The System Has Abandoned Me, but I Regard Heaven as My Father

It's very interesting, very interesting. At first I thought it was just a funny article, but I didn't expect it to be a big surprise. There are basically no cliche plots, everything is new. The author's writing is smooth and there is no need to say much. In addition to the laughter, there are all kinds of bloody fights, bloody scenes, or monsters. The world of immortality described by the author seems to be shrouded in fog. There are too few chapters and many of them are underwater, which made me feel a little uncomfortable. At the same time, the protagonist is very, very likable, full of youthfulness and high-spirited. We can also see his growth, from starting to leave the village to being decisive in killing, from opening the graves of his seniors every day, to rejecting the invincible method during the golden elixir. The main character is likable. I usually watch female videos and I feel disgusted when I see men, except for this protagonist. So can you ask the author to create a female protagonist? Is it possible to have no heroine? Leave your name on the second brush.

Anyway, I read it in one sitting. Although this book is a work of practice by the author, it is still a masterpiece in this world. The author's rhythm is very comfortable. The last book in 🍅 that made me so comfortable was Chen Xun Patriarch and Ximen Heiniu, but the text Some details in the book still need to be polished carefully. It has its own complete and huge world view. It is enough that it has not collapsed until now. This shows that the author has polished it well. This book is even better than "Slaying Gods". The rating of 8.6 Is really a talent.

The world view is huge, the branches are still exciting, and more importantly, the layout laid out by the author is very cool. Some people say that the Thirteen Immortal Fates are viruses that invade the avenue and the way of heaven. The path is dead, there are secrets in reincarnation, becoming an immortal is poisonous, and the way of heaven says that he is the supreme god, but he turns into an old beggar. The beggar has saved the protagonist between life and death several times. This game runs through three eras, encompassing other worlds, and even the appearance of the protagonist. The three incense are all constant among the variables. The fate remains unchanged, but it is indeed ever-changing. The protagonist has escaped the shackles of all living beings. The key is to still Some book friends said that the protagonist's rebirth may be due to the little girl's Huangliang dream, which came true in an instant, just like Gu Xizhou, but better than him. The author of this book has played chess very far, and the wonderful inferences of us chess viewers are even more exciting. Trembling, pretending, borrowing, fighting, killing, gambling... There are five out of thirteen, and the rest of the immortal lives are even more curious. More importantly, the author has countless pitfalls. I hope he can fill them in one by one in the future. Well... All the way to the first grade of junior high school, it is really comfortable to watch so far.

It looks good, there are no typos, basically, the logic is good, and the plot setting is also good. It's a pity that the golden scales are so subtle. He speaks nicely and is polite. What a pity. That Hua Linlang is really annoying. Can the author skin her in the future and let her try what it feels like to be skinned? And the setting of Son of Heaven is really cool!

This is the most fascinating novel I have ever read since I joined Tomato. I thought it was a cool novel, but the more I read it, the more excited I became. From the appearance of 13 Immortals, the plot began to become compact. Basically, every picture is quite good-looking, with some moisture, but not much. The writing is also very good. Some of the sentences in the novel are really evocative after listening to them, like the philosophy of life. Anyway, in general, there is no place that has not been completed. Basically, if there are holes, it is filled in, so it looks very comfortable. The concept is very good, basically I can't guess what to do next. One secret is revealed, and the next secret will appear again. There are ghosts in the years, and there are secrets in reincarnation. I can only say that this novel is the best one I have read so far.

