Traveling Through EVA to Rewrite the Plot

This EVe fanfic is the most exciting one I have ever seen, but if you, the author, dare to stab me, I will definitely send you a blade! ! ! But I believe the author won't stab us

I have a deep understanding of EVA. I don't want to talk about the plot, but only about the portrayal of Asuka's character. I can only say that it is exactly the same as the original work. Moreover, the protagonist of this book has feelings for Asuka that are hidden in the shadows. He can't see clearly but always stays by Asuka's side to protect her silently.

The plot is still very good and reasonable, it should be casual and casual, the main plot is not procrastinating, the writing style is okay, it does not look embarrassing, and it respects the original work and does not make random changes. Anyway, it looks good. I love watching it.

This is the best New Diary Evangelion fan book I have ever read. It is the best and strongest on the entire Internet. I strongly recommend everyone who likes EVA Asuka to read it together. It can be regarded as a personal completion for me. It made up for my regret that Shinji Ikari was not with Ming Yuexiang in the end. At the same time, my own surname is Huang, and I felt very involved, as if I was with Ming Xiang. I was very satisfied. I am very grateful to the author for his hard work. I am also a senior in high school this year. I was originally going to take the college entrance examination in 2025. Because I took a year off, thank you to the author for giving me more motivation to face the journey of my senior year. This book will always be the TOP1 in my heart among Neon Genesis Evangelion fanfics. I was so happy that I got the candy.

It's beautiful, I hope the author will keep it up

As for this book, among the EVA fanfics I've read, well, it's one of the best-looking ones. And the author is really awesome at writing this book at this age. Well, let me finally say that the author should continue to work hard. Write more of this type. (Hey, actually I just didn't read enough) Finally, I wish the author that his career will get better and better, and that he will continue to be inspired to write novels.

The plot was okay, but not to my liking. The writing style needs to be improved, but I won't give it a thumbs up. It is indeed much better than other fan EVAs on this site. As an aside, I prefer the EVA plots outside the site, in the comics. After all, they have many methods and strong abilities. Even if they are not bulldozers, they can still be pulled to work under them and complete the boundary flow. [Face covering] The funniest plot I have ever seen, resurrecting Ikari Wei, who beats Ikari Yuantang in the street (asking you to change my mother's plan, asking you to abuse my son, asking you to mess around)

If you are full of faintness, you must be full of faintness. The plot arrangement is appropriate and does not feel fragmented or abrupt. It feels like watching a fan drama version. The explanation is also very good. For people like me who have only read the EVA once, I can understand all the plots that I didn't understand before in this novel. It's just that the old and the new are two different worlds. Then there will be two Asukas? It's completed, the novel is completed, and the world in the novel is completed. Who understands the feeling of loss in the middle of the night [crying]

Come on, author, don't underestimate the bond between us [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

However, he is uneducated and can go around the world with just "f*ck". This fanfic is really good to read, the plot must have been carefully polished, and the character of the protagonist is also very unique. I hope the author will persevere. I haven't seen such good fanfics on Tomato for a long, long time. Support Laman and recommend Laman.

First of all, let me state that the author has a score of 8.5 In women's clothing. The top level of Eva category, it is rare to see such a high quality book. The most eye-catching point is that the characters are not broken. Some fan fiction characters are unsightly, but the characters of this book are basically consistent with the original work. This point alone is worthy of full marks.

Very good, the characters are not much different from the ones in the series, and the writing style is also very good. It is a good book in EVA. In short, it is highly recommended. The author will take the exam well and come back soon to update (this is my first time to post a long comment)

A very good work, really beautiful. There are very few EVA fanfics. In Tomato, EVA fanfics are basically updated after a few chapters, or they are modified too much, etc. I started following this novel when it first came out. Well, it's just been delayed in the past two months due to study. Here I hope the author can take the exam, come on!

