Traveled to the Battle and Became a New Elf

I feel that among the dating stories I have read, this one is the last one. It fits the character design and is particularly close to the original work. There is no objection to the protagonist's interludes. It's great. Please give it a boost, the author [please give me more updates] [like this post]

Compared to some fanfics in SF that have a strong romance atmosphere, it can be considered a breath of fresh air. Except for the too many daily parts and the word count, there are no big problems. The character creation is convenient, and the battle scenes are good. The overall sense is pretty good, and there are no poisonous points. As of the latest chapter, there has been no such thing as changing marriages or remarrying, and I hope there won't be any in the future. After that, I spent some time to finish the part I had just brushed off. The relationship between the protagonist and Shido can still be summarized as a "brotherhood". There are not many lily elements. It is a bit far-fetched to say that it is light. At present, it seems that the protagonist has the possibility of moving to a higher level (god) in the future. I look forward to what the author will write next. Yeah, it's not the same, it's good. Oh, by the way, I went to read the comments on the storybook. The author replied that there will be no emotional drama between the protagonist and Shido, so book friends can still read it with confidence [laughing]. Can the book friends who saw this comment help me upvote it [like it], I want more people to see it [send my heart]

It is a novel that Yue Zhanchu feels very familiar with. The stories added by the author outside the main line of the original novel will not appear too abrupt, but instead make the main story line clearer. The story of dating is very long, but fans of dating will always support and accompany you. I hope the author can persevere with quality and quantity. Come on [send heart][send heart][send heart]

The beginning of this book is super good, and the rest is also very good. I like it~

It's the best dating fanfic I've ever read.

It's been a few months since I finished it, so I'll give it five stars when I come back. I have read a lot of fandoms, and it can indeed be said to be the ceiling. Let's not talk about it. There are very few fanfictions that can be completed. This alone deserves a good review. The writing is average to above average, and most of the plot is relatively comfortable. Maybe some of the reasons for quitting were in the early stages. The protagonist's setting was too suppressed and suffered a lot. Then there is the Chinese chapter. To be honest, this long section is somewhat confusing. Although it is said to be a power show, it is a bit delayed and the viewing experience is not good. I am a latecomer and it was difficult to watch this section. It was so tortured to follow the update. . Yuri is pretty good. Finally, it's rare to see a complete emotional line in an online article. Sure enough, it's better to take it slow. . . However, I always feel that I am still a little tied to the original work, but fortunately, I still wrote a lot of my own things. Narcissus, okay, okay, Narcissus Kitchen is really going to explode on the spot. The bond between Red and Blue Muqing in this book is really great. They support each other, are of one mind, understand each other, and are completely tolerant and accepting. This book is really satisfying. (Arctic Circle residents are so unscrupulous) That's right, the pace of the later stages was really too fast. It's probably because the author had difficulty giving birth, so the completion was delayed for several months. But it is still a good work. I praise the author and contribute to the dating circle.

It's a very interesting book. In fact, I really want to read the plot with Shido. I want to see the feeling of being deflated that Shido can't get. The setting is okay, and the plot is not satisfactory. Generally speaking, if you like fighting, you can read it.

It can be said that it is the best-looking of all the battle fanfics I have ever read, bar none. I would like to give you a piece of advice, be sure to stick to the end. It is extremely easy to get lost in the early and middle stages of this novel, but when you keep reading and see that the back is full of knives and pitfalls, you will completely fall in love with it. In particular, it tells the story of Mu Qing's experience when she first came into this world in the first week. Everyone regarded herself as the enemy. The only one who understood her was the collapse when her best friend Kuang San died in front of her. The audience felt depressed and could not calm down for a long time. The only flaw is that there are too many watery plot points in the early and middle stages, especially the Chinese chapter, which does not affect the advancement of the plot at all and is unnecessary. It is recommended to skip the Chinese chapter directly. The climax of the entire novel will be around chapter 800. The prototype of the protagonist should be the collapsed Xi'er. Fans of Xi'er must not miss this novel. Chapter 800 is the peak of this novel. If you just look at the previous plot and then quit, it will be a big loss in life. By the way, the protagonist is two souls with the same memories sharing the same body. Bai Qing is a female spirit who has the memory of a boy, while Hei Qing is a male spirit who has traveled through time and has a female body. This novel is simply a ecstasy for Honkai players. Many settings and plots in it are borrowed from Honkai. Even the protagonist is created based on Seele. A loli and a sickle, and two opposite personalities, huh?

This is the most interesting novel among all the dating novels I have ever read. Judging from the plot, it should be Lily. I originally liked reading about changing marriages, but this is the only one I am interested in. A Lily, I think the author writes it very well.

