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I think it is the best of all HP heroine novels. I've been looking for this kind of Sri Lankan religion that is full of abstinence! I think all the lines written by the author are very close to the original design. Moreover, the main framework is still based on the original work, without any magical changes. The most important thing is that this Sect is the Sect based on the original timeline. The Sect has a hard shell and has no magic modifications. The heroine and Potter gradually recognized their own feelings and then slowly came closer to the teacher's heart. Who knows, I am really in love, and I am full of abstinence! ! ! Moreover, it rigorously refers to many small easter eggs in the original work and popularizes many small details. And there are extras, there are extras! It's not an otome novel, nor is it a group favorite, but there are additional emotional lines of some popular characters in the extras, which have nothing to do with the emotional lines of the main plot.

It's really great. I've read countless HP fanfictions, and the logic and writing style of this one are among the best. The heroine didn't have the idea of ​​​​saving him just because he was the professor in the book. She gradually realized what kind of person the professor was through getting along with him, and decided to love him. At this point, it is far ahead of many fans.

It's super good-looking. It's a rare article in the HP genre, and it's a slow-burning one. The relationship between Ollie (the female protagonist) and Severus (the male protagonist) is smooth and smooth, without any rigidity. The author also wrote additional CPs, Fred, Sirius, Harry, and Draco. (Yi woman's birth) [Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post]

This is the first book of over a thousand that I have read in one sitting. Really, I really like it. Maybe at first you will think that little Ollie's character is not very good, a little cowardly, or that she would be a nanny for a trio. But this is a coming-of-age heroine. Darlings, take a look at these more than a thousand articles. It's really exciting, not only the main text, but also every extra episode is awesome, and the foreshadowing is there from the very beginning, everyone seems to have to keep underlining. The character design is not OOC and I would really cry to death. The author's language is very original. I like it. That's about it, I've just deleted some things that I couldn't help but spoil, hahahahaha Goodbye, little Ollie, I've finished reading. I'll come back to see you when I have time——

Given the intensity of the comments in the article, I'll keep it simple here. 1. There is a system, but it is a dispensable tool person. 2. It is very close to the original work. There will be no major changes to the main story line and OOC behavior. The protagonist is mainly a mastermind behind the scenes. 3. The emotional description is very restrained, with a mellow aftertaste like a pot of old wine, making people smile. 4. The writing is smooth and logical, and some changes can withstand scrutiny. 5. There are various types of CPs, and each type of CP has an independent chapter to satisfy some CP craving needs. There's always one for you.

I stayed up late and read the entire book, and I couldn't help but marvel at the author's great talent. This is undoubtedly the HP fanfic that satisfies me the most, the most regrettable and heart-wrenching Sijiao. The perfect ending here finally satisfies the indescribable regrets in my heart. And the most important thing is that the characters of the Sri Lankan religion have not collapsed. I have read a lot of fanfics of the Sri Lankan religion, and the OOC is quite serious, but the author really wrote it very well, especially the details of some plots and characters, and the emotions gradually warmed up, without any jumps or awkwardness. I think I may never find a better ending of the Sri Lankan religion than this. Thanks again to the author for his great intentions [love] [love] [love] which really fills the vacancy in my heart [cry] [cry] [cry]

The best fanfic I've ever seen. The heroine's character is also the best, and the others are not OOC. The writing style and writing style of the whole article are very comfortable, and it can be seen that the author is very rigorous, and some details are well-founded. One of the things I like most about this article is actually the character of the heroine. Although many comments suggest that she is a little indecisive or "too coaxable", I just feel that this way the heroine looks like a normal person. She is not the kind of protagonist in other novels who becomes lawless or changes things at will after having a cheat and a plot prophet. This kind of heroine is more alive. Moreover, the image of the heroine is also very full. She does not live for anyone or depends on anyone. She is very powerful without other people and systems. This is why I think this article can actually have so many extra chapters. Because the heroine is a living three-dimensional person, it is possible to pick her out and have stories with others without being inconsistent at all... It is particularly good. This article also made me fall in love with Professor 5555. Professor is so, so good.