This novel is really good. The main character is also really miserable. Died three times. Resurrected three times. From the beginning, I worshiped God as my father with high spirits. To the point of despair that sends all sentient beings in the Thirteen Lands into despair. From the deep hatred for Bai Qing. Then he went to drink tea with Bai Qing in the void. Gu Xizhou's dream was not just a tree. Golden Scale isn't just his enemy either. You filial sons are also making people cry. I just sigh for Yi Yuexue who died because of gambling. The determination to shoot down the sun from a single person. To the point of having no choice but to cut down the tree of balance. The biggest rebel in the world of obedience. To mend the sky with your own body and weapons. From the death of Gu Xizhou. The transformation of a passerby. Until Wang, who just appeared on the scene, got the immortal destiny of matching characters. This was the beginning of this era of immortal destiny. A device with no sense of presence. A bet of your life against the world. Can't tell the difference between true and false. It's a mistake. The letter is taken with only one hand. And all this is just a scam of 12 immortal lives. Thirteen immortal lives, all brilliant. Being falsely introduced to the path of immortality. Brought into the first place by loan. Being teased with a boatload of creatures. Twelve places of suffering due to killing. Because of gambling, he entered the realm of immortal destiny. Clear your mind to step into the ascending dimension. Gain money to understand the nature of the world. The rhyme of the instrument fills the sky to observe the great road Enter the battle with money and get the cause from the effect. Outside the void, you can achieve the middle-character fruition status. In the past tense, the way of mismatch is revealed. In this life, thirteen-character immortals, twelve immortal lives, eleven reincarnations, and pairs of big hands turned Li Chuyi into chess pieces on the chessboard, playing against each other. All living beings suffer, practitioners suffer, and Li Chuyi suffers the most.

The writing is super good, and there is no ambiguity with women to disgust people. It is a rare good book on Tomato. Is the author a trumpet created by some great god?

The setting is very novel, but the story in the early stage of Fate World is a bit cliche. I feel that the author didn't have enough control in the early stage, and it feels like he just wrote it. Finally, I think the novels serialized in Tomato are the best in terms of the excitement of the story, the excellence of the settings, and the completeness of the situation. If the author has a follow-up work, and can fully write his own characteristics and settings, and can add some of their stories to the supporting characters, make the supporting characters flesh and blood, and strengthen his storytelling ability, it will definitely become a masterpiece. The more you write, the more awesome you become.

Nice! ! ! ! I like this one without a heroine! ! ! ! ! Super Invincible likes this kind of immortality novel, and the content is new, and there are also some funny parts. It is really good to read. As for the one by Lao Niu and Chen Xun, I think it is better not to read it. After reading that one for a while, I didn't want to read it. It was too bland. Well, the writing style is also very good. But this book is absolutely on par with that one! ! ! Personally think [laughs] There are 10 million Hamlets among 10 million readers, read books rationally

Wow wow wow, this book really frustrated me. I am an immersive reader. It was easy to get involved when reading this book. It's great! (I am exaggerating here, and I will urge you to add more 🌚hehehe/The capitalization is really good, so great, so great, like, like, like [like] [shy]) And from what I have seen so far, this book is not brainless or clichéd. The plot is first-rate, the outline looks good, the world view is okay, and the writing is good (and then... Then... Well... I suddenly forgot what I wanted to say [crying], I will add it when I remember it) PS: (When I read a book, I always go through it in my head, phew, probably with my eyes, and then forget about it after a while, but some books are different. [For example, this one] after reading it, it's like a breeze blowing in my heart, leaving traces of passage) (Oooh, blame me for not reading the book well, I can't express my feelings [crying]) The cruelty of cultivating immortals is very realistically described

At first I thought it was a mindless novel, but the more I read it, the more strange it becomes! This is purely brain-burning! The plot has endless twists and turns that are always unexpected, and the characters are each unique in their own way. The first part of the book is exciting, the middle part is sadistic, and the second part is painful. It is very depressing for people to read it. It is true that the boy Li Chuyi is really too miserable. Too many people in the book are very miserable, and their lives are not as good as theirs. Just to survive, countless lives are needed to fill it. Overall, the real book is really well written, and the holes dug have basically been filled in.

