Evergreen: I Use Luck to Create a Clan of Immortals

What we are saying is that when commenting on the first shot, you still have to do it yourself.

Come on, author! Will there be civil strife in the protagonist's family? For example, the protagonist's younger brother misunderstands that the protagonist has entered the devil's path, and then falls in love and kills each other [sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh] Of course, don't worry about it, I just said it casually [laughing]

It looks okay, developing steadily, don't arrange enemies with more than 2 realms. Polish and polish more. Don't be like the other books about family stories. They start off well, but suddenly a super-character comes and wipes out the family with a slap. The protagonist becomes a homeless man and calls it a family story.

The content is okay, but the writing is a bit like Dynasty Literature, and it has the flavor of Heavenly Kingdom Literature. It is too good for everyone, but the cruelty of peaceful cultivation of immortality is not written out.

Why do I feel like no one is reading it? What I wrote is still okay.

It's not enough to watch at all

It felt a bit outrageous, forget it, I gave up, but the five-star rating gave me a good book. Unfortunately, I felt that the aesthetics were a bit conflicting. This is my personal reason. Anyway, cheers for the author. From the perspective of me who has been reading novels for more than ten years, the writing style of this book is quite green. However, the subject matter is very novel and it is already very good. Anyway, cheers for the author.

The writing is okay, quite good, the details of the characters are well portrayed, and the writing is not lifelike, but vivid and vivid. I hope the author can keep writing! Come on! ! !

What I like is this kind of family culture of managing talents, practicing hard and grabbing resources. Good luck

Come on, author, just ignore the trolls.

The world view is grand, but it develops too fast, and many plots have been passed over, making it a bit general.

Very well written, good luck to the author. Tomato requires 200,000 words to get a rating, and it is very low at the beginning. The rating will gradually go up. 6.7 Means nothing.

The novel is very good, but the author is not good, right (short and weak) [Shocked] @ Yixing

A very good book, very comprehensive, but I don't know if it is a novel with no female protagonists, a single female protagonist, or multiple female protagonists.

Not bad, it's something I like about the Xiuxian family. Single, none, multiple girls?

It's very interesting, good luck to the author

The writing is very good, family flow should be developed, and the family should be developed.

Not bad, cheers for the author.

Encourage me. I'm afraid of eunuchs.

Sister-in-law must be working very hard, right?

It all looks okay, pretty good The author has not written this book yet

The details are clear and the scene is clear.

Very good. I like watching it. Can I still write it (╥_╥)

Well written and very clear setting

Don't cut it, I love to watch and love you [salute]

I really like this subject matter, but it feels a little bit a bit unsmooth when I read it. I'm the author, okay?

The content is quite rich and very interesting👀👀👀👀

Good looking, come on author

I want to like the author

, Work hard, don't worry about those people