About the Time I Traveled to Kalos

I have finished watching the latest plot. The overall rhythm is smooth, the female protagonist has a lovable personality, and the male protagonist is gentle and intelligent. The interaction between the male and female protagonists is very sweet, and the ignorant love between them is particularly beautiful. Highly recommended.

Wow wow wow, the book written by the author is so beautiful! [Upvote] (Shamelessly give yourself a five-star rating) [Upvote]

This book is very good, it is a genre that I am interested in. I hope the author will work hard and not give up ( ◍ • ᴗ • ◍ ) ❤ (Also, who is the heroine? Is she Gardevoir [laughing])

We can slowly develop it around Kenil as the heroine. More updates, author. I am looking forward to the follow-up of this book😄

The biggest advantage of this book is the restoration of the plot in the Carlos region. The protagonist of the novel travels as a time traveler with his bonded elf Gardevoir (the real heroine). This is not only a model of time travel novels, but also satisfies the hearts of those who are passionate about the plot of Carlos. It successfully caters to the audience's grandfather's desire to make a trip with Master Zhi. The writing is mainly narrated from a third-person perspective, successfully breaking the boundaries of time and space and making the plot richer and more complete. In the plot, the author spares no effort to describe various battles, life, travel, the protagonist's character and other details in depth. This undoubtedly makes one distinct character image stand out one after another. However, the author should strengthen the connection between other characters and the protagonist instead of simply inner monologue and communication with the elves. Secondly, I sincerely hope that the author can clarify the various values ​​​​of the game, the purpose of props, the logic of evolution, etc. Although the anime is vague about this, it would be a good thing if the various settings and rules in the game can be inserted into this novel to let readers understand the system of this Pokémon world. The logic of the plot does not recommend that the author develop the story completely according to the plot of the anime. After all, it is Zhiye's journey, and the protagonist of the novel has his own independent thinking and can play his cards without following the routine at all. Although the protagonist is traveling in the Kalos region, the plot mode cannot completely follow the plot of Kalos. S), Zeri (Pokemon Platinum Light. Use GBA for emulators), Lorraine (Pokemon Platinum Light. Same for emulators as above), Tuno (Pokemon Glaze. Use GBA for emulators), Hezhong (Pokemon Black 2 or White 2. Use for emulators) nds), New Union, Tyrone (Pokemon Victory Fire. Use GBA for the emulator), Carlos, Xeno (Pokemon Dark Phantom. Use the GBA for the emulator)] to establish contact. It would be great if you can lay the groundwork. Of course, these are just the plot of the game and can only be used as a reference. The original work should still be the main one. After all, according to the setting of the protagonist - a real fan of Master Zhi. The author might as well make an outline, with the main plot as the main line (the Four Kingdoms champion line + the plot line of crushing the villains) and the branch lines as auxiliary (laying the foreshadowing for the main line while advancing the plot development). All in all, I'm really looking forward to the author's updates, come on

Come on, author, work hard to update more. I just hope that it won't be unfinished in the future. There are thousands of good-looking fans, but yours is the shining star. Finally, I hope you won't be unfinished and work hard to update to more than 1,000 chapters [laughing] Arigadoimas [laughing]

Very good looking, the heroine Korni is also good٩(๑ᵒ̴̶̷͈᷄ᗨᵒ̴̶̷͈᷅)وgreat

I quite like watching single female protagonists, and I hope the author will write more sweet plots. I also hope to add a dragon Pokémon for the protagonist [Send Hearts][Send Hearts]

Don't be fooled by the score. The writing is reasonable and well-written. There are no parallel imports, but Diancie's theatrical version is a bit delayed and can be skipped. There is no travel with Ash. The previous linkage with Serena is purely entertainment. There is nothing to say. Please savor it carefully. Although it is a Gardevoir Pokémon, this is a fixed routine. , But it can be ignored. However, except for this, it is all self-created, and the plot does not follow Xiaozhi. It is much better than other books, and the writing style is slowly improving. It is very good for this new author to have this. In short, as long as there is no cerebral palsy eunuch in the back, this book is good and worth reading [Note]

It's really good. It's far inferior to other Pokémon articles on Tomato. The pace is just right, neither too fast nor too slow. If you continue, it will be a fine book.