There is nothing wrong with this book. It seems to be a systematic and invincible fairy tale, but in fact it is still a traditional fairy tale. There is no poisonous point. The author writes well, the story concept is also novel, the characters are vivid, the female character is not an Internet celebrity, the protagonist is a straight man, and he is more serious in terms of relationships. There is no heroine and no harem, so it is not nothing. The author of "Nao Shuang Wen" has certain literary skills. Personally, I feel that the plot is a bit slow. Although the writing style is also humorous, this style is a bit like a book from the Jian Lai era. In this era of fast-food "Shuang Wen", this book is somewhat disadvantaged. I have read 166 chapters so far, so I will give it a try. From the perspective of the world view and people's outlook on life, this novel is a positive and optimistic novel with a sense of justice. Although it is not the best of the batch, it is already a rare good book that is basically non-toxic. The author is sincere and hopes to write better books in the future. The rating is a bit low. A normal rating for this book should be 9.2 Or 9.3.

I love it so much, it's so beautiful. It's not the kind of text that is invincible right away. The young man is full of high spirits, simply. Moreover, the plot of the story is super fresh, I have never seen it before, the traditional realm of cultivating immortals, but pretending to be new wine. Those magical powers. Monster. There is also a layer of fog around the worldview. The foundation of the murderous aura of heaven, the strange way of cultivating immortals, and all kinds of traps The most important thing is that the protagonist does not have a harem, there are female characters, but the distance between the protagonist and them is very comfortable. In short, I love it.

It's good, but it has a tendency to abuse the protagonist. This book should be rated at least 9 points or above. The further it goes, the better. The world view becomes bigger and bigger. I hope the author can keep it from being bad (not a troll). I believe the author can't afford it (bushi). After looking at the low scores, most of them were those who read the book for less than an hour. There are also other people's explanations. Maybe it was a bit poisonous before the correction.

Based on the title of this book, I thought it was a great novel, but in fact, the content of the story is very exciting. It tells about the ups and downs of life and human relationships in cultivating immortality, there are fierce fights, and there are also various interesting things that the protagonist encounters in life. The plot is not brainless, the protagonist has a distinct character, and the plot is logical. It is a book worth reading. (The above is my opinion) (´ ▽｀)ノ♪Dear author, cheers for you! ! I hope you can produce better and more excellent works in the future (LaLa(￣▽￣)♥️)

The author of this book is a teacher. So, there is no need to think about the writing style. The beginning is wonderful, and the ending is not bad, three pictures a day. Don't worry about not seeing enough. I really like this one without a heroine. Strong is strong, and the emotional material is rich. Everyone writes vividly. Among them, there is actually foreshadowing. It was only when I saw it later that I realized it was a foreshadowing. As for what it was | foreshadowing? It is up to the book lovers to discover on their own that the update time is generally from 11:57 to midnight. It's easy to get emotional about the situation. Even those with a low tear point will cry, like me. Why are the updates getting earlier and earlier recently? Yeah Before, I had to wait until after 11 o'clock every time to watch it. You can see it now after 10 o'clock The author has become more conscientious now

To be honest, the world view really shocked me. The author is really capable. There are many tragedies in it, which shocked my heart hundreds of thousands of times. The numerous foreshadowings are heart-breaking, and every step is carefully taken. It is really a big picture😱

The plot is exciting, especially the second part. The first part is a failure, because everyone who reads the first part wants to read a cool novel, and the author writes a darker part later, which cannot be said to be dark, that is, a lot of foreshadowing, similar to Ten Days End. Those who like to look at the front cannot see the back; those who like the back cannot accept the front. . Of course, from a literary perspective, the happier the characters in the front are, the sadder and more depressing the characters in the back are. I just think it looks good, and it can be called a masterpiece in my mind What a pity. Books with similar settings already have scores of over 9.2, And there are only more than 200 pictures. This book is now only 9.0. The difference between before and after is too big. The early and late stages of this book really don't match up.