After reading this book, when I read other stories with Snape as the male protagonist, I felt that the character design was not strong enough. Goldfinger is there but not big, the emotional line and plot are very reasonable, the psychological changes and development of the characters are also reasonable, and the writing is also very good. The author has used his own strength to cultivate my taste in reading [laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying]

It's really good to read, I read it in one sitting. This is the Snape I imagined, he doesn't need other people's pity and self-righteous salvation. It's just that the author didn't express the heroine's love for Snape to the point of deep love and reconciliation. It was more of a long-term relationship, and then the heroine expressed her attitude towards Snape. Overall, I like this book very much. It can be said to be HP's favorite book!

It's long and restored, so beautiful! (It's so long that it scares me. Beat the ground) In addition to the protagonist Snape, other male protagonists from parallel worlds are also written (all 1v1 non-buying stocks) It is recommended that after reading the main story (Snape), read the rebirth extra (Voldemort). I love it when it is completely sublimated! Recommended index 4.1🌟 "There are many" male protagonists, but what is the concept of 1v1! Not the group favorite competing with Mary Sue But... Do you think this is a super-long fan novel? In fact, I got one long fanfic + multiple short fanfics! ! Multiple happiness in Wuhu\^O^/

Five times... In my heart, none of Tomato's HP fanfics can compare to this one. There are no shortcomings, no OOC, and it is slow to warm up. In the end, it is not love at first sight and vigorous, but a solid relationship that has been refined little by little after many things. The description of the heroine's beautiful appearance is naturally not embarrassing. The process of Snape getting out of Lily's relationship and starting to fall in love with the heroine was very natural. Snape's relationship in the book fully meets my requirements for a relationship: a stable partner, enough security, and deep love. It is always sweet to savor it carefully after reading it, like the spring breeze blowing through the soul... Not reading this book will be the biggest regret in life. I have been reading novels for more than four years, and I have a very good taste. This book will make me read it five times. It is definitely a masterpiece. I listen to it to sleep at night [Sending my heart] I read it again, and after reading it more than a dozen times, I dare to say that there is no HP derivative that can compare to this one.

It's better to watch, but I feel that the heroine is too kind to Harry and thinks about everything for him to the point of humiliating herself. Except for developing a relationship with the professor, she has always been protecting other people.

To be honest, I really like the emotional lines and detailed descriptions of this book, and the plot is also good. The only dissatisfaction is that the heroine's character setting is not very good, just like Harry's mother, unconditional tolerance, forgiveness, and giving. . Several of the extras are quite interesting, especially Xiaolong's and Tom's at the end. It would also be great if a separate book could be published.

In the early stage, the heroine was too humble, always working as a nanny for the trio, but in the later period, she got better and better. The emotional line is really well written, and the flaw is the nanny. But good books are hard to find, and it's hard to find everything. Overall, it's good to read. Although I like the professor, I hate him because of Bai Yueguang. There are many books that I abandoned immediately when I saw that point. I couldn't stand it at all, but I still got to the end of this book. The other extras are very good.

This book is really good. It is the most character-oriented of all the stories I have read about Si Jiao. The only shortcoming is that the heroine's early character design seems not to be very well constructed, so many people will abandon the story in the early stage. However, as the plot develops, this point is gradually improved. Not only is Si Jiao's emotional line very good in this book, but also Harry and the female protagonist. The main sister-sister relationship is also very touching. Maybe you will be disappointed because of their distrust in the beginning, but Harry's monologue to the heroine later is really tearful, "In the dream, you are sitting across from me, and you are my sister" [almost crying], luckily in the end, Harry also learned to defend his sister, which is really beautiful [love] Demining: The heroine is more of a nanny, wiping her butt behind the trio [face covering]

Probably four to four point five stars The plot is indeed slow-burning, but I like to watch slow-burning movies. Love that lasts forever is true, bro. The heroine, she really had a rough time in the early stage. After all, she traveled to this world alone with no family, no food, no money, and no friends. I can understand her early-stage pleaser personality, but I really don't see her as someone who has lived two lives. Cheats are used for making money and emergency situations. They don't appear very often in the article. I think it's pretty good because I don't really like the kind of articles that write about cheats throughout the article. How do you describe the undercover plot in the later period? It feels normal and strange at the same time. If you ask me to tell you what's strange, I can't explain it.

