In Order to Become an Immortal, the Empress Brushed Off My Favorability!

What a book, what a book! Watch it for a while, the more you watch it, the more enjoyable it becomes, the more sadistic and crazier it gets.

I finally saw a good book again [face covering] Come on, I believe in you, update soon

A very interesting harem story, but if you think about the system simulation, there is a little setting bug. Moreover, Jiang Heng pretended not to have participated in the simulation at all. In reality, women are ghosts and ghosts. It is impossible not to notice that.

Dear author, come on, this is the first time I have rewarded so much 💰. If you have ideas, update them. If you don't, just take a good rest. Don't tire your body, especially your brain! Hope to see the finale [Adoration]

Not bad, it's a simulation game, the heroines all know each other, and there's a chat channel What the hell, can you not give Ye Caiwei so many plots? There are several female protagonists, can't we give them some plot?

This book reflects a social reality - women always rely on men In this book, no matter whether it is a cold goddess like Ye Caiwei, a wealthy lady like Xie Lingyun, or a powerful national teacher like Chu Xuanji, they were not so close to Jiang Heng at first, but after Jiang Heng revealed his own interests, they all fell under this interest, and Xiaobai who appeared later was determined at first. Women do not rely on men, but in two consecutive dungeon simulations, no matter how hard they tried, they could not defeat Jiang Heng. In the first two ordinary simulations, Jiang Heng reached the Immortal King and Emperor realms, and Xiaobai was the most talented Golden Immortal. In the end, Xiaobai could not resist the temptation and fell into the abyss of relying on Jiang Heng's talent to survive. This is also a satire on some people in modern society. They provide benefits to women, and women are loyal to them. Most women don't think there is any problem. However, it is not easy for independent-thinking women like Xiang Xiaobai to appear, but under the various temptations and setbacks arranged by them, they eventually fall into the abyss. He Xiaobai is a representative of independent women, and was eventually dragged into the abyss by Jiang Heng's temptation. This book has a strong social significance and deserves five stars [like][like][like][like][like]

I have never read a novel with such a neat plot in the first ten chapters and no word count. The subsequent plot is also very exciting, especially Xie Ling'er's plot, which moved me. A mix of laughter and touching moments. Such an excellent work, let me put it this way, if it continues, it can be regarded as one of the top five simulation novels.

The subject matter is novel, but there are too many characters involved. Some of them are not considered heroines, and the process of watching them is a bit uncomfortable. But it's still pretty cool. Five-star support

There are few books that can write good simulations, but the display is still a bit too slow after all. As long as the relationship between the characters and the image do not collapse, the basic problem will not be big.

The subject matter is very novel, and there is a "specificity" in the simulation that other harem novels cannot have. It is very interesting. In the early stage, both of them died in love and turned into the corpse of the junior junior sister. It can perfectly explain why the heroines are willing to become harems, but the later stages are too bland. Although the purpose is to promote the plot and avoid procrastination, I personally still better explain why the heroines become harems. You can describe in detail a certain plot of the relationship between the male and female protagonists, and write part of each simulated plot as a memory story, which can make the writing more heartbreaking. Since we already have skin posters, why not make a CG? For example, record some famous scenes (such as the three rejections of the imperial master), with a few famous sentences, such as: "The top of the immortals, proud of the world, there will be heaven if I am Anlan" and so on Realistic pregnancy is too early, and it will become more and more boring later on. In the end, it will become mediocre like other ordinary harem stories (a bunch of female protagonists will try hard to kiss the male protagonist even though they know he has a child, and the affectionate and dedicated personality of the male protagonist will collapse). It is recommended to add a real-life time lapse or the like or modify the plot, so that multiple time and space coincide, and finally they are pregnant together. It is justifiable and can be a perfect ending.

Brothers, come and take a look, I finally found a good-looking simulation. Finally it's not inexplicable. You're dead, you're dead, you're dead! This is very reasonable, and the simulation time is long.

It feels like the author is trying his best to finish writing the outlines and various schools of immortality that he has seen. Although it's a bit confusing now that Blue Star Stream is on. It's not enough rounds to train three two-dimensional figures to become emperors. But it feels pretty exciting. Come on. If it's really not enough, give it a second try. At least it would be a good ending to help Ye Caiwei become emperor. Peak start. Casual and bland in the middle. Use force from behind. It can be considered a clear cut in the simulation literature. After all, it's not the kind of thing that can be accepted on the first and second days.

