Refining the Divine Pill, Controlling the Divine Beast! the Good-For-Nothing Mother Has Space, She Can Take Her Baby to Practice Immortality and Go to Heaven

The content of the book is rich and colorful, I like it very much. It's just that sometimes the sentences are incoherent. I hope it will become smoother in the future.

The novel is okay, the plot is compact, the plot is exciting, the female protagonist is domineering, and the male protagonist escorts her all the way. There are many exciting points, and I haven't skipped a chapter. The only flaw is that the character names are a bit convoluted, not popular, I can't remember them, and it's annoying [face-covering][face-covering][face-covering][face-covering]

It's the least ridiculous fantasy novel I've ever read. The plot is complete. The male and female protagonists, including the children, have equal roles. There's no nonsense or lagging plot or wording, which is great.

The plot of the story is compact, the relationship between the male and female protagonists is very stable, the identities of the male protagonist and the child are both reasonably explained, the female protagonist does not seem to be introduced in detail, the plot of each character in the story is exciting, and the ending is satisfactory.

This book is very nice. The female protagonist is also very good. There is also a space where the male protagonist also has a super powerful son. His daughter is quite obedient. I suggest you read it. It's very interesting.

It is a good work. The novel concept is novel and the plot is okay. It could have been given five stars. However, there are too many wrong words and sentences in the novel, which changes the original meaning and makes a sentence incomprehensible. Some characters in the novel are missing after being written, such as the two later time-travelers, the architect of the heroine, Yi Dexi, and Lian Sheng. After the death of his brother Lian Sheng who pretended to be him, he was no longer mentioned. There are still some holes that have not been filled. How did the original owner get pregnant? It is said to be a drop of blood of the male protagonist. The specific reason why this drop of blood was used by the original owner is not mentioned. There is also the original owner's family. Apart from plotting against a cousin Shu Jixiang and then burning down the Shu family's house, there is nothing. Her parents are not known whether they are still alive or not. The person who harmed her only dealt with Shu Jixiang. I don't know where the others went. But overall it is still a good work. I hope the shortcomings can be improved in the next work.

Very pretty, especially the male and female protagonists

How can I put it, the story is smooth as a whole, there is nothing particularly outstanding, but it is okay. There are many characters, and there are too many characterizations of each person in the early stage, but there is no explanation at the end. Maybe I have forgotten the people in front of me by the end of the writing [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]

Not bad. The female major is not upgraded from the traditional way. The story is novel.

The content of this book is super exciting and rich. The relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is very touching. The experiences between the male protagonist and the female protagonist are also very exciting and rich. The male protagonist and the female protagonist's children are also very good and their identities are very powerful. The male protagonist's identity is also very powerful. The female protagonist is also very good. Through her own efforts, she became the God Emperor. In the end, the family lived a happy life, and the ending is also very good. This book is worth reading.

It looks good. It has a family of monsters, there is space, and the utilization rate is very high. The contracted beasts are also very powerful. There is no hindrance, but the son is too out-of-touch and playful. Not to mention he is the only one that is a little bit behind. The search for the heart is smooth, there are no stumbling blocks, but there are two characters who only appear, and there is no content, which makes people confused.

I finally saw an article naming a female protagonist with a high level of education.

It's beautiful, exciting, not cruel, and a very harmonious life.

It's very interesting to watch. The relationship between the male and female protagonists progresses very naturally. There is no entanglement. It would be better to do things faster and more accurately. Don't delay.

A very good novel with a heroine and a strong and abusive male protagonist who dotes on his wife.

It's a very good book. The story is coherent and well-organized. The ending is a bit urgent. It would be even better if there is an extra chapter!

I like it very much, it's unique. This is the first time I have seen such a novel. I just want to feel happy when I read the book. At least this book is not upsetting. I also like reading stories about sensible children. From the very beginning when I had a little baby, I kept writing until it grew up. Not many can write like this.

It's a good novel, the plot is strange and unconventional. Only by enduring hardship can one become a master. People must be upright, never forget their original intentions, have clear goals and be perseverant. If greed is insufficient, evil will be rewarded. The heroine's external dimension and superpowers show that she is not an ordinary person, but the heroine still works hard to practice and rarely relies on external forces. The male protagonist was betrayed by the people around him, but after meeting the female protagonist, luck increased and he gradually regained his strength. A family of four supports each other and works together to reach the top.

It looks good, nothing like White Lotus Green Tea. The male protagonist is with you all the way, but the upgrade is not so orthodox. You don't have to work hard to find resources. It's too easy to upgrade by eating spiritual fruits.

It's a very good book. I read it without skipping chapters. I recommend it [laughs] [laughs] The ending is perfect. I like it very much.

Very exciting, highly recommended, highly recommended

Different wonderful, different styles are very popular

This book is very well written and I am very satisfied

It's so beautiful. I like the perfect ending.

"Go to your heart first." Perfect ending. The world is peaceful, everyone is well, and nature is at ease.

It's so beautiful, the storyline is clear and the ending is perfect. Highly recommended.

It looks good, don't be sloppy, keep up the good work.

Very nice, very sweet, very exciting, the article is very fresh and very good [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

Yes, it's a bit miraculous, so keep reading. Hope it gets better and better.

It's really good and wonderful! The ending is perfect again!