After reading it, I can honestly say that the heroine's portrayal is not good at all. I still prefer the author's other Crescent-Eyed heroine design. I wonder if it's Otome? Anyway, it was very strange when I read it later, but I still read it a second time, hahahahahaha, because the author is really sophisticated, and it is much better than other privately written but poorly controlled articles [making a face] Also, this book by Deng Xiao is a bit OOC (in my opinion), but the author marked it OOC, so it's a minor matter. What I'm most afraid of is the kind of writing that relies on the original work but ends up collapsing. The most OOC thing is that I think Lao Deng is a person who can definitely be called a man of great love. He will sacrifice some things for the sake of the peace of the magic world, but he definitely does not deliberately use the lives of others to fill it. Moreover, Lao Deng has always believed that "love is the greatest magic", and towards "prophecy", he is a rational thinking but definitely not a completely convinced attitude. The principal who has always regarded students as his bottom line wanted to kill Draco in the original novel. I really can't imagine that he secretly gave the heroine the phoenix blood because he was afraid that the prophecy would come true, and that he wanted to fight back after working with the reborn Tom in the extra story. I think it is a very disappointing point. I think it's better to give Tom a drop of phoenix blood [note] The rest is OK, after all, it is really a long story, and the protagonist or the side story is unfolded from the side of Si Jiao (grey) and Riddle (black), so the setting of School Deng will indeed deviate from the original work. It all depends on personal interpretation. Anyway, when I watched it, I skipped it in a self-hypnotic manner [face covering]

Spoiler warning—————— It makes me willing to write something to record it after reading it. I think it has proved the status of this book on my bookshelf. Who would have known that I, a dream girl from Sri Lanka, would fall in love with Lao Fu later in this book. Closer to home, the style of the text is still good, the plot is basically smooth, and the writing is not bad. There are a few dramatic moments, but overall it's acceptable. Occasionally, one or two highlights that are highly consistent with the original work can even bring many surprises. Also, I like to watch the heroine being tortured in the Death Eater camp (Oh, sorry Ollie). How should I put it, it feels like being eaten alive by a knife. But I think there are some places where the logic is not smooth. For example, on the first night at the manor, I think it is reasonable to arrange a first time here, otherwise there will be too many flaws (probably because I have read too many spy stories) and it will be more dangerous. For another example, I think it was a bit hasty for Sri Lanka to develop feelings for the female protagonist when she was a student. But it doesn't matter, there are a thousand Harry Potters for a thousand readers! My favorite part of the extra chapters is the soup part, but unfortunately the length is too short and I still don't get enough of it. But the character interaction in this one is really my favorite. The writing is also relaxed. If the author opens up Tomb, I will definitely come and watch.

I've finished reading it. The extra chapter almost gives every character a perfect ending. Those regrettable extra chapters are all completed. You may feel a little breathless after reading the first 300 chapters of the main plot. The heroine licks the protagonist group like a lick. No matter what they do, the heroine will forgive them and repair the main plot, because the heroine and Snee Pu's emotional line is really interesting, so I haven't quit it. After seeing that the relationship with the protagonist group is less, it is really interesting. There are many comments about it. People have been scolding me because of this incident. Just skip those few pictures. If you see the licking one, just skip it. All in all, this book is still very interesting [Adoration]

I read this book back and forth five or six times from beginning to end. It was also the first book that I evaluated so seriously. After reading this book, I found HP books of the same type to be boring for a long time. The mission restoration in the book is very appropriate, the relationship between Ollie and Snape comes naturally, and the roses seem to be the arrangement of fate. The Si Jiao here is the one in the original work who buries himself under a cold and mean mask. During the seven years with the heroine, the two slowly expressed their feelings for each other. The two also had various inappropriate ideas about the future, their views on others, and their ages, but the various experiences they experienced together allowed them to accept each other.

