HP: Miss Ollivander's Wand Business

First of all, the characters of this book are very likeable. The heroine is strong and has her own set of rules for dealing with people. She has changed many things but some things have not changed. If you don't like threesomes, this book is worth reading. But if you like threesomes, or you like Dumbledore, then take a detour and don't feel uncomfortable reading this book. From the beginning when Hermione is tricked into Slytherin by the heroine, the book begins to move like an unbridled wild horse, out of control, from Harry becoming the Seeker to the cancellation of the Quidditch Academy competition; from Dumbledore's Legilimency to the death of Fawkes; the Weasley twins' pranks and night walks, and finally the Weasley twins dropping out of school; the heroine is like an outsider, disturbing the pool of water, but also like a fish in the water, profiting from the chaos. I don't deny that the heroine has a kind side. She helped the werewolf, gave Ron a job, and taught others a lot of things. But at the same time, she was cold-blooded, unwilling to act early without any benefit, and she was a standard Slytherin. I really like what the author said about good and evil in the article. There is not much difference between them. It's just that one party blatantly damages the interests of the other party for the sake of profit. I personally don't like this book very much. I fell in love with the original novel. To a certain extent, the author's book does make up for some regrets, or the author has a completely new interpretation of those regrets. There was a sentence that always made me cry: "One runs towards the light without hesitation, and one has no choice but to fall into the darkness." This sentence talks about Harry and Draco. In this book, Harry no longer runs toward the light without hesitation. He is heartbroken by Gryffindor. He works hard and wants to be transferred to Slytherin. Draco no longer has no choice but to fall into the darkness. Zosha greatly reduces Voldemort's power while fighting for her wand business to make money. As for Professor Dumbledore, in the original work, he has always been a tall image and a representative of great love. Although he also has a cold-blooded side, "for the greater good", from the moment he died, his flaws were not concealed, and he was the greatest white wizard. This book has a new understanding. He can be counted among the villains. Naturally, his plan did not come true. His reputation plummeted. The author even wrote about his romantic relationship with Greengawa. That is not the GG I like. AD, my favorite GGAD is always the one "My love and I both died in a high tower, and our hearts are hidden in midsummer." It doesn't necessarily have to be a sad ending, but it must be that sincere feeling, sincere and unadulterated with anything, with a touch of sadness, the helplessness of being destined to be the enemy's sadness. There are too many typos and omissions that seriously affect reading. The description of some original characters can be considered insulting. Maybe it can be said that the author has his own ideas, but everything I like is ruined. The heroine is very powerful, but being too powerful is not a good thing. She has no respect for her superiors, and she only seeks profit. Sometimes I really wonder whether I am looking at a Harry Potter fan on campus, or a portrayal of human nature. It is not that the heroine is not good. "The world is bustling, everyone is here for profit; the world is full of chaos. "Everything is for profit." But that is a school. When the new students are only 11 years old, you can't ask them to know too much about the world. In fact, as long as they don't make principled mistakes, children playing around will be just children playing no matter how much they go too far. You have to give the children a way back. It's not that the heroine can infinitely magnify other people's mistakes.

I want CP, it's Draco, I want CP, I want CP, I want CP

Why do you only have three comments among more than 1,000 chapters?

What a hearty red hour

You can watch it for fun, don't take it too seriously, what should I say? It is completely based on the Harry Potter world, and writes some content that is not related to the original world of Harry Potter. All members are OOC, but there are no fanfics recently, and he follows a lot, so I will reluctantly take a look [face covering] [face covering]

Especially the one above revealed the cold reality! I think it would be better if Dumbledore and Grindelwald split up! Grindelwald sacrificed his whole life for Dumbledore

Oh my god, I finally have a novel to get close to the protagonists and become good friends with Harry Potter. It's really not easy. It's really well written. Oh, I believe that when you become the dean of a college, you will not think or speak ill of your own students, and Graffindor is not particularly ununited, right? As a warrior, how can he be ununited? It's not that bad. Even if there is no unity, it's not so bad that the dean of his own college can talk about this college. No, this can't be done.