It's a great book, one of the best among Pokémon Tomato fanfics. The writing is pretty good and very mature. It can be seen that the author is not writing for the first time. The description of battles is better than that of regular books. The status of Pokémon is also written out, unlike some books that just write a skill and it's done. Moreover, it is a rare Kalos plot at the beginning. It describes the world view of the anime very well. There is no messy game or level setting, and it is very consistent with the world view of the anime. Of course, the best thing is that there is no system. I am really tired of this thing. It is a rare and normal book in Tomato. These two words are beautiful and I support the author. The above are all my personal opinions. The only shortcoming is that there are too few words. But seeing as the author keeps updating, it's okay, okay (￢㉨￢)

Come on, author, come on, come on, I'm optimistic about you, don't be anxious, your writing will get worse and worse later on, I've seen many people like this, don't be anxious, this book is great, great! I will always support you! Come on, come on, come on! [Like][Like][Like][Like]

This is one of the rare Pokémon novels that starts with Carlos. Except for the awkward moment when asking for resources from the doctor at the beginning, everything else is pretty good.

This book is simply a breath of fresh air in the flow of Pokémon novels. It feels a bit like when I first read Luye. In short, the author writes very well. Come on, don't be a pig (ˉ͈̀꒳ˉ͈́)✧

Ness, I haven't seen a Pokémon like this for a long time. Although it's a bit slow and watery, it doesn't stop it from being good-looking. Think about how many Pokémon texts like this are out there now. It's normal to have some flaws. It's still readable if you tolerate it, so don't pick any more. [Punch][Punch][Punch]

It's quite interesting. Taking the main plot as a guide and the author's travel perspective, we see a real newcomer starting to travel. Unlike other Pokémon fan fiction, a Pokémon is immediately invincible after being caught. It also cancels the deliberate leveling mechanism. The evolution is full of unknowns (actually, it just depends on the author's face [rolling eyes]). I feel good, but I just hope that I won't be like Xiaozhi in the middle. I look forward to the author giving this book a perfect ending. Finally, Xiaozhi, you will always be that 10-year-old boy. Even if I can't see you in the anime, you will always be in my heart. Pokémon, what I see is Xiaozhi and Pi Shen, not a bunch of elementary school students playing Pokémon games! ! ! !

Come on author, your writing is great. I rarely see stories starting from Carlos, so I hope it won't end badly and write more exciting content.

It's quite beautiful. It completed the beginning of my childhood fantasy. I hope the author will keep updating it. I will always support the author. Also, as for the heroine, I hope it will be Korni, because I am infected by her character and like this female character quite a lot, so I would like to thank the author. Come on, author, I am your loyal reader, you are my "dream-fulfilling giant". Thank you for writing such a good work. Thank you for letting me find the infinite reverie when I was young. Thank you very much. I hope you will keep updating. I will always support you [Like][Like][Like]

4.5 Stars, generally good, but don't always follow Xiaozhi's plot, which will make people feel boring. What fun will there be if you know the follow-up? I hope the author can develop the protagonist more 4 stars. The protagonist's presence in the Alola chapter is too low. Most of the scenes are with the original protagonist group. The combat power is too low. In the early stage, the mythical beasts are beaten randomly, and in the later stage, Dianxi is not released at all. It is good to mention one chapter in ten chapters. It is too everyday. The original passion has become calm. There is no need to insist on it. Putting the protagonist into a desperate situation can make a comeback. There is no need to be so careful. Expose it when it needs to be exposed. How many enemies can Dianxi mage still have that cannot be solved? The alliance will also pay attention to it. It is meaningless to keep delaying. In fact, it should be 3 stars, but Carlos was still good before the conference, otherwise he would not have 4 stars.