It's amazing. It's different from what you imagined. First of all, the simulator is a web game, a multiplayer game, and then the expansion is different from other simulator novels. It is inevitable that there will be many bugs. Don't take it seriously, just read it with a smile... Can see, five stars -

It's good-looking, it's really good-looking, and the concept is also super good😄The protagonist is Shinroku, this harem, his talent, his, um, in the simulator, yes, the delicacy of human emotions, the realism of the simulator domain, oh, I can only say, it's quite interesting [laughs]

Although the subject matter is popular, it is quite novel and can capture people's hearts. At least that's all I have been reading on Tomato for so long. I really liked this simulator harem flow and finished it in one day.

Not bad! It can be considered a relatively novel category! However, I still have some suggestions for the author. The plot should be consistent with common sense! For example, my own son cheated on his own mother, tsk tsk tsk tsk, I wanted to say at that time, what a filial son (｀Δ´)!

Yes, it looks good. The author will update soon. I have also read a lot of simulator articles, most of which will affect reality. This kind of writing still requires a lot of control over the plot and setting, otherwise it will collapse if you are not careful. Of course, there is also the risk of eunuchs. After all, the simulator writing is mainly about the simulator. If you don't expect to simulate the plot, you will start writing a realistic plot, and too many repetitions of the simulation plot will be annoying. The author has opened 5 continents, and does not want to write about every continent. I hope that the realistic plot can be reasonably advanced, and the reality will not suddenly become the emperor.

I'll give it four stars. I still like the setting and story direction. It's quite interesting. But there is something wrong with the writing style. Friends who liked it in the comment area have already commented on it, and that's pretty much the problem.

The subject matter is relatively new, and the current plot is okay. After all, it's only chapter 150. It can be seen that the author's focus is on characterization.

The plot style is unique, and the rhythm is well arranged. The protagonist's growth does not appear to be delayed, but it does not rise directly without thinking. The plot strictly follows the main plot of the book's name, which is not a deviation. It is still a good book [Chigua][Chigua][Chigua][Chigua]

To give a brief review, I have to say that the author's writing skills are really good, and the plot is also very compact. Although it is a harem novel, it is not boring. Instead, it made me fall in love with harem novels again. The complex is also very novel. I feel that the rating is still a bit low. Such a good book cannot be buried. As long as this book is not bad, it will really be a masterpiece (personal opinion, please don't criticize) It's so good that I stayed up late at night to read it. This is the first novel that I didn't skip to the end. Please give me more encouragement from the author. It's not enough.

Well, to be honest, I have read a similar novel before, Simulation of the Empress of the Seven Kingdoms. At present, the simulation progress of this book seems to be fast. There is no empress realm. I think it is slow. Public chat is open. I hope it will not be unfinished. Come on, author.

What a lovely book. It's a pity that the update has been discontinued. To commemorate it, give me five points.

It looks great, every simulation is interesting, and the intersection of multiple female protagonists is like playing a galgame.

It's not enough. Please update it quickly. The plot is very good so far. Just make sure the girls are sweet [Like] ? The author, who is many years old, please rest assured to see why he suddenly stopped updating. People are confused It's been a year since I stopped updating. I'm starting a new book. Nan Bang. My blood pressure has gone up. The story is good but the author is not good

I think it's pretty cool, the score is only 8.7. Author update soon! ! Now I feel like I'm having a withdrawal reaction

Why did it stop updating? I really like this one. I can see that the author wrote it very carefully. Why did it suddenly stop updating?

Yes, it's a simulation. The male protagonist has human rights. I hope there are more types.

Many logical relationships and settings are not explained clearly, but it does not hinder the reading. As long as you don't follow the author's rhythm carefully, this book can be regarded as a masterpiece. However, I feel that it was explained in the world channel at the beginning and many people feel that it will be difficult to write later. The suggestion here is to set up an archive point after a certain number of female protagonists appear, which means that the next simulation will start at this place. In this way, the writing pressure will be less. Come on, the author is great [laughter] I can't say it's a high-quality product, but it's pretty good among brainless cool articles.

It's nice. There are a lot of people in the comment area who don't know why and they just comment and rate it as if they can't see the tag. I came from Yuan Table and it's pretty good now. I recommend it.