The most outstanding part of the text of this book is Severus. It fits the original work, every change is very reasonable, and there is basically no OOC. The author's interpretation of Severus is very consistent with the original work. Although he is alone, not understood and liked by others, and the final ending is difficult to reconcile, he is proud. What he needs is not pity and love, but respect and recognition, unswerving choice and trust. His salvation is not superficial in giving him a person who loves him, but in truly identifying with him and allowing him to regain his self-worth and self-salvation. Ollie is also a very good person, gentle and tolerant, otherwise she would not let Professor Snape change herself. The heroine has grown up a lot later, and her personality is more decisive, and she will not be hindered by useless kindness in making decisions. He no longer protects them under his wings just because they are friends, and takes care of everything on his own. Stop accommodating them and don't care if conflicts arise. The heroine's kindness has grown. But I was a little dissatisfied with the heroine in the early stages. At the beginning, the heroine was isolated and alienated by the trio because of differences. During this period, the heroine secretly still cared about them even more than before. The two sides did not pay equal attention. After the truth was revealed, the heroine easily forgave them. They did not realize that their actions would bring harm to their friends. Later, the heroine spent almost all her time changing the ending of the original work's death. Although the professor would urge the heroine to grow and they would become better together, the heroine's focus was not on herself, which I didn't like. But everyone's choice is different. I don't understand but respect it. There are two or three outstanding supporting characters, such as the Muggle Professor, Myrtle, etc. Compared with the original work, they have more words here, showing their beauty and becoming more outstanding. Except for Sirius, all the extras are very interesting and different. Each if-line male protagonist has his own advantages, such as his older brother Fred, his childhood sweetheart Tom Riddle, and his younger brother Draco. The endings are all different, but what remains the same is the love of the heroine. To quote a comment in the article, "No matter who is standing under the cherry blossom tree, everyone is beautiful" (something like this).

The author has a deep understanding of the original work, and most of the quoted content has the source marked. I can also explain it clearly and clearly, which is suitable for obsessive-compulsive disorder. There are many extras, giving the female protagonist the opportunity to parallel time and space with various male partners. The core is still the female protagonist. But this potion reselling business relies purely on the system and is purely buggy, so it seems to have been ignored. There is no industrial support and no detailed description of business progress. This most powerful potion is the most powerful because the system absorbs everything. The love line is still beautiful, and I like to see where the person is going to be.

This book is really good to read. The author's writing is slow and the emotional line is developed step by step. I think this is very good. From the emotional line, you can see Ollie's emotions and Sri Lanka's emotions, from being noticed by Sri Lanka to deliberately alienating and finally developing into Snape and his wife. They held each other's hands through the ups and downs along the way. When I first started reading, I was worried about so many chapters. , I didn't expect that I was a little reluctant to give up at the moment I finished reading it. (Of course I didn't watch the extras except for Si Jiao.) When I saw Ollie and Si Jiao confirm their relationship, I felt very happy. It felt like showing a son-in-law to my daughter. In some chapters, I would cry for them and feel lucky for them. In short, the author worked very hard. Thank you for creating such a good work.

It's great. I've read a lot of HP Sect fanfics. This is the only book that I want to read again after finishing it. It's one of the top 1. If we talk about the magical world created by Rowling, then this book is completely like a real parallel world. I can't say that other books are bad. I mean, this book, whether it is the description of the characters or the expression of emotions, Mrs. Si Jiao is so close to the original work, and the abstinence and forbearance are so good. When you read it, you are completely brought into this world, as if you have experienced it yourself. YYDS[][][]

