After the day of change, Blue Star mysteriously revived.
What is recorded in books becomes reality.
Martial artist, superpower, sequencer, pilgrim.
Each country began to burst out its own extraordinary power.
Xiang Jincheng, a retired old man.
The second flame of life is about to begin in the unknown dreamland.
Today is not only a matter of superiority and inferiority, but also a matter of life and death.
He said so.
On the opposite side were extraordinary people from all over the world who were escaping in panic.
They only have one idea at this time.
That means this old man is a bit strong!
Reader comments
Wc, I almost missed it, it's very good, I'm not asking for help, I'm asking for help. It's an absolutely good book, wonderful.
Normal input potential does not poke
There is a sense of chivalry and freedom in a martial arts novel that I first read back then.
Author, after reading your book, I looked for other similar books and found one that was pretty good. I'm not a fool to call you daddy. The author is Mudu Hongchen, you can take a look, maybe it will be helpful to your writing.
Come on, author, it seems pretty good so far. There aren't too many bad points. You can also write about some things about him and his family. You don't have to practice martial arts and fight all the time. Otherwise, you won't be able to write for a long time [smile][smile][smile]
Old blood is good!
It's okay. The author was too hasty to write, and the outline had to go back and forth. The first two chapters were okay, but then Whitebeard became a bit weird and lacked maturity and scheming. It's not like an old man thinking like a young man in every aspect. This is not like someone who has lived for decades. The subject matter is very new. It's okay for a new book. I can restart it in the future.
Personally, I feel pretty good. Why are there so few people?
Wc, I almost missed it, it's very good, I'm not asking for help, I'm asking for help. It's an absolutely good book, wonderful.
Normal input potential does not poke
There is a sense of chivalry and freedom in a martial arts novel that I first read back then. Author, after reading your book, I looked for other similar books and found one that was pretty good. I'm not a fool to call you daddy. The author is Mudu Hongchen, you can take a look, maybe it will be helpful to your writing.
Come on, author, it seems pretty good so far. There aren't too many bad points. You can also write about some things about him and his family. You don't have to practice martial arts and fight all the time. Otherwise, you won't be able to write for a long time [smile][smile][smile]
Old blood is good!
It's okay. The author was too hasty to write, and the outline had to go back and forth. The first two chapters were okay, but then Whitebeard became a bit weird and lacked maturity and scheming. It's not like an old man thinking like a young man in every aspect. This is not like someone who has lived for decades. The subject matter is very new. It's okay for a new book. I can restart it in the future.
Personally, I feel pretty good. Why are there so few people?
A good book is definitely a good book, believe me