Naruto: I Just Want to Show Off but I'm Too Busy

It's so cool to see this place in one go

It's okay, although some places are a little bit toxic, but overall it's still expanded. I have some suggestions, such as ❶The ending of the matter between Sasuke and Itachi is different, and the pupil technique of the kaleidoscope can also be changed appropriately. In fact, ❷When the system assigns tasks, it feels a bit like playing the protagonist. In fact, it is better to delete the system directly and let the protagonist bring Pokémon to the ninja world as a golden finger (I haven't seen the ending yet, but most of the current tricks are related to Pokémon). Finally Yes ❸ This system mission is real... And the protagonist's decision on the mission is also... So the protagonist's image is invincible... (It's quite abstract anyway, but I can see that the author wants to write him very gently) ❹ Also, the interweaving of the parallel world (that is, the original world line) and the protagonist's world is a bit weird (I don't know if people who have read it have the same feeling as me). Furthermore, Konan's emotional line is super weird, as if he is traveling through time and space with dragon veins. The power is given to Xiaonan... (It's a bit like forced PUA, but it doesn't feel like it, it's weird anyway). Why not follow the protagonist's world line to the end, and the relationship with Xiaonan can be regarded as changing Xiaonan's destiny in the protagonist's world. I don't know why there is a scene about amnesia and then coming back. That's all [face covering] [like] [like]

(This is purely a personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it [note] [note] [note]) A very good book that almost perfectly displays all my personal assumptions about Naruto: the heroine all has to make up for her regrets (Yahiko Nagato has not changed, which is a pity) + take care of Naruto and Sasuke when they were young + go into seclusion after the plot of Kaguya, but she must be the backbone of all ninjas as soon as she takes action + invincible [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] There is not much poison in the plot. I personally feel that the score of 7 points is a bit low.

It's pretty good. I've finished reading it all.

Come on! It's so well written, I hope I can continue to see such great works. It would be better if there were more [laughing]

I haven't started reading this book yet, so I won't give any unnecessary comments. The world of Naruto started with the invasion of Otsutsuki. Kaguya controlled all living beings in the name of God. She was afraid that Otsutsuki created Bai Zetsu, which was too cruel, so she killed her daughter-in-law Hamura and Hagoromo to rebel and seal Kaguya. Hagoromo was a supervisor on the moon and accompanied her mother. Konoha's promotion of peace is also the source of energy imbalance. Ninjas participate in the wars of ordinary people. As long as you give money, ninjas can help you kill people. Their transcendent status becomes a weapon and drags down the tailed beasts. From a certain point of view, Hashirama is a sinner. It is not as good as the Uzumaki clan who has the courage to build a country. If Hashirama is the same, the result may be better. With a country, ninjas will no longer be just tools. Only in this way can progress be made, and business development can reduce wars.

Come on, the author is optimistic about you

I finished reading it all before I knew it [laughing and crying] Come on, author, don't be short and weak

If it ends with Kaguya and then has a group wedding, it will basically be the best ending for the multi-heroine Hokage. It can have a level of 8.5 Points. What about the Boruto that is added later? It has a feeling of continuing the dog's tail.

Okay, okay, it's just, I hope to have a Susanata Buddha

After the death of the third generation, no matter whether Minato or Tsunade is in the shadow, please sort out Konoha. The entire ninja world's technology tree is weird. At least let Konoha have a sound rule of law, a sound humanities and entertainment, and technology can also be reformed, so that otherwise Boruto technology can appear in advance.

Very good looking author, cheers

Good, good, good

Excellence is just a seed lurking in your mind. It can sprout at any time as long as you want it, so more "hundred million" bits are too short.

I finished reading it without realizing it. The novel is generally very cliché, but it's also very novel. It's the kind of thing that I can't even describe. I just finished it in one glance. I'll update it soon.

Really good! The speed of the car is poor, but the protagonist is a bit weak and relies heavily on external forces. [Laughing evilly] harem but no stud [eat melon] There is no plot anymore without the protagonist. Most of the stories are about the plot of Konoha. Without the protagonist, there is nothing going on. In fact, this book can end after finishing Madara. Boruto no longer has the role of the protagonist.

Isn't it good that the author is followed by narration?

It seems to be okay for now [eat melon]

It's so good, I watched it in two days.

Later, Kurotsuchi was asked to take over in advance, and three of the five ninja villages became one family.

What are the arrangements for Hinata Kaguya and Otsutsuki Kaguya? Danzo is a lowly bloodline family, and a lowly thief bloodline family that has nothing to do with the Six Paths bloodline.

Really pretty

Still very exciting

Very good, not bad. The author is gone too.

It's really beautiful

A bit outrageous but not much.

Very beautiful, very exciting

Overall good, just a little ooc

A very good book

Very nice looking.