Very good looking and trustworthy. But I think the part where the heroine is a Death Eater is really touching. I felt that if Voldemort had the face of Tom Riddle, then I would definitely want to watch him take more by force, but forget about that bald guy. But when I saw the extra, wow, I liked it so much, Voldemort even sent it back. He's also handsome, who can refuse this? Moreover, the author's writing style is very smooth, and many pitfalls have been filled in, while some others are negligible and basically have no impact on the plot. If the author didn't mention filling in the pitfalls, I wouldn't have noticed them at all. Moreover, the extras and the main plot are basically separate, and they are also very beautiful. The characters are neither particularly dark nor mythical, and the heroine is not a virgin. Although she sometimes acts impulsively, she is a Gryffindor after all. It's really good-looking, and it's also very similar. The sexy old man is really interesting, I really like it. Xiaolong is also very cute, and the extras of Xiaolong are also very interesting. Ah! ! ! And every side story is good-looking, basically he, not a bit. The side story is completely separate from the main plot, which is equivalent to a new novel with rich styles, so you can change it up. Like it very much.

The writing is really good, and you can see the care put into it in many aspects, whether it's the characterization or the continuity of the plot. It's not like some novels where the protagonists all have a wild life. It follows the previous plot and ends with a world line. The author is very fond of fans and has been laying out if lines, which is very beautiful. But I won't be reading the novel again in a short time. Because the love between the main heroine and Si Jiao is so tiring (every hug feels like the last time in my life), forgive me for being superficial, but I really feel tired for the heroine. But it's still very sweet and beautiful [send heart][send heart][send heart]

This is one of the best HP fan fiction books I've read so far, so you can read it with confidence! I didn't watch the extras because I found that I couldn't stand Tom's extras… Mainly because I've always been a little biased against many Slytherins. . (College discrimination?) In fact, I hated Snake Academy at first, especially the three main characters: Xiaolong, Si Jiao, and Lu Dan. But I can accept everything except Tom in this book (actually, I think I don't like braised eggs, and sometimes I think Tom is okay, mainly because the actors are so handsome), but I like the original CP the most, and I really like their interaction. In fact, when I first watched it, I still had a make-do mentality. I didn't expect it to be so good. I couldn't even stop at all. As long as I didn't read it, I would think of Soo in everything I did. I always felt like something was blocking my heart and my chest felt tight. I was almost out of breath two days ago (I would like to remind you to relax properly, take rest, and not be addicted to the virtual world in the novel). I also had a severe withdrawal reaction after reading it. Summary: It's good to watch, you can optionally skip the extras according to your preference! Also: Are there any good HP fans? Don't be too embarrassed, don't want to beautify your character

Madam is so wonderful! ! ! This is the best fanfic I've ever seen! ! ! She didn't have any water in more than 1,000 chapters! ! The seven-year plot is completely online - I don't understand why there are so many discordant voices in the comment section sometimes. I really didn't realize there was any pitfall! The main text CP is particularly good, and it's really not OOC at all! Extra cp, Tom Riddle looks really handsome, 12 all O's is awesome! ! Draco too! All in all, it is so exciting. With more than 1,000 chapters, I feel like I haven't read enough. You know, such a long novel is very stressful, but I feel very reluctant to leave it after finishing it. I will follow you! ! The extras are so exciting and interesting that you can start another book~~

I first read the author's Draco fanfic on another platform, and then came back to read this one, and found that it is not OOC. Although the story direction is very different, and the heroine setting is also different, it is also very interesting. [Like] The heroine in this book has a stronger aura and is deeply involved in the HP plot, so most of the time it is the heroine > Harry. The emotional line is mainly about the development and sublimation of the two people in crisis. The description after being together is a little shorter, and it is too full of meaning [laughing and crying] The author has an advantage that can be regarded as a shortcoming, that is, the if line of the extra chapter is very well written. Every time I read the book and write a review, I have to be in a trance to confirm who is the male protagonist [facepalm] I personally think that the MVP of this extra chapter is Harry [OK]

The author's writing is very good, and the original plot is also very exciting. There is basically no obvious OOC in the characters. The little heroine Ollie is really a very good child, which makes people feel distressed (you may even feel that she is being treated badly by Snape) (after all, this road is too twists and turns). The author also satisfies the wishes of readers who are addicted to other CPs and wrote a large number of extra if lines for other characters. Although the length is short and the plot is omitted, it is still exciting. Comments involving spoilers are placed below