early stages. But I believe the author is great, the later stage is really beautiful. The early stage is boring because there are foreshadowings and foreshadowing. Keep reading patiently, there will be a surprise~

I really like the heroine! ! I really love girls who are calm, decisive and confident! ! But the male protagonist's bug is really speechless. It's inexplicable why he keeps targeting the female protagonist. He said he has a crush on the female protagonist but can't help but resist her. In the part about grabbing the female protagonist's watch, I really felt that this man was super arrogant.

Like it very much! ! ! ! ! This is really the first time I have seen such a smart heroine, and the other characters in the article are also great! ! ! ! ! It's really a very good book! ! ! ! But I simply can't get enough of it! ! Woohoo, I finished reading it in a while (T^T), but this book is really great (//∇//) Highly recommended! ! ! ! ! !

The author's writing is good. Please work harder.

Recommended, a very good death fanfic. The protagonist kills decisively and is a fun-loving person. He can get himself involved for fun, and he will never show mercy to the enemy. His IQ is also very high, and the villain's IQ is also online. It's scary to watch.

Super good-looking. This is one of the best Death Note novels. In my opinion, this one is really good-looking. I highly recommend it. The plot is very novel and the heroine has a very good IQ. The other characters are also very successful. There is also a male protagonist. I think it is the one whose surname is Zhang, but what he said to the heroine seems to be a bit different. Okay, it can't be said that the female protagonist may not know that the male protagonist likes him, because the male protagonist is always so flippant and pretends not to like him, but the male protagonist likes the female protagonist and hopes that the female protagonist can silently turn the male protagonist into their kind. But I know this is impossible, because the male protagonist is a person with a full sense of justice.

Super cool! The protagonist has endless ridicule hidden in the eyes of the villain, has a clear understanding of himself, the game is set within the game, and the protagonist grows up. This is the real "Dead Pen" fanfic that I want to read. Don't let others take advantage of you, and make the Dead Pen the sharpest knife in your hand. Under the calculation and disguise, who is the real prey? Yue, when you made up your mind to become a war reporter, did you think that in the future you would go through hardships and become the world's first trial judge? Yue, you have experienced so many deceptions and calculations, but you still retain the yearning for the world in your heart. You are really an amazing person! Yue, you are not the only one who will shed tears along the way.

It was a hearty reading. I was fascinated by the ambitious and absolutely ruthless heroine. After the exciting notebook collection battle, and the conception of the political form of the future world, I felt that I had seen a very different world of notebooks. It is a fan fiction that I like very much. Also, the logic is really good! ! !

It is rare to see such a profound article again. From the beginning to the middle and late stages of this book, I have been deeply attracted by this book and made me read it. The plot of the story is one link after another, reversal and reversal. The large writing style really attracted me.

The female protagonist is very smart, has no female characters, and does not weaken the female characters. The only ones who survive until the end are women, and all the male characters with names are dead [Love]

The twists, pulls and temptations throughout the book really made me want to stop. Every conversation between the characters was frightening to me, and every time I wondered when they started to become suspicious.

It's awesome... There's a lot of foreshadowing in the early stages, and the plot is very tight. It's a realistic novel that goes beyond the scope of fan fiction. . . . (I really want to fly into the screen and give Sun Yue a hug!!! (*꒦ິ⌓꒦ີ))

A happy ending in the unconventional sense. Heck, I want to have a better extra if line, but it should be gone if it hasn't been completed for so long. There is a sense of powerlessness as if the person dies and things end. What can I say about the heroine's calculating heart? There is a sense of deja vu. I watched an anime called "Monster" before and suddenly thought of this anime.

When I first saw the introduction, I thought it was a relatively relaxing book. But at the end, Gu Si and Lu Dawei felt regretful. Of course, the biggest regret was that Yueyue was alone in the end. The author's writing style is very good, and the plot arrangement is unexpected. Come on

I'm so excited, man. It's so exciting that I had an orgasm inside my head. Everyone's personality is described in detail and intuitively. The plot is also awesome. Don't worry. There are no big problems with the structure and logic. It's a bit brain-consuming, but it's really fun and beautiful to watch. I finished reading it. It's such a read. It's a very high-quality fanfic [I almost cried]

Overall, it's okay. There are few details and incomplete descriptions in the early stage, so there is no early foreshadowing for the subsequent reversal. It becomes compact and beautiful starting from the third third. Although it still feels that the writing is not in-depth enough, it is still very good.

It's very beautiful and the plot doesn't drag out [Send my heart][Send my heart]

A very good book. It is logical and not a mindless read.

A rare masterpiece, a growing protagonist, very exciting in the middle and later stages (That is, everyone is dead [crying] [crying] [crying]) What a knife!