The writing is good, but I think I'm married. Haha, a time traveler always blushes in front of a child

Besides hurting the Weasley twins all the time, why are you so malicious towards the twins?

The comment area is polarizing. Personally, I think it's pretty but too Black Lion House. I like the heroine's character very much (personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it).

In fact, the author's writing style is pretty good, just better than Black Gryffindor and Dumbledore , the Weasley twins, I can't quite accept this, and the author has described some content that can be regarded as school violence::>_<:: So I can't quite accept it after reading half of it, okay, less than half. If this wasn't a fanfic, it would be a good article, but it is, so some characters are OOC. The author is a good author, but well, I can't quite stomach it. But if you don't like Dumbledore or the Weasley twins, this one is still recommended (the author is a very good author, and it is rare to see so many people following him, and he is a good cook, so although I don't like this kind of thing, I still give it a relatively high score! The above are personal opinions, for reference only. Please, don't criticize me, I have no ill intentions (*>.<*)) After reading everyone's comments, I found that the author may have so many out of sheer love. How many times can I eat this kind of free and abundant food? The author has his own unique insights into this book, but it is really obvious that the black Gryffindor is black. Even the head of Gryffindor is black. I don't know what Professor McGonagall has done wrong. O_o

It was fun to see a different version of Hogwarts Listening to what the author said, I also discovered something strange. The reason why Harry Potter was able to kill Voldemort when he was a baby was because his mother put a counterattack spell on him. What does this have to do with Harry Potter? Besides, could Voldemort really be killed by the backlash so easily? I don't think so

It's officially a hearty Akaashi!

This book is really good, but it's a little bit dark about the Weasley twins. If you mind, don't read it, but I really recommend it.

I thought this novel would be short, but it turns out there are only a few reviews for over a thousand chapters. No wonder there are no reviews yet.

When I saw Chapter 79, I paid attention to the author, and I thought the concept and writing were very good. Harry Potter novels I have read before. Any main character befriends Harry Potter. Go on an adventure. The principal used Legilimency magic without his consent, which was very disrespectful. That was a steal and I was excited to see it. I like this book very much.

I think it's very interesting. I especially like to read books where the heroine is a bit bad. Moreover, this book has many chapters. The book I was looking for before was gone after a while. It was too boring to find other books after reading it. Of course, this book definitely has some shortcomings. Those who prefer not to deviate from the original work and don't want the person who is a good person in the original work to be described as a villain in this book should try not to fall into the trap. Of course, if you like to read cool articles, you can also come in. Black Gryffindor of course

The CP must be Draco! ! ! !

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

You could pay more attention to the details There are a lot of typos. Madam, please pay attention.

Overall, it's pretty good. However, throughout the article, everything is said by xxx. You can consider omitting it and putting the prompt in the middle or replacing it with some words that also mean saying it.

A more alternative Harry Potter fanfic that can solve the boring problem

It's a good book, but the content is about villains, which is contrary to the praise of Harry written in the original book. Book lovers who like the original book should be careful.

I have read a lot of Harry Potter fan fiction, and this one was refreshing to me.

The idea is really novel. I haven't seen anything similar in other articles. I give the author a thumbs up. It's just too much to read. I really can't finish it. I've read more than 700 chapters. I'll find time to continue reading later. Cheers [Blow kiss]

Quite like it. There are many private settings, which can be said to be completely opposite to the original work, but I personally like it quite a lot. Originally, fan fiction is about using your imagination to write whatever you want.

By the way, can Draco's name be unified? Now Draco, now Draco

The writing is very good, why is the score so low😢

In fact, it's not that good, but I was inexplicably commented by the original author's party, saying that the self-designed version was not as good as the original work. The Minister of Magic thought that the self-designed version was not as good as the original work. I was shocked (I just prefer to browse the comment section, and then I saw it), so I decided to give it 5 stars. This is my second or third time reading it. The first time I read it, it was fine. The second time I read it, I didn't read much and gave up.

Come on, author, although I don't know why the score is so low, it will definitely be high in the future [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]