It's a very good book about dating. Although it's not a masterpiece among the books I've read, it's still a very good read. According to the current trend, one is Qingyuri, Niya, and Miku. As for Kurumi and Wanyuri, it is not obvious. At present, the novel is estimated to be in the middle and late stages, and I look forward to the author's update. And I also like the protagonist template very much (Xierchu is ecstatic). Come on, this is a sickle paired with a lolita. It's awesome~_~

It's a good book, in line with my most basic principle of not sealing, but it would be nice if there were male elves, but if it can make up for the regrets, it should come as early as possible... The Seven Sins and Yoshino can be picked up one by one, but the regrets are not much, so I only added Origami and Miku. Well... The Seven Sins, Kurumi, and Yoshino can at least be read, but they still have full stars. And then in this book... I won't say anything about the two female protagonists, but why are there other things? God outside the world and tree in consciousness? I was a little confused after reading this, but I just wanted to complain. I have a disagreement, so I just want to complain. The reason I want to read is that the book I want to read is Unsealed, the male protagonist's harem, and there should be nothing other than the original world view. I can read the rest. As long as I satisfy one of them, I will come and taste it. It's a good book, full marks! [Think]

Overall, it is a very good book. There is no obvious conflict with the original work in terms of setting and plot design. The daily interactions in the early stage are particularly attractive. Unfortunately, the pace of the plot suddenly becomes faster in the middle and later stages. Almost all the characters who appear in the second half are just going through the motions. There are very few plots describing the interaction between the protagonist and him. As a whole, he is either fighting or on the way to fight. However, as a light novel, it is rare to be able to continue serializing it until it is completed. In this regard, it is completely worthy of recognition.

It's not satisfactory, but it's still what I like to read. Although I like to read about changing marriages, I also think it's pretty good for those who aren't, and it's one of the best among other dating fanfics.

Really nice. That's right, friends. After graduating from high school in 2027, I also want to write a dating fanfic. I hope everyone can still remember the fight at that time. If you can't get a date, I will accompany you until you grow old₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑

The logic is relatively complete, the details are well described, and the character designs are roughly restored to the original. It is a very nice battle fanfic~

There is no need to say that Tomato is the best dating partner. The most important thing is that this is not a remarriage.

Really often, very satisfied, suitable for beginners

Emmmm, it's a shocking feeling. Although the ending at the end is obviously a bit hasty, but as a person who can't watch BE, the ending is still very satisfying to me. Anyway, the whole book did not live up to my expectations. It is a good book worth reading for fans of Date of War (please be careful if you haven't read Date of Battle)

Good looking, a rare date with an excellent fan [sending my heart]

This is the best dating story I have ever read. He tells us a great story: their self-salvation in the face of the evil in the world.

This book is probably the best dating fanfic I have ever read. I highly recommend it.

It took me a long time to finish this book. The content is very good. It is considered to be of high quality among the dating fics. There are no major negative points. Small ones are inevitable but not major problems. The writing is also very good. It is very interesting. Thank you for your companionship.

The quite sweet post about world battles expands the world view (although it also increases the length of the process of "beating the young to become old"), the emotional journey is rich, and the combat power system is relatively casual, but this is not important. All in all, a pretty good piece of work.

This is a good quality battle fanfic, and it is also the best one I have read so far. It can be seen that the author cares about this book. Each character has their own personality, and the protagonist is well portrayed. It is a pity that the new elves added to this book have a little appearance. The main reason is that the later writing is too hasty, but overall, this book is still worth reading, provided that you are a fan of the original battle.

This is the first time I have found a novel about a date with more than a million words on Tomato. The author writes it well and I look forward to the follow-up exciting plot [Top post][Top post][Blow kiss]

Awesome fan date! This is a big regret of mine. Although some parts are slightly flawed, it is really great for a long fanfic with nearly a thousand chapters [Like][Like][Like][Like]

I give it a thumbs up, it looks great but there are a few typos and repetitions. The plot direction is very good and there is nothing to choose from. This is one of the few novels that I was able to finish reading all night long. The ending is very new and feels like a happy ending but different, except that there is no knife in the ending. It's a pity that the author only has this one here, otherwise I would like to read the author's other works.

Slow heat type. This is the first time I have experienced the charm of slow-burning genres so intuitively! Slow heating does not mean that it is not hot, it is very burning and very hot! The characters are fully developed, the plot design is reasonable, the settings in all aspects can withstand scrutiny, and the emotional drama is good. It's a pretty good text

No one has watched such a beautiful second creation [crying], the ending is really awesome like Shen Yong [like], I even finished watching the battle episode. You may not be used to the writing style of this light novel, but I give it full marks for the plot! Well... There should be some shortcomings in the plot, but I didn't notice it. For example, as mentioned in the previous long review, the plot of Seven Sins and Six Ghoul was less, and the plot of Origami's time travel was weakly connected to the previous story. This makes people feel a bit regretful, but it is still very interesting [Like] By the way, I suggest you read Zhang Ping's long review. It's very detailed and accurate.

It's worth watching, although I don't know why the rating is a bit low. But, it's really, really great!