The opening story tells the story of a poor boy who traveled through bad people because of a treasure and became the Fengdu of the Xuanming Sect. The funny Youdu is good at building tombs and carving monuments, and together with the four corpse ancestors, he became a one-stop service for the Xuanming Sect.
Reader comments
Don't you tell the difference? It was written on purpose
It's Fengdu, not Youdu
Why don't you read it again after you've written it? That comma was used appallingly. It's a good sentence, but you separated it with commas.
Also, don't you need to put double quotes around what you say? It looks so tiring!
You must have read other people's works, right? If you don't know how to write it for the first time, you can take a look at how others write dialogue!
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Don't you tell the difference? It was written on purpose It's Fengdu, not Youdu Why don't you read it again after you've written it? That comma was used appallingly. It's a good sentence, but you separated it with commas. Also, don't you need to put double quotes around what you say? It looks so tiring! You must have read other people's works, right? If you don't know how to write it for the first time, you can take a look at how others write dialogue!
I think it's pretty good, I like to read it, please give it a thumbs up, author! Update soon, [Flying Kiss] has a novel theme, and the protagonist is funny, [licking the screen][licking the screen][licking the screen][licking the screen]