The layout of this book is beyond what I imagined at the beginning. This is not just a funny article abandoned by the system. When you read more than a thousand chapters in one breath, you will find that our protagonist Li Chuyi is really miserable and really bad (the first clues are revealed in Hua Linglang). Of course, happiness and pain coexist, and we will also witness this magnificent world from Li Chuyi's perspective. Moreover, the realm setting here (in the later period) is very novel. Different from other immortal novels, I can really feel the strong force in it, and the fighting in the later period requires a brain to watch. To be honest, his worldview is really too big, and I'm really a little afraid that he can't control it... (The pace of this book is slow, so I started reading it after reading 600 chapters. When it reached 1,000 chapters, I started reading again, and accidentally finished it all. Its huge worldview slowly entered my mind and shocked me.) (Don't worry, Li Chuyi is a straight man and won't have any emotional problems. You can watch with confidence)

The subject matter is top-notch and the story is novel. Excellent logic. The writing is top quality. To put it bluntly, this book is not to my taste, because the books I like without female protagonists basically don't describe women very much. If the writing is so good and you don't accept it, why write it? The overall writing is fine, but there are some plots that I feel the author couldn't write, especially the fighting part, which is very lacking. The same goes for the emotional scenes. I feel like the writing style is still not enough. But the writing on digging and filling holes is very good, and some small details are really well written. It's still a matter of logic. I personally think that the way of heaven must be ruthless, and there must be a difference between immortals and mortals. Immortal cultivators practice transformation. The more they practice, the closer they are to the way of heaven, the less emotional they will be as humans. Otherwise, immortals will live longer and have endless descendants. If the descendants are bullied, won't it cause a world war? After all, you have ancestors and so do I. Overall, it is an underrated novel, and my personal rating is no problem at 9.2-9.5. If you want to write an anti-routine article, you might as well read "I told you to die, but I didn't make you invincible"

I don't know what to say, but I think this is a good book. Immortals, Buddhas, demons, ghosts, and all races are all what I saw and heard on the first day of the new year. There are endless conspiracies and weirdness. And Li Chuyi also went from innocence at the beginning to devastation later, and then to death, dissipated and regained his freedom. Although I have only read more than half of it (more than 500 chapters), I feel that this is the only one I like among all the novels about cultivating immortals that I have read (strange). The protagonist is not a virgin, not partial, decisive in killing, not moved by women, but can sacrifice his life for the people around him. This is my personal understanding, and I really like this novel😊

The writing is very good, the author's writing style is very good, it is really worth reading. In the past, when I read some 9-point books, I felt that they were just the same. They were all in the same routine, and I didn't want to read them after reading a few chapters. However, this 8-point book was quite surprising, and the 8-point score was lower. I can give you nine point eight.

What can I say about this book? I really liked it. I was told to quit the first few chapters when I thought it was not good. But when I saw the later chapters, it was definitely good enough. The novel cultivation method and the growth of the protagonist were also obvious. It was all foreshadowing from beginning to end, but the author filled it in well. The world view is very big. When the plot unfolds later, I was confused. The structure of the writing is also very clear. Although the world view is grand, there is no unclear feeling. In the end, the second chapter is dark, and the unreasonable things the protagonist does are all foreshadowing (there are some poisonous points in the front, but the latter part is really exciting, not a cool novel, not a cool novel, not a cool novel) Every time Li Chuyi falls into a new game, I don't know how to win, and this time I don't see any chance of winning; by the way, the author really doesn't plan to change his name.

Nb, after reading these books, I think this is the one with the grandest world view, the best combat power, and the most miserable protagonist. Although the first few chapters are a bit discouraging, the middle and later chapters are really exciting. The protagonist was shocked for the first time when he gambled on human skin in the secret realm. The scenes behind Good Guys are even more exciting, and the mountains of corpses and seas of blood are insignificant. From orthodox immortal cultivation to Taoist weird immortality, right? Dear book friends who come later, this book is definitely a good book. I know that my knowledge is shallow and I won't say rare words. In short, this book will never let you down after reading it. Ps: The perfect human race is a real nb, and he will really come to you if something happens.

It's a good read. I thought it was a mindless and cool article at first, but fortunately I read the comments and found out that the latter part is completely different. I read it for several days and finished it in one go. I feel that it is one of the rare masterpieces I have ever read on Tomato.

