The Good Disciple Actually Deviated from the Plot Line After Turning into a Black Man.
乖徒弟黑化后居然偏离剧情线了
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 151k Words
- Genre
- Ancient Romance
- Subgenre
- Fantasy Romance
- Audience
- Female
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Stats
90Reads
66Chapters
2Listens
14.5kReads · all time
How is Jue Juezi? , Family members, rush, I really like the pairing of Luo Jin and her fiancé Guichen. In the later period, I felt that they were purely cultivating fairy literature and had no systematic existence at all. Okay, Luo Jinguan is paired with Qin Chi, but does Guichen like it too? [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]
I feel so sorry for Guichen. The beginning is OK, but the ending is not well written.
I like Guichen so much. I want Guichen and Luo Jin to be together so they can have a good relationship [shy][shy][shy][send my heart][send my heart][send my heart] I think it can be finished where Luo Jin left his last words. The story is actually better. In the part where Gui Chen died, I felt that the heroine fell in love with Gui Chen. Later, it was a bit strange to have Luo Jin and Qin Yan be together. It would be okay if Luo Jin lost her memory, but it would be a bit strange that she did not lose her memory and married Qin Yan and gave birth to a child. Overall, this book is not bad, but Gui Chen is a bit sad [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]
The novel is too short and I haven't read enough. Gui Chi is a bit upset because the master and his second apprentice are together.
The writing is very good, but there are some holes in the book that have not been filled. The ending should be considered good, giving people a mysterious feeling.
It feels like there's no one there
Is this the author's first time writing a book? It's probably based on another book, but everything is difficult at the beginning, so it's pretty good.