When I first started reading it, I actually thought it was quite average. But when I read it later and it connected with the real plot, I felt that it was really good-looking. It has an EVA style, but it is brighter and more optimistic than the original plot. Overall, the plot is more perfect. Unlike other fan fictions, the EVA flavor is gone, and the writing is getting better and better. I have been chasing this book for so long, I even read it with two Pomodoros, and it will be finished soon. I really can't let it go... I guess the author has no intention of writing about Eva anymore. After all, this book is to give Eva an ending that belongs to us and is different from the ruffian. It resolves some regrets and makes up for them, and Eva's story ends. Life is still going on, we have to look forward instead of being immersed in this story all the time. What we should do is to go on bravely, just like what Shinji Ikari learned in Shinsan Village. But I hope the author can still write more extras like he wrote the old theatrical version [shy] (By the way, seeing that the author has been writing for so long, my hands are itchy and I want to write about Eva. Is there any good brother who can provide some ideas? Please)

Some settings are consistent. Then we made up for all the things we hated about ava. The protagonist doesn't always win, but sometimes loses and wins. And it won't be entangled with anything like other novels. And it can make us feel that the author really likes it. Newcomers can watch it without thinking. Also good for people who like Neon Genesis Evangelion. It's okay even if you haven't watched Neon Genesis Evangelion, because it basically remains the same and just changed some endings. And if you look at it, you will find that the machine will turn on inexplicably. I remember I once watched it at 9 o'clock in the evening and didn't fall asleep until early in the morning. We can also see the growth of the author, from the young and vigorous, unruly and unruly character at the beginning. Later, I was exhausted from life. I am also a primary school student and cannot provide other help to the author, but the author's writing style is not bad.

It's beautiful. The original EVA always makes my heart hurt. I have thought about many good results but I can't describe them accurately. Thanks to the author for giving me the ending I wanted. Goodbye, all EVA [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

The world is well written by The Boss, the plot is very detailed, and the characters are well described. All of the above are good, but what's even better is that with a score of 9.5, You can watch Women's Clothes [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

Good, very good, very good (waiting for the author to dress up as a woman [laughing evilly])

I actually had this idea after reading EVA. Thank you very much for helping me realize my dream. It was so well written [crying]

The best EVA fanfic on the Internet at present. It is a little bit toxic in the early stage, but needless to say in the later stage. It is very good-looking and the character description is also very accurate, especially in the old TV and the old theater version. The feeling of depression and sadness is very profound. It does not have a strong Long Aotian style. The only thing I have is that there is a slight lack of white space between the characters' dialogues, but it is not harmful. The author has also opened a new Eva fanfic. I hope there will be better performance, and I also hope that the author's life will turn the overall situation around like the novel.

It's good to watch. It's the best second creation I've ever seen. It's very different from the original plot. It makes up for the regrets in my heart. The author should stick to it. Although there are very few EVA fans now, there are still some. I've been following it. I'm also working hard to encourage my classmates in school to watch EVA together!

I highly recommend the transformation from a newbie to a veteran. The character description is very good, and his own writing style is also changing. It's like looking at people. The people in it have their own characteristics. The protagonist grows along the way, just like the author. I feel that the author is like Huang Zetian in it, constantly growing.

I haven't read it for a long time, but I found it was over [laughing and crying] Looking back, I feel really melancholy. From the time this book was updated to the end, the author has experienced a lot, and I have also experienced a lot, but I still want to say a word to the author: Come on, the world [sending my heart] [like]

It's very well written and I'm looking forward to it. It basically keeps the original plot, which makes the original novel very comfortable for reading. It's just that the author has a difficult life, but please stick to it. It doesn't matter if the update is slow, as long as you can keep updating. I don't want such a good fanfic to die on my phone! [Cry]

This is a good EVA fanfic. The author's characterization is also in line with the original work, but the progress is a little faster. There is nothing wrong with it. The only shortcoming is that it is too short.

Correct, direct, pertinent, elegant, objective, complete, three-dimensional, comprehensive, dialectical, metaphysical, suitable for both refined and popular tastes, to the point, and to the point.

How can I put it this way? Although I haven't read "Neon Genesis Evangelion" very much, from a reader's perspective, the author's portrayal of the protagonist is still very three-dimensional. So far, it is the best EVA fanfic I have ever seen.

Nice! 666! Come on, the author, take the college entrance examination! We need to combine work and rest! Don't study too hard and keep your learning efficiency high!

The plot is a little hard for me to accept, so I won't read it for now, but this book is still the first among all the EVA fanfics I have read. Especially when I saw the part where Asuka had a conflict with the protagonist, I really felt that the soul of every character, every character is a flesh-and-blood existence. The author has shaped them very well. I hope I can come back and read it in the future T^T

It's a really good book. I'll start watching it in 2023. Look all the way to 2024. The books have not been updated. He is in EVA fan fiction. There are very few that are well written.