Heaven Denied

After reading it later, I felt that the author was genuine. The writing on the subject of cultivating immortals is not bad, although some of the content in the middle is a bit abrupt, and the early combat power is not easy to understand. But when you see the back, it smells really good! The fighting power is not broken, and the protagonist is not useless. From time to time, the male and female protagonists are given some candies, which is still very sweet, and the subsequent cultivation is also easy to understand. Especially the author's geographical division of the entire world of immortality. The protagonist's travels seemed to take me on adventures with him. The internal forces of each major sect are complicated. There are sect leaders and elders and ancestors behind them. Everyone is for their own selfish desires. The storyline can be said to be touching. The demon clan in the northern domain, the Central Plains of the human race in the south of the Yangtze River, the west boundary in the east sea, in this world of immortality, major sects are entrenched, and with the actions of the protagonist, these originally unfamiliar world forces suddenly become clear and connected like a thread. Such a territory has emerged in my mind, and the locations of the various forces are also very clear. The protagonist can escape from the demon defense and increase his cultivation level every time. I can't be unhappy. I hope more and more people will like this book, and they will definitely like it more and more after reading a hundred chapters.

I can write something a little more sadistic later on, but I'm tired of ordinary fantasy [laughing]

I still like this book very much, but I feel that the title and content of the book are not suitable, because the plot does not describe much about the emotions of the two people, but for some reason there is a magic that drives me to read and makes me want to stop. Qin Qin and Wu Ye Ning can be said to have truly experienced the weakness of mortals, so they are both good and evil. They know that weakness is the original sin, so they work hard to become stronger, but they are also people with a bottom line. Qin Qin's bottom line is Wu Ye Ning, while Wu Ye Ning's bottom line is her parents and Qin Qin, and I just like them like this. And I should have been attracted by the title of the book, indulged in the plot, admired the two, and looked forward to the follow-up, and what followed should be the end of the story of the two. But this book violates Tomato's non-popular criteria: 1) it doesn't follow the trend, 2) it's not sweet (but I think it's pretty good), 3) it's unpleasant, 4) it's not brainless, and 5) it's not fast-paced (there should be a few more), so the rating is low.

Looks good, I wish the punishment was more severe

The character change of the little lady is well written and the setting is quite interesting.

Author, I think you have a manuscript saved. Is it okay to publish three chapters a week?

After reading Chapter 8, I feel like I can become a god if I keep going. It is really the life of a mortal in the world of immortality. In the past, what we have seen is that from the perspective of an "immortal", we despise mortals and take human life lightly. This perspective is very unique, real and deep to the core, nb

Actually, yes, the subject matter of this novel is quite good, and the plot is coherent. I guess it's because the official website doesn't promote it.

Please update it quickly and let the male protagonist have some strength. He has been bullied by others. I hope he can be worthy of the eldest lady.

It looks good, but I suggest that the male protagonist's character be stronger. After all, he is also a person with great opportunities.