Beast Control: Playing with Snakes at the Beginning, I Will Become Xu Xian Directly!

It's so beautiful, I highly recommend it [laughing evilly]

This article is not bad. I suggest that the author just treat it as a hobby. If you feel inspired after work every day, write a chapter or two or take a vacation for yourself if you are not inspired. Since tomatoes can't feed you, then just become a writer of fun articles [laughter]

Beast Girl pokes at my XP, and if we drive faster, we won't be short of gas! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

The author's new book is very carry. There are currently three heroines, Zhang Qianqian, Xiaoqing, and Xiaojiu. Everyone here looks up to me [Cool][Cool][Cool]

I also want to play with snakes, and I can also play with the Chidori that takes the blue light @The Chidori that takes the Blue Light

It looks good, but how many updates does Huangniao plan to make in a day? Like the paragraphs and comments every day, right?

The author's writing is very nice, but it's a pity that it's not as detailed as before. I guess it's because the dark room has been closed for a long time.

What I'm thinking is that after the female snake is taken in, the protagonist's brother will also be taken in. Anyway, his brother is also a girl.

Overall, it is very comfortable to read, the pace is a bit fast, and the emotions are a bit delicate, but the whole book is too fast. But it's a pity to skip the middle period and end it in the later stage. I feel a little sorry. I hope the author will not make the same mistake again in the future.

I only made a comment after reading it for a long time. I am a long-time reader of the author. The writing is what I like to read. I think it would be perfect if it could be interspersed with some super tearful plots.

Is the heroine Zhang Qianqian or Xiaoqing? Or should I say that the entire harem has been collected?

To be honest, I actually want to have two female protagonists, can you satisfy me [blowing kiss]

From my personal reading experience, this book is undoubtedly an excellent work. Its content is in-depth and thought-provoking, which gave me great pleasure while reading.

First of all, it is the harem, but the three women between the little fox, the snake, and the snake Sissi are all described very well, and the characters are all independent. The front and back of the Snake have changed a bit, but they are not separated. The author's description of the battle is slightly lacking. There is no boss battle, and every battle is like a Pokémon battle. Snakes just wield a knife and fight around, or they are dead in seconds; There is no settlement of loot, aftermath and details of the battle. . . However, the daily writing is very warm, and the overall look and feel is not bad. Regarding the speed of the car, it's actually not that fast, because there are no details that can make people imagine. Only the beginning and the end (puff [face covering]) are almost like short stories. There is only a rough description of level 40. Logically speaking, there are still two stages of 40/60/80 that have not been written. The author said that the data was not good and the writing power was insufficient, so in the end it was really unfinished and ended hastily. The whole world may have been dug up by about 20%, but it is still worth watching.

I have read the first two books. Never have a harem. I want to see🐍🐍not a fox

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Yes, the daily writing is very warm, and the male and female protagonists of Xiaoqing and Xiaojiu are well established and lovable. However, there is not enough description of the battle between pet beasts. Originally, the novel about pet beasts should focus on combat. This novel does focus more on daily descriptions, which seems too bland, which is a pity... The world view can be expanded a lot, but it is limited to one city. There are too few kinds of pet beasts. Xiaoqing and Xiaojiu obviously still have a lot of room for growth and a lot to write about. It's a pity. It would be nice if there was more of a passionate fantasy atmosphere while taking care of daily life. If I change it, it won't be considered 5 stars, but 4 stars is still okay.

It's pretty good. I'll ask Zhang Qianqian if she'll accept it. If not, I'll be able to yo-yo [send my heart] in advance.

It's pretty good, the details are well drawn, the characters are well drawn, and the protagonist is gradually introduced [laughter]

Dog bird, when did Zhang Qianqian get it? [Laughing evilly] A whole large red scale faucet

A villain can be used all the time, but to create a good character, the villain must either have personal charm or the villain must be dealt with in a short period of time, and the deal must be done in a way that satisfies the readers.

Dear author, can you please bring both Zhang Qianqian and Xiaoqing into the harem? I would be sad if one of them is missing.

Short, too short, too short, how should a sister-in-law like you live? [Punch hard]

It's very interesting, it's a harem story, but there are only three of them [laughs evilly]

The car is fast, it's not a eunuch story, there should only be three female protagonists Although many places in the setting are rough, it looks pretty good just from Sese's perspective. The finale was too hasty... In the last two or three chapters, two cities fell to the attack of ferocious beasts (the main plot also happened a few months later) and the heroine was nine months pregnant, and then ten years passed in the next chapter.

Will Zhang Qianqian not want it anymore? [Pauses face] I quite like it, I just watched it

The good thing is to be optimistic [laughing evilly], when will the male protagonist and the female protagonist have their own fighting power? We already have a system, why not upgrade it? Come to a mall, besides, the life span of pet beasts cannot be the same as that of humans [please update]

It looks good, but it's a pity that the author hasn't updated it for several days. I don't know if it was cut. I still don't recommend it. Chapter 29 is like being sick. The spiritual pet is so tired that he can go back to fight monsters? Are you obsessed with money?

Finished reading at 23:05 on June 1, 2024 I hope the author can drive at such a speed in his next book, come on!

Overall it's okay, the word count isn't too many and it's suitable for short-term reading, but the later stages are a bit boring. Secondly, those who are looking for combat effectiveness can take a detour. This book focuses on daily life and emotions!