It's your first time writing. If you have any comments, be sure to put them forward and I will revise them.
[Fan] [Follow the plot] [There will be some original plots] [Not a cool article]
The writing is poor, I'm sorry
The first season mainly focuses on revisiting the plot, and it is not very different from the original work.
From the beginning of Chapter 70 of the Flame Tribe plot to the beginning of the second season, it is a linkage plot
Haoping was brought to the world of the Mecha Beast God by the system, but the result was that he told me that he had found the wrong person...
There is no way, even if you come here, you can't go back, but fortunately, the system gave some good things before leaving. Not only did it arrange a reasonable identity to become the protagonist Yanyu's brother Yanping, it also arranged a normal, upgraded, and ultimate mecha (the latter two were not activated). Then the protagonist also learned that except for the disappeared In addition to the Golden Holy Grail, there is another thing called the Ancient Core that is currently missing. Not only did he experience a series of outrageous situations, but he also came into contact with someone he knew, but it was almost impossible to appear here. Only then did he realize that the world of the Mecha Beast God did not seem to be that simple...
(PS: The system will only appear at the beginning, and it will disappear after giving away the identity and mecha, and the order of the protagonist's mecha appearing is the same as in the original work)
Reader comments
It's not too much to give yourself five stars [laughing evilly]
It looks very good. It would feel better if Yanping's ultimate mecha was based on a Chinese dragon and if Yanping and Danya were together in the end.
The novel is very nice
It's good, I like it. I haven't read it yet, but I like what you wrote.
It's not too much to give yourself five stars [laughing evilly]
It looks very good. It would feel better if Yanping's ultimate mecha was based on a Chinese dragon and if Yanping and Danya were together in the end.
The novel is very nice
It's good, I like it. I haven't read it yet, but I like what you wrote.