What?! I Got a Dating Sim System and Became Everyone’s Crush

Can the author make the article longer? Why do you want to write about your daily life? I feel like I'm in Water Characters. What I want to read is a novel.

I think the writing style of the article is very good, but there is not much content in one page. There is also a lot about the author's trivial life. Sometimes I can't figure out whether it is an article or DaDa's life. If you want to say something, you can post it in a comment after it is published. If it is your own preference, just treat it like I didn't say it. I just feel that it doesn't look good. The character setting is quite interesting💕💕💕 I hope you can change it. If not, we can get together and get together. (Don't criticize me, glass heart, you are responsible for committing suicide. Greetings to my family and I will scold you to death 🙂 )

I like the subject matter of this book, but there are more than 70 chapters, and I really can't see much of the content. Looking at it on my mobile phone, I can only read about five or six pages of a chapter, and about one page is a retelling of the above. I thought there was something wrong with my mobile phone, but it's really like this Yes, there is also a side about daily life. Overall, the main text is only about half, which is not much. It feels like there is not much content to be seen in this way, and the progress is also very slow. So far, I have only met three male protagonists, and the highest one is only more than ten points in favor, and the female protagonist has not started a career. I really want to ask the author, what is the theme of this article? Is it to pick up beautiful men, slap in the face, or eat delicious food? I really don't understand. It's been a long time since I've seen a subject I like. I'm a little disappointed, but I still hope the author will work harder [Hold]

I especially like that the author directly said at the beginning that it is about the Four Loves and also popularized the definition of the Four Loves. But after reading some of the article, I felt that the characterization was a bit bland and the plot felt a bit streamlined. The first is the heroine. She gives me a very separate feeling. She is cold, loves to eat, and a little lustful. The combination of these characteristics is a bit strange, especially the coldness and lustfulness. Would a generally polite and cold girl directly take advantage of an android? At first, the heroine made me feel like a cold girl who only completed the task to make money. Later, the plot of taking advantage of the androids made her character collapse a bit. Next comes the male protagonist. He feels like a paper character, and his character design is even more unsustainable. He is too thin, has no impression at all, and lacks rich character traits and details. In terms of plot, I also feel that the author is writing as he pleases. Not only is one chapter short, but the main text also describes many irrelevant details, which is completely useless to the plot and character creation. The whole text feels bland, and I can't find any outliers. Of course, it doesn't mean it's very good-looking. I really like Si Ai Wen NP, and I really hope that the author can conceive and write it carefully!

Sister, are you writing a novel or a diary?

The author's book is very good and the subject matter is novel. I didn't give full marks because the main text is too short. The author can share his life, but we readers are here to read the novel. The author can share it in the paragraphs and comments. I don't know if it is my problem or the author's problem. Every time I read the back There will be repeated plots at the beginning of each chapter. It is really tiring to read like this, and I feel like giving up the article. However, novels with this theme are rare and well written by the author. I still hope that the author can make some changes so that more people may like it (personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it)

It's really super pretty!

The author shouldn't write so much about daily life. At least half of the words in one chapter are daily life. It's easy to get into trouble and lose the sense of reading.

This book is quite good, but the description of some things is a bit slow and lengthy. It is OK to add details about the events, but it is a bit boring if each one is extremely detailed. Keep up the good work, author [Blow kiss]

Um... I can only say that I probably like the content of the article, but the logic is not clear, the author is not good at writing, and only about half of the content in one chapter is really readable. The rest is either nonsense or repetition by the author.