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The Harry Potter fan fiction is well written. I hope it can be kept up and don't write too much. PS: It would be better if there were more chapters every day.

This book is really good, I should have written a review a few days ago. However, there were many things going on at the time, so we put it on hold for the time being. When I clicked on this book for the first time, I immediately returned it to the bookstore. The second time I clicked on it, I have been following it until now. I have a weak appetite, so I can't read the latest chapters of many books, but luckily, this book suits my appetite. My classmate once said: Beauty is in the eye of the beholder. Really, I don't feel the poisonous points mentioned by other book friends. If the author hadn't mentioned it, I wouldn't have noticed it at all. This book has a very distinctive feature, or it can be said to be the author's characteristic. He really pays attention to details, and the author can provide the basis for what he wrote in the comments made by book friends. This kind of author is really rare in Tomato. This is a great example of a fanfiction writer. And the time chosen by the author is a few years before Harry. The original storyline is so high-quality and really awesome. I am not good at Chinese and cannot accurately express my views on this book. Please forgive me, the author. I hope this book does not enter the palace, and the results of this book will definitely be very good. After all, time is the only tool to test the quality of the book. [Laughing evilly] ps: When will the relationship between Annie and Li Ang be finalized [laughing evilly]

This is my third favorite Harry fic to date (even though I've never read Harry Potter). The author is very sophisticated. The author should be the most sophisticated among the fans I have ever read. Everything corresponds to the original work, and appropriate secondary creations are made. At the same time, the most exciting part is probably the volume of time cycle, but it can also be seen that the author should have deleted some, and some details have not been filled in, but it has no impact (maybe I read ten lines at a glance too quickly). Moreover, the protagonist has his own story. I personally think that Erchuang is a good fanfic if it is separated from the protagonist of the original work but without departing from the original work. At the same time, the author's writing style is also very good, making this novel very exciting.

Hello, author! First of all, please don't be nervous. I'm not here to urge you to update it, because I believe that I can see its ending in my lifetime. Please write carefully. It doesn't matter how long you write. As long as you don't give up and don't overflow, everything will not be a problem. I will wait with your loyal readers. I admire your writing style very much, which is both humorous and profound. To put it bluntly, if you are included in the article, you are a senior performer. I am the audience who appreciates the video. Your performance has reached a fascinating level. Just like Jian Han's state of watching "The Fifteen Days of Leohard", one more episode means one less episode. I want to watch it but can't let it go. The contradictory and complicated emotions drive me crazy. I was just a bored idler, and I clicked on this novel aimlessly, with no intention of finishing it, but you succeeded in making me "half" finish it. Now, I can only express my emotions! Only by leaving a message in the comments can I stabilize my mood at this moment. With a sense of luck, I hope you can see it. Come on, author, I look forward to every "next chapter" of yours. Your Dear Readers First August 23, 2023

The writing is okay, but the timing is a bit messy, but overall it's good. I've read a lot of Harry Potter fanfics, and this one isn't bad. I want to know why the rating is so low? Even if it's not 9.4 Or 9.5, I think it's not a big problem to go to 9.

Come on, author, it's a good book in my opinion

It's very interesting. It has constructed a brand new story before Harry. The content is coherent and the plot is fresh. The protagonist's image is well written. However, the power improvement in it is a bit prominent and there is no sense of gradual progress.

So short! I hope I won't follow the savior every day.

I feel like this book is really good. I've read a lot of fanfics before, and they're all average. Some of them feel like I've been fed shit, but this book really stood out to me.

A fantasy novel wrapped in a Harry Potter coat, It can be seen that the outline is very good, and the author's writing style is very high from the foreshadowing riddles written in chapters. Don't read it as Harry Potter. The current main plot can be read as a text version of "The Butterfly Effect" for the time being. There are a lot of foreshadowings in the story, which is very novel in fast-food novels. You need to use some brains. If you don't like it, please don't give it a bad rating and just go next door. Recommend good books to everyone and give the author some motivation to finish the book!

Come, the author read with me, I solemnly swear: starting from today. Never updated. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly swear that I firmly believe that I am a good author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code diligently. I am the keyboard in the dark and the guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to coding every day!!!

It's pretty good. I personally don't think there's anything wrong with it. Maybe it's because I haven't read the original work, but I feel like I can't find faults with it even if I've read the original work. Anything can happen in the magical world. If you insist on finding problems with the author's original characters, characters, and plot, then why don't you read the original work?

It feels pretty good and I don't follow the crowd like others. I would feel weird if you could have feelings for an eleven or twelve year old girl.

There's not much to say. Just look at the reading time. I have hundreds of books on my bookshelf, and HP fans have read quite a few. At least this one makes readers feel that the author is writing the book carefully and not fooling book friends. He is very rigorous and does not treat readers as fools.

I feel that it is quite good among Harry Potter fanfics. The protagonist has a different timeline and keeps getting stronger in order to protect himself. Unlike other fanfics, he is invincible when he first starts. The disadvantage is that there are a lot of typos and the emotional line is not obvious, but the quality is still quite high [Chigua]

This is something written by a normal person. One author's book cannot satisfy everyone, so I think it's okay. What does it have to do with me whether other people like it or not? [Note][Note][Note]

The writing is quite good, at least the plot and details of this book are the best among the Harry Potter fanfics I have seen. He did not favor Harry's father and told the story of Harry's previous generation from the perspective of a bystander.

Actually, I really want to know one thing. Is it possible for a "Mudblood" to be sorted into Slytherin? I don't quite understand this, but doesn't the Sorting Hat consider this? Where are the settings for this? Right, right, I want to see how many hours I have been reading [eating melon]

Yes, it's considered an excellent article in Tomato HP. I'm not very good at praising others, so forgive me [face covering]

I have read about 70 chapters so far. It is very good. So far, there are no poisonous points. It is a very good book. I rarely give reviews, but I think this book is good in terms of background, story, and characters. It is not like other magic books that grab resources and brush up the plot. The heroine Hermione is the same. And you can buy it if you haven't read Harry Potter very much. I don't want such a good book to be interrupted or unfinished, so I gave this five-star review and extended review. I hope the author will continue to work hard. Come on, don't be defeated by a temporary downturn. Sometimes many good books need time to ferment. Just like this book, I saw it from a recommendation, so believe in yourself, and I am following you. I hope I can keep it up.

Great write-up, looking forward to what's coming next! Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

It looks so good, I love it! (Twisting) (Screaming) (Crawling) (Handstand) (Crawling on all fours) (Running)

I feel that the author should add a symbol when changing scenes to separate it from the previous scene. Of course, I have only read more than 40 chapters and I don't know if it will be divided later. I have just read the third volume. The first two volumes are very rigorous in setting, but after reading a few chapters of this third volume, it feels like it was written by a different author. As for the most basic setting of the original work, Zongsi, the author himself also wrote Zongsi in the first volume. Now in the third volume, Zongsi has been eaten by you? . . .

Try to maintain a score of 8.0 To 7.8 For this book to prevent this book from trending

The plot is good except that the narrative is a bit messy.

When I first read the title, I thought it was just a funny style of writing, and I had no hope for the content. But after reading it, I found that it was written in big letters and was great! !

This book is indeed one of the best among the Harry Potter novels I have read.

It feels really rare to feel the author's respect in the article. Whether it's the original work or the readers, in the current environment where most online articles are either unfinished or unfinished, it feels really good to see that there are still authors who write books seriously.

The writing is quite good, but it's just not enough to read.

Sure enough, looking at it now, when I exit and take a look, I can still see it as an iron rod.