One Day****

I read this book in the story book before, but I deleted it because of some things. But I still think about this book often. I really didn't expect the author to come to Tomato. Come on, the author is great [laugh][laugh][laugh]

The plot is very rich, but it feels confusing at first. I could add a forward. That is, Beibing Qianyue and Shi Shuangxuan gave me the feeling that they were a good couple at the beginning. I subconsciously felt that they would always be together, but later on, Shi Shuangxuan and Huangfu Xiuyu were together. Although the author stated the reasons, but if there are readers I substituted Beibing Qianyue (yes, it was me), especially in the later part when Shuangxuan and Huangfu Xiuyu showed off their affection in Beibing Qianyue. Maybe the author's writing style was too good, which made me have a strange feeling of being bullied. If the author really wanted to do this, he didn't write so much love in the beginning. The book is very interesting and the plot is very twisty. But there's no need to make too many changes. (Just a personal perspective)

I want to see Wu Lin meet Wu Tong! May I? Please

It's okay, you need to watch it continuously, otherwise it's easy to understand the content.

The plot and characters are pretty good, especially when I saw Yu Chen beating Tang San earlier. I laughed so hard, but it was still a little cute, and Yu Hao's image was different from the original one. This book is very nice! Anyway, it's right to look at it

Uh, do you guys know which chapter of Huo Yuhao's first mission as the God of Creation was completed?

Give five stars for the original text

Are there two male protagonists in the author's humanistic novel?

Hahahaha, I remember I started reading it from Kuaishou a few years ago, and then I read it from the storybook. Then I saw on Kuaishou that the author had deleted all the works, and I even saw Dou San. Then I changed my phone, and suddenly I remembered it and I looked it up and found this book [shy]

It's okay, it's just a bit messy. The author won't give up. When will it be updated? Please update it quickly. The author will give it a try.

The plot of the story is ups and downs, gripping and tear-jerking. I hope the author can continue to work hard! Update early

Huo Yuhao kissed Wang Dong so many times before, why couldn't Wang Dong kiss Huo Yuhao so many times later! ! ! Really good-looking, awesome, super recommended

How can I put it this way? If I hadn't read the previous book, I would have been confused at first. I didn't know how to read it either, but the plot didn't impress me.

I like what the author writes very much. I want to see the next plot. I wonder if the author will update it...

Okay, come on, come on

Very interesting and beautiful

This must be praised, okay, I have my favorite wife People who can't understand complain about it being ugly, while people who can understand just want to say it smells really good ~ I just want to say that everyone has their own unique methods and opinions. Anyway, I think the author's writing is very nice. Well, if you think it doesn't look good, you don't have to say that specifically. Well, it's not good. I feel like the only flaw in this book is why the author didn't finish it. Who knows how uncomfortable it would be to see it halfway through and suddenly get stuck! Author, I have been saving the manuscript for a year. It's time to let it go [laughing evilly]

The fight is so well written!

The whole book is quite nice.

I think it looks great, but can you tell me about the grading?

Good, elegant, too elegant.

It's very interesting, I couldn't stop watching it, and the writing is also very good. I just don't know why there are so few people. Big boost for the author!