An Ordinary Female Swordsman, the First Person to Ascend to the Immortal World

It's beautiful. I like this kind of story about Feng Aotian's genius cultivating immortality. I hope the heroine is more beautiful and the male counterpart likes the heroine. Hehe

Not bad [laughing evilly][laughing evilly] It would be better if she looked more beautiful. The heroine is quite strong and she is also very kind.

Friends, this is really good-looking. Although it is a cool article, I think it is quite detailed. I also like the character of the protagonist. She is the kind of girl who is very bold and majestic but also very delicate. It is really worth a try! Don't miss out on treasures because of low scores!

No way? No way? Not many people read such a beautiful book! ! [What] This book really poked me. The heroine is dedicated to the Tao and strives to be the first person to ascend. [Shy] Put aside all the romance and love. Baozi who likes strong women must read it! !

Lan Zhezhi sticks to his original intention and vows to become the first person in the immortal world. Bai Yuzhu and Shen Hanye finally let go of their obsession and took a path that suits them. The relationship between the sects is also very delicately portrayed, and there are no brainless villains. At first, I thought that Zhan Qing would fall in love with the heroine after being rescued by her, but no, he has always been a very sober person. Although his methods are somewhat unrighteous, it is undeniable that he has been moving towards the goal in his heart. I personally think that there are many difficult points in this book, but these difficulties are not a better arrangement for them. Chang Feiyuan's fruitless pursuit for many years, Xu Mu's genius' pride was shattered, Bai Yuzhu's low self-esteem in the face of his sweetheart, Shen Hanye's defection, Lin Fang's pain of losing his son, Long Xi's fall, Zhan Qing endured humiliation and heavy burdens for many years but fell short in the end, Xie Jun sacrificed for the common people, etc. A series of regrets not only constitute this book, but also make this book possible.

I think this is quite good. It's a really cool article. I've been playing Yi Dimensions for a long time recently and I haven't even reached the golden elixir. Watching this finally eased my mood. The heroine's name is not a waste, this time it's real, more of a funny type. Anyway, I quite like watching it.

The heroine's character is very resolute, and the fighting plot in the article is more to my liking. Originally, I saw that it was a sign-in post and I was going to withdraw it, but seeing that the heroine became a master of physical training and later practiced physical training techniques, although there is a sign-in system, it should be regarded as a supplement to the heroine! Most of the heroines' strength is improved step by step through their own efforts. I really like this kind of protagonist who relies on his own efforts to improve himself, especially the one who practices physical training. However, the only flaw is that although the heroine only has two particularly obvious peach blossoms, and they were resolved in the end, there are always moments of jealousy and a little doubt [something]. I am single, and I really can't understand that before the relationship between the two parties is confirmed, it is normal to treat the other party as one's private property and to be blindly jealous. (I found that many novels are like this [face covering]) Except for the slightly emotional scenes, I don't like it here, but fortunately, they like it one-sidedly, and they haven't done anything extreme. Everything else is quite good, especially the protective master and the protective brothers. The master-disciple relationship and the friendship of the same name are very well written. Personally, I still prefer this kind of family-like relationship.

The heroine is dedicated to the Tao, hardworking and strong, and the girls endure hardships during physical training. Even if you have a plot prophet, don't seize other people's opportunities, and don't hide your selfish views. The sign-in system is very cool. The heroine is a rich woman and she works very hard. Unlike some sign-in systems where you sign in directly to increase your cultivation level. [Pout] Most of the sects are righteous people, and all the elders are kind and righteous. In the early stage, I felt that the character of the original heroine was a bit annoying and she was purely in love. Fortunately, the scenes were reduced later and she became more comfortable [laughing][laughing]

Very nice! Big cheers for the author!

Well, for me, this book has hit my mark. The heroine is dedicated to her career, cultivation, and being a strong woman. However, I still prefer to read the kind of novels where the heroine has CP. If you are like me, you may not consider reading this book. However, if you like to read strong women without CP, you can read this book. Moreover, the system in it is sign-in. If you sign in, the early and late things will still feel rather tasteless and bland. If you like to read this kind of steady and steady development, you can also buy this book.

The characters are very realistic and I really enjoyed reading them. I hope the author will continue to write more.

It's quite nice and cozy. The only reason why it couldn't get a score of 9 or above is that some of it is too bland. In the early stage, the heroine always makes her own decisions, the one with Bai Yuzhu. I feel that the heroine can say something like "flying up together", "goodbye", etc., Directly clearing up emotions and so on, for his own good, but not in the name of self-impression. How can I say that sentence? You are not a fish, and you know the joy of fish, but overall it is quite good and quite warm.

Personally, I feel that the heroine's gold finger is too big, hahaha, everyone is attracted to their own eyes. I may prefer the kind of person who is steady and self-reliant and decisive in killing. It is best to have a beautiful and strong male protagonist who I like wholeheartedly. Hahahahahahahahahaha, author, thank you for your hard work! !

