I'm a Village Girl, What's Wrong with Having a System for Cultivating Immortals?

I think it's pretty good, it looks a bit funny. Although the three apprentices are more useless than the other, especially the eldest apprentice and the second apprentice, what kind of garbage are they, but when I think about a weasel becoming a spirit and an evil wind becoming a spirit, I think this character design is very reasonable. The heroine is not submissive, nor is she a big heroine. She is just very comfortable and generally positive. I like her anyway. Goldfinger is not the outrageous type, but can you change the way the heroine makes a fuss every time she draws a lottery? Let's talk about it. Each of the four masters and apprentices is an expert. The heroine is always talking and making noises. Is it reasonable that no one notices something is wrong? I'm still looking forward to it. Will the male protagonist be able to communicate via voicemail later? I kind of want to see them fall in love [laughing and crying]

When will the Immortal Lord wake up and protect his little wife?

The subject matter is quite good, but the apprentice is a little worried. The heroine is busy and the apprentice is still looking for trouble. The heroine is very perseverant and can persevere. It is also a combination of circumstances that prevents the apprentice from saying hurtful words. Fortunately, everyone has what they need. Otherwise, the heroine may have left early. If you are not interested in reading, you can read it...

Great work for the author, working hard to update, I'm optimistic about you [please take a closer look]

Very nice, cheers author

It's an interesting little story. The female protagonist is lucky, and the male protagonist is a self-defeating tool, but he's a pretty cute tool. Except for the third child, the rest of the disciples are not worried, especially the second child, who is a troublemaker. Elder Tie and the second child in the sect are almost a pair. They all rely on imagination to deal with the sect leader, and then the sect leader becomes a bit of a loser and has the same virtues as the boss. But the heroine is great. She has the mentality of "if you are poor, you can be alone, and if you are rich, you can help the world." She works hard little by little, helping people around her with small things, and then gradually accumulates wealth, opens a shop, runs a school, and establishes a sect. It just didn't write the story of the male protagonist waking up and the two of them wreaking havoc on the world together. It should be very interesting.

After reading Chapter 35, the second apprentice is still picking on the heroine. I still prefer to read stories about strong women [face covering] Although the heroine said that taking care of people was profitable, they also benefited. Moreover, they chose the person themselves, and the heroine did not beg for nothing to get married. As a result, the wedding was not taken seriously, and living expenses were not provided. In the beginning, the girl paid for it out of her own pocket. Every time the second apprentice came back, he would find fault with me. I was so angry and aggrieved [I almost cried]

This book is really interesting to write, and then the second apprentice is a bit annoying [rolls eyes] [rolls eyes], and the male protagonist is a bit love-minded. [Laughing and crying] [Laughing and crying] Dear author, keep up the good work! Update soon, update soon. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

I admire the male protagonist until the finale, but I like it

I really like it, it's lighthearted and funny, but I'm really annoyed by this second junior brother. When the male protagonist wakes up, he immediately beats him up.

It's very interesting and funny. I hope the author will keep up the good work and not write too much in the future.

Yes, the heroine has a big gold finger, but she doesn't like the second apprentice...

It's not easy to find such a good-looking book, but it's not finished [crying][crying][crying][crying] The heroine is so wise, gentle, and thoughtful, and it's really cool to give Erya and the others some pointers. The male protagonist is also so cute, he has the feeling of a tsundere and a naughty young man, so cool [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] Please give me more encouragement [Adoration][Adoration]

One drags three, there is a powerful person in the family but he is seriously injured, and there are three apprentices who are not human, but each one is more unreliable than the last. They only ask for external help, and find a little girl who knows nothing to celebrate (actually there is a system for becoming an immortal). They are hugged at home and outside, and they are full of blessings.

It's nice, but the ending is too sudden.

It was the first time I saw a narcissistic male protagonist who lay flat until the ending. He really lay flat until the ending and learned to walk.

It's just that the attitudes of the apprentices in the early stages were off-putting, but the rest were pretty good.

It feels like a steady flow of water. Quite peaceful. Why is it suddenly gone! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh it's so annoying. This kind of plain and simple writing is quite nice.

Every time I get slapped in the face, I feel a little suffocated, and I have to be tortured beforehand. The ending is also very rushed, but the plot is relatively compact, and it's okay to eat.

It looks good but the ending is too rushed

The ending is a bit abrupt!

Half of it is gone...

It would be great to have a sequel, it feels like it has just begun!

The writing was quite good, and I was looking at the excitement when it ended on a cliffhanger! Are you too anxious? [Cover face][cover face][cover face]

Da Shen hides in the city, the writing is fluent, and each character is deeply portrayed. This is a long journey of a small character slowly going through tribulations and cultivating immortality in the busy city of the mortal world. It is very exciting!

The content of this book is exciting and exciting. I like it very much.

Everything was fine before. This ending is a bit unexpected.

This is so funny. Help, I really want to laugh:-D The career heroine and his enemies, the weak-hearted men [laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying]

Damn, it's gone like this

Really nice and short.