Naruto: I Wanted to Lie Down but Was Accepted as a Disciple by Hashirama

Now that you have five stars, who is the heroine? [Sinister smile]

You can also let Hashirama practice to the sixth level [eat melon]

It's very good. There are no poisonous points or particularly embarrassing plots so far. Good luck to the author [blowing kiss]

It's a good content. I have the urge to continue reading, so I've only read Chapter 30. I'm going to gain some weight first, and the updates are a bit slow [laughs awkwardly]

Without any random writing, it has surpassed many fan novels, and the plot is not that special. In summary, I quite like [Chigua]

Some people always say that if they want to write about cultivating immortals, then write about cultivating immortals, and if they want to write about anime, then write about anime. I don't even understand what you are doing. He already said that his ancestor came from another immortal cultivation interface.

Come on, it's great. I hope the heroine is Zhili [smile][smile][smile][smile] It's from Chery

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It's pretty good, but the number of words in each chapter is very small. The beginning of each chapter is copied from the end of the previous chapter to barely make up 2,000 words. At first, I copied a sentence, but now it's a page. The font size I used is 17

Personally, I think this version of Naruto is quite good, the plot is smooth and the logical sentences of the article are also very smooth. And the starting point of the story is also very good.

This book is not bad, it shouldn't be rated at 6 points or so. I feel it can reach almost 8 points, and at the most it can reach 7.5/6. It should be a book with a relatively low rating just after I wrote it.

There is nothing particularly poisonous, so you can eat it with confidence.

The plot is very good A lot of ignition points Excellent work of fan fiction

Your book is the first one I've heard in the past few years that includes a review of the past. Why didn't Tomato skip it? The opening and ending scenes are so uncomfortable😩😩😩

Byd, I was force-fed after chapter 280💩

The plot is great, it's considered top-notch among Naruto fans.

It's okay, although I watched Madara and Hashira before I finished it. I haven't watched it since I finished it. I feel like it's not going to happen until Hashirama is dead. Konoha is already invincible. Hashirama is developing. Konoha is developing. There are no other Shikokus. What's going on? Just wait for Ōtsutsuki to jump out. It seems like it's just daily life and there's nothing stupid to write about.

At the very least, five stars is appropriate for now.

It's very well written. I hope it can be maintained in the future. I'll give you a five-star review to support you.

I think it looks great, but is there no way to reduce the chaos value? I really hope that the protagonist and heroine can live for a long, long time, like the big Jianmu clan.

It's okay, not too poisonous and not too creative, just average. I hope you can see more creativity later. After all, the ancestor who was a great cultivator of immortality and the protagonist are no longer cultivating immortality, so there should be happiness, right? Wouldn't it be better to develop technology and become capitalist? Or red ideas set off a fire in another world! After all, I didn't feel happy when I saw the update, whether it's the protagonist or me as a reader.

The writing is quite good, much better than some ratings which are not good at all.

Okay, you have the idea for me to pursue it.

It's okay, I still think it's normal so far. Come on [code hold][code hold][code hold][code hold][code hold]

It's not bad, but the part about the Kingdom of Whirlpool is very confusing. There are a lot of typos. Yahiko Minami is fifty or sixty years old, and Senju Tobirama is five or six years old [facepalm]

It's good, but it's weird, the protagonist is always said to be Shikano The author of this 78 should be changed. I almost made a clone [awkward laugh]

If you only read the book but don't listen, the content I recommend is quite good. But if you listen to the book, just listen to it repeatedly as long as you can tolerate it. There is too much sea behind, it's uncomfortable to repeat

How should I put it? The novel is written like a lake of calm water, without any waves at all. In fact, if the author wants to write such an article, he can refer to the novels published by Doudou. But in the final analysis, the writing is not bad. I hope to keep up the good work.

It looks good, I love reading it. I would like it even more if the author updates it quickly [smile][smile]

The writing is okay, the plot is smooth, and the system is normal. The original characters are not very outstanding, but there are no deviations. I will give it five stars first.