It's super pretty, but it would be nice if the heroine had a little more peach blossoms (Shen Zhu)

I hope there is CP, I haven't seen much yet. The best is Polygonatum odorifera

I feel okay, there is no CP, but some people like the heroine, and in the end the heroine gave them a drug that makes them forget about love. It is said to be a cool story, and it is indeed a cool story, but the heroine hid her cultivation level, and was discovered later when she was fighting demons. It is systematic, but overall it is quite cool, I think it is good

Very nice to watch, no unnecessary plot. It's not like those heroines who go in and kill the male and female protagonists in the original book, but they can't be killed and the heroines are disgusted all the time. It seemed that I was really convinced and wanted to get in and slap him. This is different, who cares about them? Give me all the rolls, and the branches will stand out [love] Note: I personally think it is very good-looking. I say this because I think it looks good, so I comment. I just want to give this book a five-star review, but I can't say enough because I talk a lot.

Alas, I originally came here for the non-cp, and I have been watching the non-cp, but the author has portrayed the character of the original male protagonist so much that I like it very much. He will also be amazed by beautiful women. It is human nature, everyone is a visual animal, but he is single-minded and has only one person in his heart. Moreover, he has an excellent appearance and strong strength. , In fact, there are many small details that are also written very well. Although I feel that I have never liked reading love lines, and I think many novels are better without CP certification, but I felt very sad and regretful when I saw the original male majoring in Wuqingdao in this book. Love is not necessary, and life will go on without love, but Shen Hanye, I hope someone can truly love you and understand you, truly be together, and stay with you forever.

It looks good. I thought it would have at least 1,000 chapters, but I feel that the content is still very exciting. I have a small regret that I didn't choose any of the heroines who originally had several choices, but I think I won't be lonely if I have colleagues.

This is the second novel in which the original heroine has a three-dimensional view. It is not easy. Moreover, the series of stories that Yilan Qi unfolds for the heroine are all logically coherent and light and heavy. There are some highlights and some emphasis on description. Overall, it is very good.

It's really good to watch. The heroine has always focused on herself and the people she cares about, and nothing else. She escalates all the way. I really recommend reading this if you like novels where the heroine slowly becomes stronger alone.

Everyone is good, the original heroine is kind and the original hero is tough. The heroine is bound to the Long Aotian system, but she hides her cultivation and does not stand out. There are quite few female characters. In the entire sect, only the original female master, Saint Maiden, is a female character, but there is no description. The play between children is written as a vague love, and the original heroine has become a tool to set off the heroine's heartthrob.

Come on, author, there is still a heart left❤️ for fear of your pride. Next time I will definitely [smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile].

This book is very suitable for my taste. I really like the character of the heroine who is not emotional and is devoted to the Tao. She is very domineering with a heavy sword and heavy hammer [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss]. She will not steal the opportunity of the original male and female protagonist. She has a good relationship with the original male and female protagonist. The plot is not too slow. It would be better if the author did more. [Shy][shy]

I really like the character of the heroine, and the development of the heroine is also in line with my taste. And she doesn't like people liking her, so she avoids a lot of romance and stuff, which is nice. I've been short of books lately, and I prefer reading books like this that are plain and written with smooth and delicate writing. Big cheers for the author! Not enough articles.

My personal feeling is that I hope that the author will not arrange too many male supporting characters to like the female protagonist (the kind of love between men and women). It is known that Bai Yuzhu likes the female protagonist, and the original male protagonist also likes the female protagonist in the introduction. Now I feel that Chang Feiyuan also has a little bit of signs, and I don't expect so many people to love the female protagonist. I think Chang Feiyuan can be arranged to be a good brother. Also, the original female protagonist likes the original male protagonist. I hope there will be no such thing as designing a female protagonist for love in the future. Of course, everything depends on the author.

It's a good-looking book, with micro-group portraits. Everyone has their own personality, and the heroine is also very hard-working. At the beginning, I originally wanted to watch a fast-paced book about cultivating immortals, but this one is a bit slow. It's really good-looking and there is no male protagonist. This is not a book about girls and boys, everyone is nice, the whole book is very elegant, and the details are described very well. You must read it. The heroine is devoted to cultivating immortality, and some people like her, but they are all relieved. I have read too much in a fast pace, and this book has a different adjustment.

The different articles on cultivating immortals are very interesting. There won't be those that always want to harm the heroine. It's just that there are too few articles and it's not enough to satisfy the reader.

Woohoo, it's hard to deny my good intentions. I really like Shen Yubai. Why can't the author write an emotional line? Even if it's a side story, it's okay. I really cried to death. Overall, it's okay. It just feels like the post-production was rushed, and there's also Sect Master Xie. Really, I can't reconcile them.

It looks good, but it's a bit rushed! [Blowing kiss][love]