Humans in the Heavens: the Beginning Posts Supergirl

Very nice, five stars given

Yes, the author must keep writing until the end. There is a beginning and an end.

How should I put it, I have been reading Tomato for several years, and this is the first time I have officially reviewed a Tomato book. The book is quite good, but the beginning is really hard to swallow. The protagonist's abilities, background, and personality are not clearly introduced at the beginning. I don't know what you think. I felt a little uncomfortable. But after about ten chapters or so, it was clearly introduced, so it was okay. But give the new book five stars for encouragement.

I would like to ask the author if he plans to write about the first world. It was originally intended for the show Supergirl. , I personally like the character of Supergirl, and I also like the interaction between Supergirl and Supergirl written by the author. The first female protagonist will not be a background or simply not exist. To be honest, the last thing I want to read when reading fanfiction is Infinite Flow. It should be because most Infinite Flows open a new book every time they go to a world, and the emotional lines or growth experiences written in the previous world are It's as if they don't exist, so I might as well find a new book to read. It's very uncomfortable to see the characters you like change their world and no longer exist. At least you can bring the heroines of each world with the hero and write some interactions with the hero in different worlds. If you are writing about opening a new world, then the heroine you wrote before will disappear until the finale. Then I just need to see the ending of the first Supergirl world. I hope the author can express his thoughts.

Speed ​​update, speed update. In my eyes, your book is the only one in Tomato that writes about a superwoman. Very well written. The plasticity is also very large. Even if we only write about the two worlds of DC and Marvel, there is still a very large amount of space to write about. Their world is huge and the stories they involve are many. Although I really want to see the protagonist being domineering and pushing him all the way. But this book adapted my senses. I really like this kind of protagonist. I support her from behind, encourage her, accompany her, and let Supergirl grow up all the way. There should be some interaction. Those TV drama versions. The Flash, Green Arrow, etc. There are also Superman and Louisa. A little selfish, because I just recently finished watching Superman and Lois. I really want to read what you wrote, and finish the stories between Superman and Supergirl first. My opinion is this, finish their stories first, and then expand to other DC universes. Then go shopping next door at Marvel. I'm looking forward to the plots in other DC universes and the Marvel universe, but I'm even more looking forward to the crossover between Superman and Lois, and another character, Tal Law. I really want to see him come out. But I think there is no need to write about the world of Naruto and Pirates, but just like that, I only read 49 chapters. I decisively give it five stars because I think your book is very good and I'm looking forward to the next one. Come on, author! Give me a reply.

There are no logic bugs in this fanfic. Again, there are no logic bugs! What I fear the most when reading fan fiction is that the author will have too much imagination, and it will lead to logical confusion because of the joy of writing, but this book does not have that, it is very good! ! The plots of each character are also handled well, and nothing feels abrupt. This is very important, at least to ensure that the characters in the book are alive. The protagonist's outlook on life is normal and there is no disgusting behavior. I am a normal person and cannot enjoy torture. There is no water in the plot. The most disturbing part is the description of Karami's mental journey. Fortunately, this book doesn't have it. It's all dry stuff. Overall, if the rest of the novel is of this level, it will definitely be a top-notch fan novel.

The protagonist is Pure Turtle Man, Soy Sauce Man, Narrator Man, and Storyteller.

It's not bad. Those who were attracted by Supergirl will go to other worlds later, but it doesn't hurt. After all, there was a time when I really liked Zhu Tianwen, so I can accept it. For me personally, there are no major poisonous points in this book, but there are a lot of small poisonous points, which are acceptable [I learned it] [I learned it] The author also updates at a fast pace. Ten chapters a day, and a chapter of 5,000 words is not too much. If that doesn't work, I'll allow you to rest for a week and then publish twenty chapters in a row. (The above are all jokes) I wish the author here to have good inspiration, and then make more money [laughing][laughing]

Luo Shadiao at the end of the world [laughing][laughing][laughing]

DC has a sacred timeline? Isn't this the one from Marvel's Kang the Conqueror?

The writing is very good, but when will you start your journey to the heavens, I advise you to be kind and add more [smile] [please update]

Do it faster, do it faster

In the multiverse of the DC worldview, Superman is basically the ceiling among those with abilities. The protagonist gains superhuman strength and knowledge to build some equipment and so on, which is a bit like a behind-the-scenes flow. To be honest, at the beginning, I didn't get enough sunshine. I felt that the protagonist and Supergirl were not very strong. I look forward to strengthening the protagonist in the future.

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In the context of tomato, a fast-food novel, the writing style and plot settings are excellent, and the protagonist is also highly intelligent. It is worth a read!

It's really good. I didn't expect to see such high-quality novels on Tomato. It suits my XP very well. [Praise]

Why are there so few updates? The writing is quite good. I can't write about Supergirl constantly. Sorry [grievance]

Well written! Keep up the good work!

Where did DC get the sacred timeline?

It's very interesting, but the protagonist's background and abilities are not clearly introduced at the beginning.

This book feels very good. I hope I won't be imprisoned [face covering]

Five stars given, it's a very good viewing experience so far.

Five-star review, I personally like this type of product.

Yes, very good. There are really very few fanfics about the TV series version of Supergirl. This one is pretty good, but the protagonist is not focused enough.

Personally I think it's good

Not bad, a bit sweet, well written

Nice! To my liking

It's really pretty

Not bad. Keep up the good work!

Author, hurry up. I've been waiting for more than a month before you finished writing a world.