Lobotomy Corporation: Winning Over Angela from the Start

This book is considered top-notch in the monthly calculation circle. And the advantages are very obvious, focusing on the description of characters and the portrayal of the city. But there are also shortcomings, that is, it is too short, leaving a lot of holes unfilled, and there is also a common problem in fan fiction. The description of the background is too sparse. It is okay for people within the circle to read it, but it is not conducive to attracting people outside the circle to read. But in a sense this is good, and the longer it is written, the easier it is to collapse. But I still wish the author a bright future [top post][top post][top post]

It's so good. It's so good. The last time I read such a good Lobotomy novel, it was the book about Hara He, the protagonist of Lobotomy Company. The author of the later book often stopped updating, and the quality was not good enough. I didn't want to read it until I came across this book. It's so good!!! When I saw the chapter where the protagonist is trapped on the train, I was so drawn into it, holy shit.

I just finished playing The Library some time ago, and I was confused by the plot. I was wondering if there were any books about monthly calculations, so I read it on Tomato. It turned out that there were quite a few books. The last one I chose was this one. The plot changed with the mod was really eye-catching. I heard that it is still my favorite single heroine. I almost fell asleep. I sent a pillow, but unfortunately the number of words is too small, so after a short time of reading, I was still excited and couldn't turn the page. The joy was gone. Come on, the author, it is very beautiful. I don't have any suggestions, just keep the current level. I hope the ending of Roland and Angelica can be happy [Blow kiss] Okay, great, my dream has come true. I can eat all the sweets I want. I'm full from every angle. Thank you, the author, for giving me the honey glue for my heart that was shattered by the lobe and the library knife. I don't talk about other angles. Just the plot and the final ending. I can only say great, great, 100%, so satisfied [Like]

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It looks good. To be honest, Lobotomy Company is relatively unpopular and unpopular. There are actually very few game fan fictions. I hope the author can keep at it. In addition, the system will usually have a big hole, such as the origin of the system. I hope the author can fill this hole as soon as possible. Come on [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss](I also gave a gift)

It's a good book. Compared with other monthly fan fiction books, this book is updated quickly and the quality of each chapter is basically good. There will be no problem of good and bad chapters. Moreover, the character portrayal is relatively delicate. From this point of view, the author has definitely worked hard, and compared to other monthly fan fiction, this book is one of the few good books written by the author. After all, the moon plan fanfics I've read... Tsk, it's really hard to describe in one word. Having said that, the author also tries his best to match the character settings of the original work in terms of character settings, which we should empathize with.

It's a good book: the first article's ideas are novel and very clear at the same time; the second author has a relatively deep involvement in the original game, and his language expression is relatively straightforward and generous, making it easier for those who have never played the game to understand; the third article has made a strange solution to some difficulties in the game, which is unexpected, but also makes sense and makes the people who should have been in trouble live. It naturally leads to the later "Prison Bus"; fourthly, the description of the characters and the portrayal of the protagonist and several other protagonists are better. The male protagonist has rigorous thinking in his funny words. Roland's eyes that are calm to the point of being serious can't hide the endless hesitation and fatigue; Fifth, the protagonist in the article was destined when he established the Wings of Redemption. The urban struggle in this article provides interesting branches and some literary battles, which increases the readability of the article; sixth, the in-depth plot of the plot and the speed of Qin's change make the readers nervous. One chapter and one new content make people curious and eager for the next chapter to come soon. I'm sorry for the first time.

Although overall it still follows the main line, But there are also contents that are different from the original work, and they are added very well. The interactions with the original characters are also in-character and really heartwarming. There are simply not too many characters in the city who need to be redeemed. The overall look and feel is very comfortable Angela transforms into a human faster than in the original work, and her relationship with Secretary Shu has also become better. I am looking forward to the scene where everyone eats stew together. Yang, Philip, is expected to be a master of magic. Will he join the protagonist's organization? Is Angela a single heroine? Will there be another story after the ruins plot is over? Will Angelica be resurrected? Can Zima still see the future now? Anyway, I'm looking forward to it [please update] The main plot is over...

This book has a perfect portrayal of the protagonist, and the setting is very consistent with the setting of the library period. The boss and other series of ceilings were initially curious about the novelty of the time traveler, which gave the protagonist enough time to develop and the "opportunity" to integrate into the city. (Head: What is this? Take a look.) What is interesting is that the leader in the library behaves like he is close to omniscient about everything, but not omnipotent. From the words of the new leader later, it can be seen that the leader already knew about the library as soon as it appeared, but did not take action and was just a fun person, so it seems more reasonable that the protagonist was not arrested as soon as he left the library. (Head: Lele Lele Lele) The subsequent arrangement is also very reasonable. After all, if Angela turns back into a machine in the perfect ending, the leader will still move the library away. As a time traveler with great influence and power, it is impossible for the leader not to expel you from the city. (Leader & Minion: If nothing else, today there will be me without you, you without me!) There is also the process of the protagonist's own growth and the growth of those around him that he radiates, which are also handled very well. (At least I need to learn from the author) The emotional line is very clear, which enhances the look and feel without appearing obtrusive. Even if you feed dog food from time to time, you won't feel that there is anything wrong. (Sweet sweet) All in all, it's a rare fanfic, and I'm looking forward to the ending!

Oh my god, it's so well written, isn't it? For the first time, I saw the twists and turns of the characters. So pretty. I hope to follow more Lobotomy and Abandoned Library books in the future. You are currently the second abandoned library book I have finished reading. I will keep it forever. Until today.