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First, first, very beautiful

I really like this kind of protagonist, the nightmare is so pampering, right? [Laughing]

The protagonist is quite decisive so far and has great telepathy. I look forward to the protagonist being able to develop multiple uses of his abilities~! The two white repair dogs are also very cute! Kamisan! Treasure! I discovered it. I can't just keep it to myself. I'm going to promote the book separately. Yo yo yo! Your photos are so detailed~! What could be said in one sentence, he took half a chapter and turned it into more than a dozen sentences. I was really convinced. [Laughing awkwardly]

It can be seen from the previous article that the author has tried very hard to imagine what the experimental subjects who were locked up in the experiment would look like, but there are still many places that feel very abrupt. The most direct one is how do people who have been living here know what pua is, can recognize pua, can find themselves being pua, and can learn to pua others. You must know that even if people in reality are pua, they may not be able to detect it. But it will be better later, because it will come out later, and it will not be awkward anymore if you know more.

Wow, I feel so bad for baby Feng Lin. I feel so bad when I see the description of the baby being covered in pinholes, being given electric shocks, and being deprived of food! The emergence of nightmares is not a kind of rescue. Even if you step into a more dangerous place and your life is threatened all the time, it is still better than the past 15 years. The feeling of being controlled and played with at will is really annoying! Looking forward to the following story. [Please give me more updates]

The whole process is straightforward, with no main line and no purpose, and it feels like drifting with the flow, but this feeling is also quite good. The protagonist feels like a child but not a child (even though he is a child himself). The emotions are still very rich, and as long as there are not too many relationship lines (just various weakly bonded people, so that the protagonist has weaknesses), there will be no poisonous points. You can read it, but it doesn't have much features. (There is a shortage of books. I prefer reading group favorites! Heartthrobs! Sickly beauties! And so on, so the problem is with me.) Perhaps the most important thing is that I was recommended the book. Someone recommended it as Sickly Beauty, so I came to read it. Good. I know, but I should be fattening up.

First of all, I have to acknowledge the author's efforts. I like the character of the protagonist, the people around the protagonist, and the interactions between them. However, the interaction between the characters is not as much as expected. The plot is quite satisfactory and there is no particularly big turning point. Overall, it is a slow flow. The turning point that left the deepest impression is actually when the protagonist leaves the laboratory. I personally think that the subsequent plot is a bit more daily life. I am not saying that it is bad. I also like the slow pace, but I always feel that something is missing. I can't put it in words. In terms of dungeons, I personally prefer multi-player dungeons, but I feel that the characters and plots in the village dungeon are not as well portrayed as in the first dungeon. Instead, I feel that the emotions of the characters in the single-player dungeon are handled more delicately. For example, in the single-player dungeon of the doll, I really like the author's description of the doll and the interaction between the two, but the overall plot arrangement of the dungeon did not impress me. Personally, I think the author is still very talented in characterization, but his control of the overall plot needs to be improved. You can try setting up the plot with a climax event as a unit, and then proceed to complete the plot, and sequence it through the combination of unit events (I am a novice). Of course, the above are all personal opinions, mainly based on the author's thoughts. After all, I don't know what the outline is like hahaha [laughing] Finally, I still hope that the author can keep writing and turn this imperfect story into what you expect. In fact, the author does not need to think too complicated, and don't worry that not many people will read it. Although I don't know if many people will read this book when it is finished, but if it is abandoned, no one will read it. Come on, come on [air kiss] [air kiss] This is my first time writing a long review. I hope the author can also see the sincerity of the readers. I also have a selfish intention, I don't want this book to end so soon. In my opinion, the growth of the protagonist has just begun [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart]

It's so beautiful, it touches my heart. The main character is Bai Mao, ahhh! ! It's too good for a white-haired control [lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen ][Screen licking][Screen licking] Feng Lin... Feng Lin... Hee hee[Screen licking][Screen licking][Screen licking][Screen licking][Screen licking] Wife... Wife...(Makes an unknown weird laugh) [Screen licking][Screen licking][Screen licking][Screen licking]

Very good-looking, white-haired little boy or something, he really pokes at me, hehehe [Adoration]

I see that there are no surprises or flaws so far. At most, it's a bit strange that the "voice sounds numb to the ears" when two men are talking [face covering], it's quite interesting.

Good-looking, white-haired control ecstasy. I just want to know if the protagonist has cp. If I don't have it, I'll just mess around [laughing]

I don't know why there are so few people

Don't look at the data! ! ! Read novels! ! There is no shortage of books at the moment, but it is number one on my bookshelf!

I saw the author said that it is not very popular, so I came over and gave it a five-star rating first.

Dear author, let's work hard. Every time I look at the top, it's gone. I've cut off a good end and lost a good appetite (-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩ ̩-̩̩̩___-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩)(づ-̩̩̩-̩̩̩_-̩̩̩-̩̩̩)づ

This book really touched my heart [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

There are just no big surprises. Everyone has good and evil. It's quite interesting. I recommend it [like]

This book is a good book! Key point: no cp. (Who knows how difficult it is for me to find novels without cp!) I really like the setting of Zaizai! Zaizai is strong, but sometimes dull, a little idiot who lives his life properly. Zaizai's puppet is broken, can it be fixed? Woo hoo, my Zai Zai, so pitiful

Why is the rating so low? I feel good looking

Come on update! It seems to suit my taste. Why is Feng Lin taller than me? The content has become a bit dull, but it's still worth watching.

I like it, I like it so much!

It's pretty good. The basic setting is the usual dungeon type. The completion of tasks is the criterion for passing the level. The dungeon is not long and does not burn your brain. You can read the rest by yourself.

It looks good, the plot is coherent, there are no pitfalls, no thunder, it is very comfortable, please keep it up!

Very good looking, looking forward to having two male protagonists

Nice! But I originally thought it was the kind of beauty, strength and misery, but according to the development of this plot, my poor and helpless Feng Lin will have to say goodbye, www

Looks good, take a spot, call me if it gets popular

[Like] Great cheers for the author

Five-star praise, extremely beautiful

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