The Cannon Fodder Female Supporting Role in the Book Wants to Become an Immortal

Seeing that the author is so persistent even though the ratings are not good, I will support the author regardless of whether it is good or not.

Is there a male protagonist? Who is it?

Why do you keep saying your name [crazy] [crazy] [crazy] [crazy] I want to see but I keep saying my name. I can't stand it anymore. The content is very rich. It's a novel I like to read. Hey.

There's too much nonsense, but it's really great to see that the author can keep writing. If it were me, I would have done it long ago [face covering], so I really appreciate the author's spirit. Come on, Saonian.

Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking

The writing is quite good, but there is one shortcoming (just a personal opinion). The characters have to say their names in one sentence, such as: Passerby 1 something passerby 1 something passerby 1 something The heroine... The heroine... The heroine... I'm sorry if this offended the author [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

Well, I want to ask that San Zhang Lao Mo, can you try to finish it in one sentence? There are a bit too many quotation marks, and Yu Sheng's quotation marks are also a bit too many? I doubt the author's word count is good, but it's very good and I like it. It's a pity that I don't have a gift, otherwise I would give it to you. Great support to the author.

The word count is also very full, and I hope the dialogue movements in the words can be improved. Although I can put it this way, it can be guaranteed, but after all, there is too much nonsense. I read one book, which is similar to this one. You have a little too much punctuation, and the other one has a lot of nonsense. Although I haven't written many books, there are too many double quotation marks. Some of the words spoken by the original author can be used without quotation marks. It would be better to add expressions and movements when others speak. I haven't read too many chapters, and I generally don't know what the author is like behind this? I didn't say anything, don't complain, I just gave you some slight suggestions. The author's writing is still very good [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss] It would be better if you include a few flirty words when writing. It's not driving, well, it's just like I can hold the sun, the moon, and the stars in my hand. There is no one like me in the world. This is something you can put in during a fight. I haven't read many chapters, so I can only comment on this. As for whether the author pressed it in later, I don't know. Anyway, the author's book gave me a lot of inspiration, so nonsense literature started. Important things have been mentioned three times. I am just commenting. If it is not good, don't blame the author. After all, I have been reading novels for six years, and sometimes my tone may not be very good. Also, my writing may be worse than this, so I am just commenting. The author can't stand it, so you don't have to read it. This is the most important thing. You can add something to the first one. His expression is that of a terrified person who is having a nightmare. He is dreaming of something bad. It should be sweating on his forehead or something. Add some movement, it should look better. I'm just an ignorant book friend. Although I say I shouldn't comment casually, don't blame the author, don't blame the author. I don't have any conspiracy or conspiracy, and I'm not a black man. I'm just a bit picky. Don't blame the author.

I think it's okay. I've read more than 40 chapters. There's a lot of nonsense but the plot seems pretty good so far.

How many people are like me who were persuaded to quit by names + colon quotation marks. The plot is still good. I endured it and gave up in the end. I will spend the rest of my life, the rest of my life, the rest of my life...

I wonder if there is a male protagonist? I wish I didn't have a male protagonist. I only saw more than 300 photos.

I have read two of the author's books, but I couldn't stand them after more than 600 chapters. It's not that they're not good, the novels are very interesting, and overall they're pretty good. I just feel like they have some shortcomings.

Anyway, the storyline is quite interesting, except for the dialogue inside. For example, when the heroine Yu Sheng talks to the mysterious man, the mysterious man speaks from behind, and the mysterious man speaks from behind. The book I was listening to was filled with mysterious people, mysterious people, mysterious people, Yu Sheng, Yu Sheng, and names of people. [Face covering] It may not be suitable for my kind of listening.

The writing is pretty good. Keep up the good work. It would be nice if you don't write too many repeated words and symbols, because it will make you feel dizzy.

Well written. Well enough.

I really want to see it, but I feel like I just heard the name.

I don't like the names that are always mentioned. The content is good, but the fox keeps calling

I will remember one sentence from the entire book! Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo [,

It's very beautiful. The author wrote it carefully. It's worth reading. Come on😊

Like this book very much

It's not that it doesn't look good, it's that the rest of my life is in my head, the rest of my life

As long as you take that step, you have already won~

Come on, don't abandon the article, I think it's okay. Although the writing level is strange, at least it's okay.

Good-looking, very good-looking.

The novel is well written

This book is super nice [like][like][like]

Well, overall I feel it's okay, the average score is a little lower.

Can the author make a real-life version?

I haven't poked it yet, but I still need to improve. For example, so and so said

Not bad