Don't Call It Heaven

After reading it later, I felt that the author was genuine. The writing on the subject of cultivating immortals is not bad, although some of the content in the middle is a bit abrupt, and the early combat power is not easy to understand. But when you see the back, it smells really good! The fighting power is not broken, and the protagonist is not useless. From time to time, the male and female protagonists are given some candies, which is still very sweet, and the subsequent cultivation is also easy to understand. Especially the author's geographical division of the entire world of immortality. The protagonist's travels seemed to take me on adventures with him. The internal forces of each major sect are complicated. There are sect leaders and elders and ancestors behind them. Everyone is for their own selfish desires. The storyline can be said to be touching. The demon clan in the northern domain, the Central Plains of the human race in the south of the Yangtze River, the west boundary in the east sea, in this world of immortality, major sects are entrenched, and with the actions of the protagonist, these originally unfamiliar world forces suddenly become clear and connected like a thread. Such a territory has emerged in my mind, and the locations of the various forces are also very clear. The protagonist can escape from the demon defense and increase his cultivation level every time. I can't be unhappy. I hope more and more people will like this book, and they will definitely like it more and more after reading a hundred chapters.

I can write something a little more sadistic later on, but I'm tired of ordinary fantasy [laughing]

I still like this book very much, but I feel that the title and content of the book are not suitable, because the plot does not describe much about the emotions of the two people, but for some reason there is a magic that drives me to read and makes me want to stop. Qin Qin and Wu Ye Ning can be said to have truly experienced the weakness of mortals, so they are both good and evil. They know that weakness is the original sin, so they work hard to become stronger, but they are also people with a bottom line. Qin Qin's bottom line is Wu Ye Ning, while Wu Ye Ning's bottom line is her parents and Qin Qin, and I just like them like this. And I should have been attracted by the title of the book, indulged in the plot, admired the two, and looked forward to the follow-up, and what followed should be the end of the story of the two. But this book violates Tomato's non-popular criteria: 1) it doesn't follow the trend, 2) it's not sweet (but I think it's pretty good), 3) it's unpleasant, 4) it's not brainless, and 5) it's not fast-paced (there should be a few more), so the rating is low.

Looks good, I wish the punishment was more severe

After reading Chapter 8, I feel like I can become a god if I keep going. It is really the life of a mortal in the world of immortality. In the past, what we have seen is that from the perspective of an "immortal", we despise mortals and take human life lightly. This perspective is very unique, real and deep to the core, nb

Author, I think you have a manuscript saved. Is it okay to publish three chapters a week?

The character change of the little lady is well written and the setting is quite interesting.

It looks good, but I suggest that the male protagonist's character be stronger. After all, he is also a person with great opportunities.

Please update it quickly and let the male protagonist have some strength. He has been bullied by others. I hope he can be worthy of the eldest lady.

Actually, yes, the subject matter of this novel is quite good, and the plot is coherent. I guess it's because the official website doesn't promote it.

Lamo is so good to watch, why is no one watching it? In terms of plot, the span from the technological planet to the modern world is too high, and it seems to be divorced from the original plot, but it is well written and has clear logic.

Don't interrupt the update. You can speed up the pace. You can also write a rough ending. Let the male protagonist and the female protagonist be together and then retire to live a life. Just please don't interrupt the update like this.

It's really good-looking. It's the first time I've seen this kind of subject. It's a little different from previous villain stories, but this difference has also become the highlight of this book, because what the protagonist does is really in line with his current situation, and he really has three views. Another highlight is the protagonist and the heroine. It's better to experience the fun by yourself.

The author has written down the realms, but I don't know which one is better than which one. Well written and very interesting

The writing is quite good, enough to beat many novels.

It's very appetizing, but the rating is so low.

I've always wanted to see the moon from your window

It's okay, I can watch it if there is no ambiguity about a single woman

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Except for the protagonist, all the protagonists

I quite like it, and the world view is great. I only have one request: please don't update it.

Who can read this more? If the foreigner next door saw it and thought I looked down on it, here is another chapter, one for each person. Huh? Have a day off today?

It's pretty good. I really like the plot. I hope Xiao Qinzi can be more aggressive in the later stage. Now I feel like my strength is always outweighed by the eldest lady, but most of the time it's Xiao Qinzi who protects the eldest lady. I don't quite understand it. By the way, I really like the early tone. I want to see how the eldest lady trains Xiao Qinzi [I'm about to cry], why he keeps rewarding the prince but not Xiao Qinzi [I'm about to cry]

The characters are well drawn, and the world setting is also well written, but the updates are too slow. After reading the book for so many years, this is the first time I write a book review, because the author is really lazy, and I can't stand it anymore. I will tell you if it can be updated, or not... I will continue to urge you and me to death.

The golden finger of this novel is the male protagonist, but it is the female protagonist who really gets the script. The plot is developed from the perspective of the protagonist's younger brother. It is unconventional and innovative. So far, the viewing experience is okay. The relationship between the master and the servant is well described. The male protagonist is the kind of person who is struggling to develop. He has no talents or old routines for rapid upgrades. Those who want to watch the killings can avoid lightning.

The update is too slow [angry] [angry] [angry] When you update to chapter 100, I will come back to comment.

See where the shadow is, what's going on? This kind of heaven-defying clone really persuades you to quit and see you again in the world.

It's really good

The protagonist also drinks alcohol, which is awesome

This book is very nice [laughing evilly][laughing evilly]