School Belle, You Don't Want Your Sister to Turn into a Zombie, Right?

Maybe it's because I'm old and my thinking can't keep up with young people. People in my childhood are not normal, the protagonist is not normal, the system is not normal, and I can't understand what's being said. Also, when the awakened person wakes up, the B-level stuff looks awesome, but it's useless. Such rubbish

Zombie crystal core (prompted in Chapter 7) I didn't know about the crystal core until Chapter 30. In Chapter 30, I killed the intelligent zombies (the heads were knocked off) without adding attributes (without asking the system). All the zombies killed before were added. Then I found out after killing other zombies. The zombies I killed before were not dead, so I went back to look for them. Then which zombie had disappeared long ago.

The author is an old man. Feng Bujue whipped his leg because it was so beautiful. It can also be seen that the author is trying hard to control the protagonist's fighting power from collapsing. But it is obvious that the author is not talented in writing plots. In addition to being aware of the overall situation and controlling data, the author does not have the ability to outline and organize. But he is really very loyal, and he shudders when he talks about it. If the censorship had not severely limited the author's performance, this would have been an extremely outstanding work in terms of art. So putting aside the details of the plot and combat power, it's boring. I also have to rate it 4 stars and say: thank you brother. Of course it would be even better if there was a proper and exciting plot later on! Come on author!

Is this how Chapter 48 is written? ? ? The mutants have been written so realistically in the previous dozens of chapters that they cannot be killed. Now nm uses a gun to kill monsters in this chapter? How about playing? The knife that cuts iron like clay. . . . Inexplicable [what][what][what][what]

It's pretty good, and everything else is fine, but the combat power thing is a bit weak, and it's difficult to write later. How many chapters will it take to finish? Or are you talking about expanding into Ocean China or something like that later? Otherwise I won't be able to write this.

For the harem story, I recommend it directly without ink, but the combat power collapses a bit quickly. There are B-level monsters at the beginning. Your realm started from E. If you have B-level monsters so quickly, wouldn't it mean that S-level monsters are everywhere in the future? To be honest, it's a bit outrageous

That zombie in more than 10 chapters, is this adding drama? You have to make that person become your follower. In fact, you should have been like this when you first wrote about her, but it is not good to write it now. Author, you have to write it so that we understand it, and you also have to write it clearly. The author doesn't want to collapse the writing, right?

Trash protagonist, everything else is fine

Can you please not forcefully add drama? Some people may find it interesting, but more people will find it boring.

To sum up, the protagonist is more or less sick.

The plot is so outrageous. None of the protagonists seem like normal people.

The protagonist is very self-righteous and cautious at the same time, which makes people very disgusted and can't stand it.

There are always foreshadowings, the protagonist is the same as nt

Obviously they are all our own people, but they are still useful (no matter what aspect) if something goes wrong, they will either give up or kill them (where do you think you are so brainless and not a holy mother) [eat melon] [eat melon]

It's really good, but there are flaws

A bit rubbish. . .

6666666 Is awesome

Have you forgotten your own settings?

I don't know how to describe the male protagonist

Very good, very good, not brainless

Well written, keep up the good work

Cheche, I love Cheche