Beast Control: My Companion Beast Is a Bird

The book is okay, but a bit cliche. It can be improved [Sending my heart][Sending my heart] For me, the previous plot is not very attractive, and the writing could be better. Then I felt that the cover was not very good-looking and not very attractive. When I read this book, I thought the title was quite attractive and the title was okay. I read the first few chapters and felt that the rhythm was a bit weird. Maybe the plot jumped a bit. It would be better if it was more detailed [Sending my heart][Sending my heart] I also feel that the character of the male protagonist is somewhat similar to that of other books. I think it would be good if the protagonist could have his own personality and be more fleshed-out. Everyone has a different story experience and life. It doesn't need to be too detailed, but it will also make readers remember it deeply after reading it. Finally, who is the heroine? Is it a single heroine? [What][what] Come on [Working on manuscript][Working on manuscript], I believe the author will write better, and this book will attract more readers in the future [Working on manuscript][Working on manuscript] ps: (Add five stars to the author, hoping to attract more people to read it, and hope the author's next book will be better)

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