It's very interesting, um, well written, very good. I haven't seen a Pokémon written like this for a long time [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] [laughing]

It's very beautiful, really good. It doesn't matter what the heroine is, to be honest. To be honest, in the Kalos region, I hope the author can keep Xiaozhi's Koga Ninja. Otherwise, the main reason is that he is too handsome [laughter]

It's so beautiful. I hope it won't stop updating. Otherwise, where else can I find such beautiful Pokémon text? [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart] Ah! ! ! I can't stand it anymore. When are we going to let the protagonist find the Gardevoir super evolution stone? ! ! ! !

It's pretty good, one of the best Pokémon fanfics I've ever read.

I think this Pokémon fan novel is better to read than most other fan novels. If you don't read it carefully, it's hard to see the highlights. The problem is that the author brought his own perspective into it and did not write the protagonist's own perspective. It can be seen from the description of Pokémon battles. It can be seen that the author is a pure battle party and understands it. Otherwise, there is no way he would be able to put "punishment" in such a way. An unpopular skill is taken out, but the big scenes are a bit unexciting, but it doesn't hurt. The heroine Kearney's character is very consistent with the atmosphere and atmosphere of the original work. The burning point is as light as a cucumber, but the score of 9.2 Is a bit low. This novel can be regarded as a masterpiece, but the score is low. It may be because the author is too slow to update. Overall, this is the best book among the Carlos chapters.

The writing is great, the plot is also very good, and there are not too many cheating plots. Now that I have written this theatrical version, I hope that the mythical beasts can have some communication with the protagonist, and then completely understand the power in the protagonist's body. If it is okay, the mythical beasts can help the protagonist to strengthen the power in the body.

Come on, author, please don't stop updating. Yours is one of my three favorite Pokémon anime fanfics on Tomato. The other two were removed from the shelves and the other collapsed. Please don't stop updating. Later, I had no choice but to find a decent replacement. , Although it's awkward for you to give the elf a name, and Alola is still pretty cool, but what you wrote is not outrageous. Every other fan is more outrageous than the other, so why are you so good at traveling? The elf's writing is like data and has no sense of substitution. In short, it depends on your book to support it, come on.

The author is great and his writing is pretty good~(￣▽￣~)~ The protagonist's elf team has not experienced a collapse in combat power, and has steadily improved the combat power of his team step by step. He also has his own way of dealing with crises. "Carlos" was written very well in my opinion, and "Alola" was a bit boring but not bad either. The title of the book may not be so amazing, but if you read it in depth, you will feel a different kind of amazement. I hope the author can write this book more perfectly.

I started following it not long ago, and I watched it in one go. It's a really good pm fanfic. The main body of the novel currently seems to be the most consistent with the anime worldview among all pm fan fiction. This is very important, there is no messy grading, and the settings are relatively reasonable. It's not that those settings are not good to read, but the original flavor of this novel is obviously more comfortable to read. The world view is also very consistent with the animation. There is no unexplained death of PM (this is very important, PM novels should not be tragedies), there is no poverty and working everywhere for various training resources, and there is no system to help the protagonist Long Aotian. I hope the author will continue to work hard, come on. The battles are wonderfully written, and the opponents are not weak at all. There are no novels in which anyone who has played the game will definitely be able to crush the various tactics in the anime. Instead, it fits the battle style in the anime, and I like it very much.

The writing style and plot are also a breath of fresh air in Pokémon novels, which makes people feel very comfortable. Other Pokémon novels are either too murderous or have illogical settings. At the beginning, they write wildly about how expensive it is to train Pokémon and how important qualifications are. Later, these settings are all lost. Sure enough, it is better not to be too "realistic" in the Pokémon world. Are you really going to let your girlfriend go? [What]

Very good, much better than other Pokémon novels