
My System Disappeared at the Start
开局我的系统消失了
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- Completed
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- 176k Words
- Genre
- Unknown
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- Unknown
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
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There is really no need to watch Naruto: There is no need to join the village. When the protagonist stays in world x, for 50 years, in these 50 years, if you travel across the world, you will be invincible, okay? You are just delaying the progress. There are female protagonists and so on. Even artificial intelligence has been divided into genders by you and later they are all together. Other worlds are so short and Naruto world is so long. What is there to write about in Naruto world? There is no strong ability. If you don't know how to write, don't write. Go home and farm, oh. , I remembered, you don't even have any land, be your gnalao clan, don't be a gnalao clan, go back and write your novel, write it well, otherwise you will be a eunuch sooner or later, anyway, I can't stand it anymore, go out and directly attack the world, if it were me in 50 years, in these 50 years, I would be invincible, useless protagonist
There is no need to join a village in Naruto World, just be free as you like
The paragraphs are too closely divided, and the psychological description and dialogue suggestions are separated. If not separated, just add brackets. My head hurts so much. It seems that not only high-IQ novels can burn the brain, but short-form novels can also burn the brain. After reading it for a while, I feel like my brain is going to explode or burn out. Your novel is just like one written by a child in kindergarten. It is full of self-excitement and illogicality. The reader feels bored and has a headache.
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