This is a book that stands out in Tomato, and there are very few that can stand beside it. The current rating of 9.2 Is far from the real level. The grand world view, the ingenuity of the story, the complexity of the plot, and the richness of the characters created by the author are all of a rare high level. Moreover, the author's writing style is quite good, and the writing is smooth, neither obscure nor superficial. However, this book picks out readers, has a cheesy name, and is presented as a cool novel. The early writing is relatively bland, the characters and plots are a bit out of the ordinary, and the story style is a bit cruel and bloody. Some readers may not have read nearly 200 chapters and gave up after the first big plot. In fact, the plot of this book is full of twists and turns, one story after another, one story after another, one story after another, one story after another, one story after another, the imagination breaks through the sky, but the underlying logic remains intact, and the biggest foreshadowing runs throughout the book. Fortunately, I already have the entire book, otherwise when I was catching up on the update, I would have thought that the author's plot had failed. Of course, this is also a small shortcoming. The foreshadowing of the main plot is too far-reaching, and the author's hints are too secretive. The protagonist is under great pressure and confusion, and even the readers feel desperate. In any case, I would like to thank the author for writing such a wonderful work. I hope that the writing will be full of flowers and endless thoughts!

First of all, I would like to state that I have ten years of reading experience. The following are all my personal true opinions. The book starts with a relatively relaxed atmosphere, but as the story progresses the huge world created by the author gradually begins to unfold. The biggest feature of this book is the "immortal destiny". The thirteen immortal destiny brings a unique story experience. Coupled with the distinction between real and false worlds, there are many details hidden by the author in the advancement of the story, which are worthy of everyone's careful appreciation. I hope everyone can support the author more and give the author free gifts🎁 every day. I hope the author can bring us more exciting stories.

I have read so many articles about cultivating immortals, and I have seen a lot of them that are well-written, extremely romantic, or follow the rules, are steady and mature, and there are also some that are too cool to read. Of course, I am also quite picky. There are often many good articles about cultivating immortals, but people often read them half way through and decide to read them again. And here comes the point! This work breaks the tradition of cultivating immortals! ! ! Absolutely novel training system, novel world view, and unexpected protagonist's career. Here you won't see boring people in the same situation showing themselves up and fighting over each other in the same way. It's more about the protagonist's own adventures. I'll just say one thing. The protagonist wanders around in various calculations from beginning to end, and the whole process is attractive. Although the writing style is not as natural and gentle as a boss level, the story is absolutely! Absolute! Worth a look. Spoilers (from the beginning to the end, the protagonist has never managed to escape from the villain who plotted against the game. There is absolutely no solution. The protagonist has the only winning weapon, the perseverance and state of mind that all protagonists have, and, absolute luck.) To add, the protagonist is extremely miserable [crazy]. It is rare to see a protagonist who has nothing left to give back [crazy]. The unique adventure of the protagonist makes me feel like I have returned to the Charles IX of my childhood. It is an absolutely imaginative work.

It's a cool story, it's definitely a cool story. The protagonist Li Chuyi's life is too sweet. He has three thousand beauties in the harem and no one dares to plot against the protagonist. It's a bit miserable before the age of fifty, but not too miserable between the ages of fifty and five hundred. After the age of five hundred, it's sweet and very lucky. --Hongzhong🀄 The author's writing is very good, there is no reading fatigue, it is finished, it is your loss if you don't read it, I think it is worth the fee. Recommended for readers to read.

The author of this book has excellent writing style. It is even better than Perfect World, Covering the Sky, and The Age of Wilderness. However, the name feels a bit cheap and cool. There are too many pitfalls in this book, but you can basically fill it in. You have to read it carefully. Li Chuyi is too bitter and bitter. Why should Li Chuyi resist everything? [Crying] I am a cultivator like Hua Hua Ang Ma. When he was a teenager, he had a clear idea of ​​cultivating. I hope Li Chuyi can be invincible in all worlds in the end.