Shock! with the Otome System, I Became a Heartthrob

I like the subject matter of this book, but there are more than 70 chapters, and I really can't see much of the content. Looking at it on my mobile phone, I can only read about five or six pages of a chapter, and about one page is a retelling of the above. I thought there was something wrong with my mobile phone, but it's really like this Yes, there is also a side about daily life. Overall, the main text is only about half, which is not much. It feels like there is not much content to be seen in this way, and the progress is also very slow. So far, I have only met three male protagonists, and the highest one is only more than ten points in favor, and the female protagonist has not started a career. I really want to ask the author, what is the theme of this article? Is it to pick up beautiful men, slap in the face, or eat delicious food? I really don't understand. It's been a long time since I've seen a subject I like. I'm a little disappointed, but I still hope the author will work harder [Hold]

I especially like that the author directly said at the beginning that it is about the Four Loves and also popularized the definition of the Four Loves. But after reading some of the article, I felt that the characterization was a bit bland and the plot felt a bit streamlined. The first is the heroine. She gives me a very separate feeling. She is cold, loves to eat, and a little lustful. The combination of these characteristics is a bit strange, especially the coldness and lustfulness. Would a generally polite and cold girl directly take advantage of an android? At first, the heroine made me feel like a cold girl who only completed the task to make money. Later, the plot of taking advantage of the androids made her character collapse a bit. Next comes the male protagonist. He feels like a paper character, and his character design is even more unsustainable. He is too thin, has no impression at all, and lacks rich character traits and details. In terms of plot, I also feel that the author is writing as he pleases. Not only is one chapter short, but the main text also describes many irrelevant details, which is completely useless to the plot and character creation. The whole text feels bland, and I can't find any outliers. Of course, it doesn't mean it's very good-looking. I really like Si Ai Wen NP, and I really hope that the author can conceive and write it carefully!

The author's book is very good and the subject matter is novel. I didn't give full marks because the main text is too short. The author can share his life, but we readers are here to read the novel. The author can share it in the paragraphs and comments. I don't know if it is my problem or the author's problem. Every time I read the back There will be repeated plots at the beginning of each chapter. It is really tiring to read like this, and I feel like giving up the article. However, novels with this theme are rare and well written by the author. I still hope that the author can make some changes so that more people may like it (personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it)

It's really super pretty!

This book is quite good, but the description of some things is a bit slow and lengthy. It is OK to add details about the events, but it is a bit boring if each one is extremely detailed. Keep up the good work, author [Blow kiss]

Existence is perfection itself! In the crowd, I spotted you at a glance. I dare not say that you are the most beautiful among them, but I dare say that you are the most outstanding among them. Author Mumada

If it's a good book to read, just close your eyes and start reading. If it's a book to listen to, just run quickly. The author at the end of each chapter will write a lot of things that have nothing to do with the book. Not one chapter, but every chapter I heard. I was in so much pain that I couldn't really listen to it. Every time I heard the scene in the middle of the night, some words written by the author that had nothing to do with the book would pop up. There were so few words in each chapter. It was ridiculous. But the book is still okay. The book is very good. Let me find time to read it [I'm about to cry]

I just read almost 30 chapters, and I think the author is a person who likes to share, very cheerful, and likes [flying kisses] [flying kisses] [flying kisses] [flying kisses] [flying kisses] [flying kisses]

The writing is a bit immature and there are some illogical aspects, but it's still good.

The author is great, the article is very good, but the content is too little [blowing kiss][blowing kiss], and another thing is that the group is full of people, I can't get in [almost crying][almost crying]

It's okay, but I prefer the author's chatter. It's very personal. The characters are full and three-dimensional. I feel that the heroine has many identities. You can guess. I hope the author will keep up the good work and not stop updating [laughs]

The author is really cuteớ ₃ờ[Sending Hearts] The content is very good except for a little bit of water. I like the author very much[Sending Hearts]

It's really beautiful, cheers✊

Let's just say that some of the details are not very clear, but it looks really good.

Come on, it's great

Is she with Xiao Yan?

Awesome! The author's wife is really cute

This book is okay, but there could be more content in each chapter and less confession at the end of each chapter.

I like it very much

It's very interesting, I hope the author can continue writing.